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A Little Distraction - Thranduil - 09-11-2014
Linseed fields on partly sunny days.
Born a Valkyrie, raised estranged
Outside Abetifi has fallen.
But baby you take my breath away.
Harm from the strong and swift.
WE :: 0/3
DT :: 0/2
AB :: 0/4
RE: A Little Distraction - Bellona - 09-11-2014
Bellona blocks herself. "My patience wears thin with your constant attempts at theft."
Linseed fields on partly sunny days. --> linseed is purple, Bellona has purple on her
Born a Valkyrie, raised estranged --> valkyries are female warriors; she alienates herself from others (prefers solitude over company)
Outside Abetifi has fallen. --> her tribe was murdered
But baby you take my breath away. --> she's beautiful
Harm from the strong and swift. --> her stats describe her as strong and swift; reference to her war-like nature
RE: A Little Distraction - Thranduil - 09-11-2014
It’s not your body I wish to conquer.”
Bellona is NOT sought.
RE: A Little Distraction - Midas - 09-12-2014
I also grow weary of these attempts. If you steal from this family, me and thee will share more than just words.
Midas is safe.
Linseed fields on partly sunny days. - Linseed oil is yellow, which can stand for the yellow/gold on his body.
Born a Valkyrie, raised estranged - Both mother and father were soldiers, Midas was born a soldier and at an early age his parents died. He was raised without a parent figure or sibling.
Outside Abetifi has fallen.- His homeland fell to war and his family became nomads
But baby you take my breath away.
Harm from the strong and swift. - Bulk and swift are two of the fighting traits that Midas has picked up from VP.
RE: A Little Distraction - Thranduil - 09-12-2014
It is not for you my riddle presses.”
Midas is NOT sought.
RE: A Little Distraction - Hototo - 09-12-2014
Onni is safe.
Linseed fields on partly sunny days.
Color: Linseed, a type of flax, is brown, partly sunny would mean clouds. Onni is a chocolate brown paint.
Born a Valkyrie, raised estranged
History: grew up mostly away from her mother.
Outside Abetifi has fallen.
History: Abetifi is located in the middle east, and Onni used to live in the Throat, a desert.
But baby you take my breath away.
Magic ref: She has wind magic
Harm from the strong and swift.
Swift buff~
RE: A Little Distraction - Thranduil - 09-12-2014
It is not the Illuminant I seek to gain.”
Onni is NOT sought.
RE: A Little Distraction - Thranduil - 09-14-2014
It’s time to reveal my riddles end.”
Cheveyo’s SUN AMULET was sought.
Although Semper is away she did so after I posted…but still not sure how all that works…
DUE TO the alliance between the BASIN and the EDGE, this stealth serves as practice only.
Linseed fields on partly sunny days.
APPEARANCE REF:: Linseed aka a type of flax=flaxen and partly sunny=partly cloudy, paint. So a flaxen paint.
Born a Valkyrie, raised estranged
HISTORY REF:: Born to be a warrior, taken away from parents early in life (“She was weaned at a young age and given to a young boy”-profile) and raised in the strange world of humans.
GENDER REF:: Valkyries are females.
Outside Abetifi has fallen.
HISTORY REF:: Outside the city Abetifi in Ghana is Khawu district (in google Khawu is in the first description and the little pop up box). Khawu is the name of her fallen rider.
But baby you take my breath away.
MAGIC REF:: “Can create an intense orb of fire that pulls in oxygen from the surrounding area... Severe oxygen deprecation within 1 m”
Harm from the strong and swift.
APPERANCE REF:: Reference to the markings painted on her. “On her left fore she wears a crooked arrow to give her and her rider strength and cause trouble for their enemies. Her hooves are adorned with arrowheads, which are believed to make the wearer swift and nimble footed. On her left hip she bears the markings of hail to bring harm to her enemies.”-profile
RE: A Little Distraction - Thranduil - 09-17-2014
Even though this is a practice stealth, I would still greatly appreciate (because I'm trying to get better) for it to be judged please. =] Thank you.
RE: A Little Distraction - Blu - 09-17-2014
Sorry Hawk! Didn't notice this one had finished ;-;
PASS
Linseed fields on partly sunny days.
APPEARANCE REF:: Linseed aka a type of flax=flaxen and partly sunny=partly cloudy, paint. So a flaxen paint.
+1| [color ref] I really like this one actually
Born a Valkyrie, raised estranged
HISTORY REF:: Born to be a warrior, taken away from parents early in life (“She was weaned at a young age and given to a young boy”-profile) and raised in the strange world of humans.
+1| [history ref] explain
GENDER REF:: Valkyries are females.
+1| [gender ref] pretty straightfroward
Outside Abetifi has fallen.
HISTORY REF:: Outside the city Abetifi in Ghana is Khawu district (in google Khawu is in the first description and the little pop up box). Khawu is the name of her fallen rider.
0| [history ref] Although all of those terms did pop up right away for me on a google search for Abetifi, to get from that weird word to the weird word Kwahu was just a bit of a stretch.
But baby you take my breath away.
MAGIC REF:: “Can create an intense orb of fire that pulls in oxygen from the surrounding area... Severe oxygen deprecation within 1 m”
+1| [magic ref] I thought this one was pretty clever
Harm from the strong and swift.
APPEARANCE REF:: Reference to the markings painted on her. “On her left fore she wears a crooked arrow to give her and her rider strength and cause trouble for their enemies. Her hooves are adorned with arrowheads, which are believed to make the wearer swift and nimble footed. On her left hip she bears the markings of hail to bring harm to her enemies.”-profile
0| [marking ref] I just didn't get that this clue had anything to do with her appearance
4/3 necessary to pass
Overall I thought you had great clues and commented as needed on the ones that didn't pass for me, keep it up!
RE: A Little Distraction - Sevin - 09-17-2014
Oh, I'm sorry as well, this one got buried quickly.
My comments are basically identical to Blu's. Especially liked the first clue.
4/3- pass :D
Cheveyo's amulet stays with Cheveyo, d/t practice stealth