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A good wash [Oultik's Jade Dragon to Misael] - Misael - 03-02-2016
For as organized you say you are,
you’re a sure mess.
I mean just look at you man,
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
A bit of softener would do you best,
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress!
AB: 0/3
HF: 0/3
WE: 0/4
RE: A good wash - Amaris - 03-02-2016
Amaris protects herself.
appendages and parts from the whole zoo! --> Appearance/species reference: Amaris has dragon wings, long tail, normal equine hooves.
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime, --> Appearance: Amaris has brown/caramel coloured mane and tail
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time --> Appearance: Amaris has white marking on her face
A bit of softener would do you best, --> Appearance/species: her coat is a mix of scales and normal horse hair
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress! --> Profile personality: she is guarded and reserved, doesn't let others in too quickly.
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-02-2016
Ah nice trinkets you have pretty lady, but Amaris is not sought
RE: A good wash - Prometheus - 03-02-2016
Prometheus protects himself.
For as organized you say you are,
you’re a sure mess.
- "Mess" could be a reference to his zombie appearance
I mean just look at you man,
- Gender reference
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
- Appearance reference
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
A bit of softener would do you best,
- Personality reference, not soft
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress!
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RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-02-2016
I am not foolish zombie boy, be gone. Safe
RE: A good wash - Deimos - 03-02-2016
Deimos blocks Ashamin.
For as organized you say you are, - possible Haruspex ref? profile also indicates he likes to plan
you’re a sure mess.
I mean just look at you man, - male ref
appendages and parts from the whole zoo! - lion tail/has items from animals
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime, - color ref
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time - white markings
A bit of softener would do you best,
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress! - currently having a mental breakdown XD
RE: A good wash - Archibald - 03-02-2016
Archibald blocks ISOPIA.
For as organized you say you are,
you’re a sure mess. -- Her life is hectic right now.
I mean just look at you man,
appendages and parts from the whole zoo! -- Demigod Tribrid
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime, -- Coat color
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
A bit of softener would do you best,
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress! -- Emotionless type.
RE: A good wash - Iona - 03-02-2016
Iona defends Tembovu
For as organized you say you are, -- organized an uprising in his former home, lead of the Edge
you’re a sure mess. -- might have some baggage.
I mean just look at you man, -- is a man. ;D
appendages and parts from the whole zoo! -- antelope markings, has an elephant companion and elephant magic
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime, -- shades of brown/black
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time -- has white markings
A bit of softener would do you best,
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress! -- has been a little...emotional lately.
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-02-2016
Safe.
0/4 WE
1/3 HF
1/3 AB
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-02-2016
Safe as well.
1/4 WE
1/3 HF
1/3 AB
RE: A good wash - Rikyn - 03-03-2016
Rikyn defends himself.
For as organized you say you are,
you’re a sure mess.
I mean just look at you man,
- Gender reference
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
- Lion's tail, goat's hooves, and a narwhal's horn. oh my
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
- Black Bay, with "bleached" gold markings
A bit of softener would do you best,
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress!
- He is a manly man who would rather not admit he feels things most days. ;D
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-03-2016
ah such interesting things you hold, perhaps another time, but for now, Rikyn is not sought.
RE: A good wash - Iona - 03-04-2016
Iona defends Ulrik
For as organized you say you are, -- Genius IQ, can see harmonics in his mind
you’re a sure mess.
I mean just look at you man, -- is a stallion
appendages and parts from the whole zoo! -- cloven hooves, lion tail
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime, -- often dirty
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time -- has a marking on shoulder
A bit of softener would do you best, -- sees world as black and white
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress! -- not fab with emotions
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-04-2016
I do not seek the mechanic
2/4 WE
1/3 AB
1/3 HF
RE: A good wash - Deimos - 03-04-2016
Deimos blocks Albrecht.
For as organized you say you are,
- History: His mother was 100% analytical/logical and emphasized this when raising him
you’re a sure mess.
- Phys. Desc: He’s old, skinny, dirty, arthritic, and greying
or
- Personality: Now he's jaded, surly, sarcastic, uncaring, self-serving, and aimlessness
I mean just look at you man,
- Gender: He's a he
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
- Phys. Desc: Horse body, Antelope horns, Goat beard, Lion tail
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
- Phys. Desc: He’s perpetually unkempt
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
- History: A snowstorm caused him to be disowned and exiled
A bit of softener would do you best,
- Personality: He’s a rude son of a bitch
Hiding from emotions can be quite the stress!
- Refuses to admit to, acknowledge, or discuss his past with any honesty
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-04-2016
I am not interested in any of your assholes, safe
2/4 WE
2/3 AB
1/3 HF
RE: A good wash - Misael - 03-04-2016
Outlik's Dragon was sought!
For as organized you say you are,
personality ref, on profile as organized
you’re a sure mess.
fluff
I mean just look at you man,
gender ref
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
appearance ref, goat hooves, lion tail, Antelope horns
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
appearance ref, brown and black colors
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
appearance ref, white spots
A bit of softener would do you best,
fluff
Hiding your emotions can be quite the stress!
personality ref, on profile emotions are challenging and he doesn't express them easily
RE: A good wash - Blu - 03-05-2016
PASS
For as organized you say you are,
personality ref, on profile as organized
0| [Personality ref] I don't see the word organized under personality? The only place it shows up is in his history describing the organization of a past group.
you’re a sure mess.
fluff
I mean just look at you man,
gender ref
+1| [Gender ref] Yep.
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
appearance ref, goat hooves, lion tail, Antelope horns
+1| [Appearance ref] I liked this! It could easily seem like a hybrid, but I think that you specified zoo helped.
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
appearance ref, brown and black colors
+1| [Appearance ref] Good!
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
appearance ref, white spots
0| [Appearance ref] I liked the idea behind this clue, but just reading it as this line it seems to suggest a character that likes water (wash) or has some kind of burning magic (bleach). It ties in well with the line above it, but lines need to stand alone.
A bit of softener would do you best,
fluff
Hiding your emotions can be quite the stress!
personality ref, on profile emotions are challenging and he doesn't express them easily
+1| [Personality ref] Yuppp.
4/3 necessary to pass
RE: A good wash - Tamme - 03-06-2016
For as organized you say you are,
personality ref, on profile as organized
0 | I also don't see it saying he's organized on his profile...
you’re a sure mess.
fluff
-1 | To me, this was misleading fluff. I was specifically looking for a character who was in some sort of emotional mess, dirty, pig-sty type
I mean just look at you man,
gender ref
+1 | yep
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
appearance ref, goat hooves, lion tail, Antelope horns
0 | I liked this clue, but it read more as a hybrid clue to me with the 'whole' zoo
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
appearance ref, brown and black colors
+1 | Yup!
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
appearance ref, white spots
0 | I liked this clue as well, but have the same thoughts as blu
A bit of softener would do you best,
fluff
Hiding your emotions can be quite the stress!
personality ref, on profile emotions are challenging and he doesn't express them easily
+1 | from profile
2/3 is a fail from me
RE: A good wash - smitty - 03-06-2016
For as organized you say you are,
personality ref, on profile as organized
0 | He is not called organized in his profile.
you’re a sure mess.
fluff
-1 | I agree, this fluff was misleading.
I mean just look at you man,
gender ref
+1 | yep!
appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
appearance ref, goat hooves, lion tail, Antelope horns
+1 | I liked this clue, it made me think of both hybrids and animal-smorgasbord characters.
Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
appearance ref, brown and black colors
+1 | yep!
I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
appearance ref, white spots
0 | I also like this clue, but it should stand on its own, like Blu said.
A bit of softener would do you best,
fluff
Hiding your emotions can be quite the stress!
personality ref, on profile emotions are challenging and he doesn't express them easily[/i]
+1 | yep!
3/3 is a pass from me.