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Bad Poems, By Illynx - Illynx - 09-23-2014
You're useless, I've seen it first hand,
a glacier smashing through the land.
Lit by sunlight, the ice is aurous,
a fire racing across its pores.
Hidden Falls: 0/2
Dragon's Throat: 1/2
World's Edge: 0/3
RE: Bad Poems, By Illynx - Gaucho - 09-23-2014
Gaucho defends Africa.
You're useless, I've seen it first hand African had her wing torn off in the Basin
a glacier smashing through the land. Dappling reference?
Lit by sunlight, the ice is aurous, Sun God reference/Throat Reference
a fire racing across its pores. Passive Sun Magic
RE: Bad Poems, By Illynx - Illynx - 09-25-2014
Illynx shakes her head no.
"Africa is safe for another day."
RE: Bad Poems, By Illynx - Illynx - 09-29-2014
48 hours have passed and Aurelia has not come to defend her things.
Illynx seeks one of her two Sun Amulets.
You're useless, I've seen it first hand,
- Last encounter with Aurelia was during Grimmrot's threshold, where Illynx helped her from a ravine while Aurelia stood by.
a glacier smashing through the land.
History reference; she's caused quite a stir just about everywhere ;D
Lit by sunlight, the ice is aurous,
- Potentially joining the Throat; appearance reference as she is white with golden detail.
a fire racing across its pores.
- Magic reference; Aurelia can turn her skin into fire at will.
RE: Bad Poems, By Illynx - Blu - 09-29-2014
FAIL
You're useless, I've seen it first hand,
- Last encounter with Aurelia was during Grimmrot's threshold, where Illynx helped her from a ravine while Aurelia stood by.
0| [History ref] this is a bit too thread specific without enough direction towards that thread, so I don't think most people could have deciphered this.
a glacier smashing through the land.
History reference; she's caused quite a stir just about everywhere ;D
-1| [Personality ref] this doesn't quite give enough for me to get it. I don't think I've ever seen or heard her compared to a glacier, in fact given her color, magic, and personality she's more relate-able to fire, so this threw me off completely.
Lit by sunlight, the ice is aurous,
- Potentially joining the Throat; appearance reference as she is white with golden detail.
+1| [Appearance ref] the lit by sunlight actually makes me think of her coat color the most, where as ice makes me think of a white color or a Basin member, which since that doesn't make sense with you as the thief, makes me consider someone from an icy land, someone spending a lot of time in Helovia's northern area who may not be a Basiner etc. However since the ice part just confused me, focusing on the lit by sunlight does indeed make me think Throat or glowing/golden horse.
a fire racing across its pores.
- Magic reference; Aurelia can turn her skin into fire at will.
+1| [Magic ref] pretty straightforward
1/3 necessary to pass
It was just a bit too vague and in some ways contradictory of the character you were after.
RE: Bad Poems, By Illynx - Sevin - 09-29-2014
You're useless, I've seen it first hand,
- Last encounter with Aurelia was during Grimmrot's threshold, where Illynx helped her from a ravine while Aurelia stood by.
0- a little thread specific for me, and not quite enough direction towards what that useless meant. Maybe if you had indicated something about not helping out of the ravine. Hm... not sure.
a glacier smashing through the land.
History reference; she's caused quite a stir just about everywhere ;D
0- I get the destruction reference, but glacier is just too far away from Aurelia for me, since she's very fire based and explosive.
Lit by sunlight, the ice is aurous,
- Potentially joining the Throat; appearance reference as she is white with golden detail.
+1- I wouldn't have gotten it on my own, but I think that the clues make sense enough that somebody could have made sense that ice is white and aurous is gold.
a fire racing across its pores.
- Magic reference; Aurelia can turn her skin into fire at will.
+1- magic reference
2/3- Just needed one more good one from you :(