{the stormbringer}
{799/800} && {2/3} Notes: I wasn't tagged so I missed this, hope the delay is acceptable! 1. I tried to shorten my sentences and be more concise. I think my emotion might have suffered, however. 2. Definitely tried to do better on the damage number! But now I'm afraid I underplayed it too much. It's hard to find a good balance. So I had his knee buckle to cause himself partial pain, and a nick to the fetlock to cover the other half? I don't know if that's acceptable. 3. Tried to be more specific in my attack to bring the battle past in, with ramming Maskan in the ribs being effective and him attempting to replicate it with Ulrik. Is that what you meant? @[Ulrik] |
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