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I would love you. - Illynx - 08-31-2014

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow.
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?

Was the prison cold?
Is that why it crippled your soul?




WE; 0/3
DT;1/2
HF; 1/3


RE: I would love you. - Morir - 08-31-2014

Morir blocks himself

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow. - color ref + possible bone mask or marking ref since snow usually is white, Mor is black and has gray markings and a white bone mask.
Who have you loved? - is currently meeting Beloved, is also flirting around alot.
Why have they let you go? - history ref, was banished from his homeland

Was the prison cold? - came from northern steppes, whom would be quite cold.
Is that why it crippled your soul?


RE: I would love you. - Abraham - 08-31-2014

Abraham protects himself.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow. - Color ref, black with white legs
Who have you loved? - Loves his brother & parents
Why have they let you go? - He is currently not with any of his family

Was the prison cold?
Is that why it crippled your soul?


RE: I would love you. - Illynx - 09-01-2014

Illynx smiles and shakes her head no.

"Relinquish your fears. Neither of you are desired."


RE: I would love you. - Midas - 09-01-2014

Midas is safe.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow.
– Color ref, Midas is black and white.
Who have you loved? – History ref. He’s loved Ktulu, which ties into the below statement that she left him.

Why have they let you go?

Was the prison cold? – He’s recently built a prison. And has moved to HF, which is further up north.

Is that why it crippled your soul? – He misses is family and old friends.


RE: I would love you. - Illynx - 09-01-2014

Illynx does not desire Czar Midas, or his things.

"Fret not, darling, I remember what kindnesses I am shared."


RE: I would love you. - Aurelia - 09-01-2014

Aurelia is safe.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow.
- Many say her soul is dark. A RE said her heart was blackened. She is white. [personality ref & color ref]
Who have you loved?
- has loved many.
Why have they let you go?
-she usually leaves those that 'love her' or that sh loves.
Was the prison cold?
- was a falls prisoner for a long time.
- has what many say would be 'a crippled soul', she is suicidal, also.


RE: I would love you. - Illynx - 09-01-2014

Illynx laughs, mockingly shaking her head no.

"I have no use for you."


RE: I would love you. - Gaucho - 09-02-2014

Gaucho blocks Africa.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow. : Apperance reference - Africa is a dappled. The layers could indicate gray + dappling. Also, Silas is black but covered in star-glitter.
Who have you loved? | History Ref, she has loved in the past.
Why have they let you go? History Ref: Windwalker let her go, because she lied.

Was the prison cold? History Ref | Was a prisoner of the Basin.
Is that why it crippled your soul? History Ref: They crippled her wing, which in turn could be seen as having crippled her soul.


RE: I would love you. - Illynx - 09-02-2014

Illynx shoos the desert warrior away; she does not seek the one winged one.

"We've ruined her life enough, don't you think?"


RE: I would love you. - Illynx - 09-03-2014

Two days have passed!

Illynx was seeking Ophelia.

Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.

Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme
Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.


RE: I would love you. - Odd - 09-03-2014

Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
+1| I had to think about this one, but since Tamme does specifically state her skin colour on Phi's profile, I think it works. Especially 'layered in snow'. The entirely suggests covering something black, which is what a pristine white coat would do.
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.

+1| Again, I had to think about it, because to forsake isn't just something others do to you. The line could easily have read "Why have you let them go?" which would equally have referenced her title. HOWEVER, in the end I decided yes, since it does depict one meaning.

Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme

0| This clue occurs too far in the past. I wasn't on Isilme, so I don't know anything about the Tides, and all that it says on her profile is that she was held there, but doesn't describe what it was like.

Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
0| Lines can't stack. Each clue has to be able to stand on its own. So even if I knew that 'cold prison' was a reference to Tides, I still don't think that gets you off the ground here. If it had said "Is that why the prison crippled your soul?" I would have given you the point.

2 overall, which is a fail from me.


RE: I would love you. - Rayo - 09-03-2014

Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
+1 | This, to me, is essentially the same clue. However, it is a good appearance ref.

Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.
+1 | I think this is quite a clever LT reference.

Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme
Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
0 | While that is a part of her history, ultimately I don't feel like this portion of the stealth was specific enough to single that part of her history out. Further, as a personality reference, I feel that the one portion of her history was not the sole reason for Phi turning bitter, especially as we've seen her grow and develop on Helovia. Since this was a clue that was dependent on that history, I don't think it quite passes. This clue had me going in an entirely different direction.

2/3 needed to pass, so this FAILS for me.