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Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-20-2014
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
RE: Candy Store - Serenity - 02-21-2014
Serenity blocks herself:
Petty things - she is a moral type and would find robbery petty
candy store - she looks like cotton candy >_> with black mold, maybe
under cover of night - darker wings
streetlights - star markings
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-21-2014
Safe!
RE: Candy Store - Tandavi - 02-21-2014
Tandavi blocks herself
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things --> Yearling
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- --> Afraid of the dark, owns a 'nightlight' item
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! --> Crescent blaze 'peeks' over her eyes
RE: Candy Store - Seele - 02-21-2014
Seele blocks herself-
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
We can go under the cover of night, ---> Black coat
when the streetlights are on ---> heart trinket glows
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! ---> Windows are glass, and she has a glass horn/glass hooves
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-21-2014
No, Tandavi and Seele, you are not wanted.
RE: Candy Store - Abraham - 02-21-2014
Abraham protects himself.
Hey, kid Abraham is a colt, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things Still fairly innocent and young in his actions, not criminal; but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? We can go under the cover of night Black coat, when the streetlights are on White legs, aka lights- c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-21-2014
Abraham is safe.
RE: Candy Store - Jorogumo - 02-21-2014
Jorogumo protects herself
Hey, kid, - Reference to age
We can go under the cover of night, - reference to her appearance as she is a pureblooded Friesian
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! - Refers to her eyes as windows.
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-21-2014
Safe.
RE: Candy Store - Midas - 02-22-2014
Midas and what he owns is safe.
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; - Midas can craft gold and when someone goes to steal something it is usually something of value. Such a money. Also he has a kind heart and likely wouldn't simply steal something for the sake of stealing.
But I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? - He had often thought about raiding the Basin for the sake of Asylum.
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! - Cover of night could be a color reference to his body, which is half black and half white.
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-22-2014
Midas is safe.
RE: Candy Store - Apollo - 02-22-2014
Apollo snorts. "I thought we've been through this, Shinigami. A coward even in such dark times..." Apollo protects himself.
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; - Personality reference. Apollo is a law-abiding lad and detests doing 'unlawful' things.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on - Physical reference; Apollo's black and white "night" and "streetlights"
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! - Apollo's eyes are sometimes referred to as 'windows to his soul'.
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-22-2014
Confutatis rolls her eyes, and confirms Apollo as safe.
RE: Candy Store - Confutatis - 02-24-2014
SACRE was wanted.
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling)
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
RE: Candy Store - Odd - 02-24-2014
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling)
+1| Good clue.
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
0| Just because someone is sweet and family oriented, does not mean that they cannot also be petty. They are not mutually exclusive.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
-1| Most, myself included, interpreted the streetlights as being meaningful. You have to be really careful with what you add in, when giving coat-clues!
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
0| I had to think a lot about this one. But in the end, it was a 0. His profile says that he's inquisitive, not curious, and there's nothing in this clue to suggest his inquisitive mind - just that your character is suggesting that they peek through the windows (and not that it's something he would want to do, etc).
Total of 0. Fail for me.
RE: Candy Store - Rayo - 02-24-2014
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling)
+1 | Good clue.
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
0 | This made me think of someone that held very high moral standards, not someone who was family oriented.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
-1 | Misleading clue - I would have thought that the streetlights were important. Basically, you should never have a clue where you have to specify that part of it isn't meaningful. People are going to assign it meaning. There is a difference between this misleading clue and the above fluff.
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
+1 | Personality reference.
Overall, you have 1/3 points necessary to pass. This is a FAIL for me.