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Storytime with Leana. [WIP]

Catillatio Posts: 65
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Firelight flickered across the faces of those gathered in the darkness. The fire itself was being kept in check by a firebrand- a mare who thought nothing of her power to conjure and control flames at will. It was useful- night was upon them, and in the cold of Frostfall, her talent was indispensable for the well-being of them all. One of the young foals stirred in his sleep and rolled onto his belly. Blinking his eyes open, he stared at the flickering flame for several minutes, listening to the idle, hushed chatter of the adults around him.

Eventually, the dun colt lifted his head and acid green eyes gazed at the face of his mother. He was proud to have her as a mother- she was beautiful. She knew what she was talking about, no matter what, and he trusted her without question. After all, a foal who could not trust his own dam was in dire straights. When she noticed that her young one was awake, she gazed down at him with her own sense of pride. This one... This one was the one. She could feel it. Everything about him made her tingle with excitement. True, his father had been a nobody but... well, no matter. The handsome carve of her son's face was sure to grow into a powerful force. She would make sure of it. However, at the moment- it was time for sleep, and she knew her colt was too young to begin his training. Oh, the plans she had in store for him. She almost had trouble waiting until he was weaned.

For now, though, she bent her golden head to nuzzle his cheek with the bridge of her nose. "Can't sleep, I assume?" The young colt nodded his head and then yawned, his jaws widening to their maximum potential which sent a thrill through the mother- those teeth would be trained to rip out flesh one day. The foal shook his too-large head and then rested that same head on her foreleg. "Mama, can you tell me a story?"

She seemed to think for a moment before she spoke again. "How about the story of our beginning?" A few of the other horses turned their heads and one even nickered, "That's a good one!" Another of the gathered lifted her head from where she had been dozing off, her brown ears flicking forwards and poised at attention. "I'll stay up for that." The mare controlling the fire did nothing but flicked her black tail. It didn't do more than flop against the ground, but her ears pricked so even though she looked like she was asleep, she was still listening.

Leana cleared her throat once silence had settled upon her audience and she began. "Well, long ago. Before My great, great, great grandsire was even thought of, before even the gods were birthed, There lived a strange species, and this island was their domain..."

The species called themselves Elves, and they ruled the world around them with magic. In those days, horses were nothing but beasts. Mindlessly doing as they were told to do, carrying the weight they were assigned without objection. Don't take offense, we are better than that now, and back then- we did not know any better. The important thing is, that the elves built elaborate cities and beautiful towers, and they needed us for our speed and our strength.

However, the Elves were greedy and were dissatisfied with their own power. They were capable of so much, and it was still not enough. Some say their lust for ever-greater power was their greatest weakness. Eventually, they gained a power that was too powerful- something that should never have been unearthed. It is known to us in legend as The Heart of Gods. No one alive today can honestly say they even know what the Heart of Gods looked like. We don't even know what it did... precisely. Although there are scholars that might tell you otherwise.

In anycase, the Elves quickly found that they could not control it's power, and the Heart of Gods caused a great cataclysm. It's rampage engulfed the entire island, shrouding it in mist, hiding it from the rest of the world. By the end of this event, all of the elves, old and small, male and female, vanished. To this day, we do not know what The Heart of Gods did to them, or if they will ever return. However, we do have a lot to thank the Heart of Gods for. Without it's attempted restrainers, it went on a bit of a wild spree- it's power seeped into the land, souring the water and killing the plants. It wasn't that the power was evil, it's just that it was one of those things that are too powerful. It had enough power to create a second sun, to rise whole jungles out of a desert.

It was life in itself and too much of it was being released without checks or balances. Eventually, the Heart of Gods managed to taint the entire island, and that included the animals that lived there. For whatever reason, it's power latched on to us more than any of the other species. We found we were able to... change. We could change our environments, as well as ourselves. To some varying degrees. As with all things, there were some who were utterly ridiculous and without talent, and there were those who were considered masters of their trades. Over the years, the magic altered our minds- we became intelligent. Eventually, it seeped into our DNA. Nowadays, there isn't a single one of us that isn't born with the ability to manipulate an element... or two.

With power, came strife- We were soon victims of our own intelligence and we paid dearly for it. Our population was growing, and the benders responsible for making the grass grow were too few and were not able to keep up with the demand for food. Fights broke out, horses wanted to control their own food supply, and any who threatened to steal the sustenance from others were likely to be beaten up. Our population had grown so much that even the water was becoming unsafe to drink. It was around this time, that something VERY strange happened. The Heart of Gods, which was being protected by the elemental masters- that is, horses who were particularly talented with their powers- split apart into 6 pieces. Those six pieces clung to 6 horses, each one a master of a different element. These 6 horses were eventually recognized as the first gods, for no one, dead or alive, could manipulate the elements in such masterful displays of skill as those six.

It is said that the magic... changed them even more than it did to the rest of us. They became immortal beings, embodying they're element in such ways that have never been seen since. They set out together to shape the island so that it would sustain life for all their subjects- the earth god stomped his hoof and great forests, jungles, and meadows full of rich, delicious grass grew from out of nothing. The water goddess purified the water and carved streams, lakes and marshes into the land, while the passionate fire goddess felt her subjects desired challenges and created mountains that blew molten rock into the air.

The Space God knew his kin wanted to experience the stars for themselves and so he created vast planets in deep space, and created a portal so that the space benders could choose to live where they wanted. The Air Goddess rid the air of pollution and created the floating mountains. Most of the Elvish Ruins reside atop these floating stones, and the air benders live among them peacefully. And finally, the Metal God, who was a stallion of war, decided that he wanted to create a blacksmith forge for himself and his subjects. So his land was created from all sorts of natural ores, iron, silver, copper, and gold being the most common, but there are others as well. In the many wars and battles that have passed since then, the metal god, and the metal benders, are responsible for creating the weapons we have used to shed the blood of our kin.

There is a flaw in this story. The first gods, in all their creation glory and magnificence, forgot to give their creation a name. To this day, our island has no name. It's likely the Elves had a name for it, however none of us were intelligent enough back them to remember it, and so the island is doomed to remain an unnamed mystery. There have been attempts to name it, foolhardy scholars who forego tradition in the quest to find or think up their own name for our land. However, these pretentious fools are always punished severely for their arrogance by the gods themselves. If anyone has the right to name our land, it is the gods. They seem content to let us live in a place without a name, and since this has never done anyone any harm, we're content to live without.

That is the story of our creation. Our progress as a species has been watched closely by all of the gods and goddesses who have come and gone since the first were chosen. Their power is absolute, their word is law.... We have lived much the same way we always have since the time of our beginnings.


By this time, her son was asleep, and Leana smiled. Bending her head down, she nuzzled the tuft of his forelock. "Maybe one day you'll be a god as well. Sweet dreams, my little Catillatio."



Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
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Tamme
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This will be deleted unless you give the land a name, history and list characters to go along with! This is an OOC board, not an IC board.

Catillatio Posts: 65
Banned atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 4.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 16.3 :: 12 HP: 60 | Buff: NOVICE
Loon
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I'm aware- this is a wip, I forgot to put wip in the title. Apologies.

Catillatio Posts: 65
Banned atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 4.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 16.3 :: 12 HP: 60 | Buff: NOVICE
Loon
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Enari Island
At least 250 miles off of Helovia's southwestern coast. an island exists in a shrouded mist that protected it from the outside world as well as isolated it's inhabitants. The dominant race were Equines, although Unicorns and Pegasi were not unheard of, they were so rare that racism against them seemed like a waste of time. A strange magic runs rampant in this place- it's in the food you eat, the water you drink, the air you breath. It's not uncommon for outsiders to be shipwrecked here and even those who had never known magic were soon altered by the environment to control an element of their choice.

Below is a list of the elements which were able to be bent, and the last known gods and goddesses to embody that element:
Water - Medusa & Zaphira (both mares)
Fire - Phoebes(Stallion)
Earth - Autuño (Stallion)
Air - Epithymia (Mare)
Metal - Hephaestus (Originally a stallion, cursed to be a hermaphrodite)
Space - Ashur & Kismet. (Stallion and Filly)

The gods of this land were not any different from their mortal subjects. They were horses without wings, or horns. Horses who could control their elements in a way that mortals could not, and they walked among mortals, ruling them directly as kings and queens of their separate kingdoms, falling prey to petty rivalry, and often calling for war on each other.

However, they were immortal, and when they fought, the landscape was often change for centuries afterwards. Aside from the obvious, there were ways to determine you were in the presence of an elemental god. The most obvious was the fact that those who were gods were marked in special ways- glowing markings covered their bodies. Some larger than others, but they were always there. Some were larger and more extensive than others. It had nothing to do with power as all gods were equal in ability and skill, what it came down to was ego. The gods who wanted to flaunt their powers, showing off and generally being conceited in their immortality, had larger, more extensive markings. and the more humble gods who felt the showiness of the markings were unnecessary had smaller, more subtle markings.

As for the Hierarchy, you already know the kingdoms were ruled directly by the gods themselves, however, there were other officials necessary. Directly under the immortal gods were the Emperors and Empresses of the land. They acted as Mediators between the gods and the mortal subjects, and were often granted immortality by their gods and goddesses because they became friends or romantic interests with their superiors. Gods did not want to lose their most reliable servants so quickly, so they granted immortality to the emperors/empresses in order to ensure their position would last for several decades longer than it was meant to naturally.

Beneath the immortal Emperor, the land was split into territories that were ruled by lead stallions and mares. Many of the leads were also immortal, but it was more uncommon than immortal emperors. As you can imagine, This kind of set up could either be really good, where everyone is treated fairly and the rules are lax enough to give people the feeling of freedom, OR it could be really bad- where leads could get away with intense acts of cruelty and every day felt like the mortals were living in hell. The only thing that could tip the balance between the two of these situations was the temperament of the god in power. Gods are immortal, so good or bad, a god will often stay in power for several centuries at a time. This was perfectly fine if the god in question was kind-hearted and ruled his or her subjects fairly, but other gods- the cruel-minded ones- made life for their subjects a living hell. In such kingdoms, cruelty and evil festered everywhere.

A middle-ground between the two DID exist, but it was rare and only the metal god, Hephaestus, managed it. True, s/he was known to be quite grumpy, but s/he was also capable of fair judgement and while life in his/her lands was tough, at no point was s/he outright cruel to those who swore their fealty to his/her service. There was a point in time where s/he was one of the cruel gods, but s/he calmed down over time. S/he made an alliance with the water goddesses and later attempted to backstab them.

Hephaestus was cursed to exist as a hermaphrodite from that point on. Eventually, s/he saw the error of his/her ways and s/he decided to live a life firmly planted in the neutral ground between light and dark. S/he was the eldest and the longest lived of the gods and her maturity, while slow in coming, was absolute when it finally did.

The youngest of the gods was probably Kismet by far- the Filly-goddess of space was too young to know more than what she was directly involved in, and her power was more often than not used to play games with others than actually utilizing her role as a goddess. She was often treated as a princess by others and her Empress was also her best friend and her caretaker. In contrast, Ashur was the elder of the two and he often allowed her to continue her own antics. He took care of everything important so that Kismet did not have to be bothered.

That's not to say Kismet didn't know she was a goddess- she sometimes did utilize her power as a goddess to pass fair judgement on her subjects and it was apparent that in time she would mature into a compassionate, fun-loving ruler.

Now, As for Element Bending, there were levels of study for each element, and their practitioners.

Beginner, Novice, Intermediate, Advanced, Master.

As a horse wandered the island, they found things called Spirit Crystals that they could give to crystal collectors in order to study and master the next highest level than their previous. Most all horses started at the beginner level, although some gifted practitioners were born with higher level ability.

If you were very lucky, you could also find things called Soul Gems. Soul Gems were collected as a means to obtain immortality. Once a mortal had the correct amount, he or she would present the soul gems to one of the gods and if they deemed the horse worthy, they would take the soul gems and would grant the mortal eternal life. Soul Gems were VERY rare, and were difficult to come by, so a horse could spend his or her entire life collecting soul gems and never find enough to impress a god or goddess before they died.

However...
The island itself was doomed not to last forever.
The Heart of Gods became unstable with it's constant use and the pieces ripped themselves away from those who were deemed as gods. The instability continued, even when the pieces of the Heart were reunited as one whole, and a second great cataclysm ripped through the land. With the gods now powerless to save themselves or their subjects, a tsunami rose out of the sky, risen by wild magic and the destructive force of the Heart of Gods swallowed the island in sea water. Only a few managed to escape, swimming to places of safety, and mourning the loss of their home.

With their forced Exodus, the survivors realized something- the magic that was bred into their DNA, that was responsible for both altering them and granting them intelligence, was unable to bend the elements if they were not in their homeland. Yes, they had the ability, but the elements would not bend to their will without the control of the Heart of Gods, and without it, the elements were unruly and best left alone to dictate themselves. Any attempts to bend the wild elements was often met with backlash, and so the survivors eventually gave up.

Characters to Survive the Island's Destruction:
Catillatio
Tharos


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