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Volterra the Indomitable Posts: 785
Dragon's Throat Sultan atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 17'2hh :: 3 HP: 80 | Buff: SENSE
Vérzés :: Common Red Dragon :: Frost Breath & Toxic Breath & Vadir :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Fire Breath & Shock Breath Snow
#1


V O L T E R R A
IF IT FEELS GOOD, TASTES GOOD, IT MUST BE MINE
HEROES ALWAYS GET REMEMBERED BUT YOU KNOW LEGENDS NEVER DIE

His victory is sealed with the hammering wrath of his hindlegs, which bend her ribs beneath their ire. Her submission is absolute, his dominance assured; he lands from his kick and wheels around to face her, a sweating, heaving mass of blackened power and bloodied brawn. His temper, so close to the surface, so untamed, is finally wrestled under control at the sight of her with her rump pressed against a tree, as though to dissuade him from attacking further.

But the goliath has no intention of launching another assault on her. She is broken, defeated. There would be no glory in continuing her humiliation, so he lifts his ears from their position rooted in his mane and fixes her with his feral ruby stare. He is aroused by his defeat of her, and there is a husky undertone to his earthquake of a voice when he speaks. "Be at ease, ." is Hungarian for woman - the rough language slides easily from his tongue as he gazes upon her. She is far more injured than himself (his worst wound is the bruise to his left side, which causes him to walk with a slight limp due to the tightening of the flesh) and his unsympathetic eyes rest upon her ribcage, which could contain broken bones. Ah, she will suffer with those!

That is her punishment. That is what she deserves, for tangling with him. He is stallion, and she is mare, and nature's order demands that he crush her. So crush her he did. But he is not about to gloat, or pound her submission home further. He does have morals, and she fought well, albeit deviously.

He would dearly love to take her beneath him, to ease the pain of his own injuries with some beautiful, body-wracking pleasure, but he rather thinks she is too broken for that. A shame. It does not cross his mind that she might not want it, although the venom in her eyes and hatred in her posture should give him a bit of a hint; alas, he is oblivious to the notion that any woman might not desire him. "You should see a healer over those ribs. Are you a member of a herd? I will escort you there, if you wish." Let it not be said the leviathan is not a gracious victor, and he will ensure nobody attempts to harm her whilst she is weak.

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Set directly after this! Eris I figured I'd give you some notes on your closing defence here :D @Orithia

Spelling/grammar/prose - As in the rest of the fight, your writing was perfect in this. The likes of 'In days forward, the mare may not think at all, she may lay dead upon the earth, finally broken at the behest of a towering, unnamed demon who had demanded the price of her treachery be paid in blood.' was just amazing. I know I've harped on about it all fight, but you did a really good job, and had the fight been judged I'm pretty sure you'd have whooped my ass in this section! Great job :)

Emotion - PERFECT SO PERFECT Ori gives me all the feels and I'm not even ashamed #orithiaislife

Attacks - N/A

Damage taken - I was a bit confused about where she took the attacks. You say her forelegs were sheared (which I can definitely picture, if she took the full force of the kick to them - that could even have caused a break in her cannon bones), but then say that she's taken the damage to her ribs too? I can't see how his kick could hit her forelegs whilst she's rearing (which would be in front of her) AND her ribs (on the side of her) at the same time.

You did much better taking the amount of damage this time, though - as I said in the cbox, I wish I'd known that you didn't fully understand the dice system, so I could have helped in my notes D: But you still did a great job! Vol rolled a 5, which is pretty heavy damage from a character with his high damage stat. Broken/cracked ribs is pretty much what I'd have taken from this sort of attack too, and you did well describing the implication of such an injury. That's definitely a good thing - if this injury had occured during the first round of the fight, you'd have earned points in the rubric for mentioning your injuries and how they affect you. So this was fab! :D Defence wise, this was definitely your strongest post, I felt. It was just the small confusion of you taking damage to your forelegs AND sides, which could have seen you marked down for realism.

Other - I loved that you mentioned the trees restricting her and preventing some of her movements - although the closing defence isn't actually counted into your score as far as I know, it's good to keep up good practices like these.

[ you can't stray from what you are, you're the closest thing to hell i've seen so far  ]
[ use of force/magic on him is permitted aside from death/maiming ]




Orithia Posts: 59
Outcast atk: 7.0 | def: 10.0 | dam: 3.0
Mare :: Pegasus :: 16.2hh :: 4 HP: 60 | Buff: NOVICE
Eris
#2
ORITHIA


Her sides heaved as the pain crept it's way along her body, it was as if her bones were on fire, each breath stinging as she breathed smoke and blood.

She watched him wearily, head low and eyes glinting with defiance as his gruff voice fills the rapidly cooling air. It's all Orithia can do to not bear her teeth at him, to snap that if he so much as touched her again, so much as thought of defiling her with his primitive body that she would see him skinned alive. The rage was a living thing, breathing deeply where she could not, rushing through her body and giving her strength where she had none. Yet, the rage was not aimed at the stallion for his victory, no, it was aimed at the lust in his eyes.

It was aimed at the very notion that she would ever bend to a stallion again.

Yet, as she watched, the violence seemed to drain from the brute, leaving behind self assurance and a sort of brutal beauty that the pale woman could not deny. He spoke once more, offering her escort and the promise of safe arrival within the Egde's borders, within Tembovu's borders. The majority of the mare wanted only to hiss and shake her head, refuse any offer borne of pity or otherwise from this great behemoth, but, though she was loath to admit it, the pegasus warrior was all but crippled from her injuries; she didn't have much of a choice but to accept the offer.

It felt as if it had taken the very cosmos to move from her place pressed against the tree, her entire body burning and stinging and screaming at her to stop stop stop moving. Gritting her teeth and taking as deep of a breath as she could manage, Orithia stepped forward, toward the still-nameless victor and nodded. "I must warn you," her voice was rough and wheezy, the pain of speaking nearly washing away all other senses, "Though I am a warrior of the World's Edge, I do not know how you will be received. It is clear..." She paused, forced to catch her breath in shallow gasps and blood flecked sighs, "...Clear that I am injured, I do not wish harm upon you from my brethren but I cannot control their reactions."

Only a half-lie, she thought to herself; she wouldn't have minded all that much if the skull-faced rogue wandered home with a few more bruises courtesy of the World's Edge.

Hobbling slowly closer, wings beginning to droop, Orithia stood beside the towering figure of the stallion and carefully, painfully, lifted her right wing, a silent request for the male to assist her in walking. "I am Orithia, and I will admit, I am grateful for the opportunity to spar such a skilled opponent. You did well."

Though the words tasted bitter upon her tongue, the woman gave credit where credit was due.

  @Volterra

Snow - shhheeewwwwt! I knew I explained it funny. So I pictured it as she was rearing up as he was kicking out so as she was pulling up, his hooves were scraping off all that skin, then the brunt of the kick went to the ribs along her sternum. like, her underside ribcage. not on the outside, yanno?
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Honestly, kick her ass at any time. Seriously.
Any and all aggressive and non-aggressive contact permitted.
Please no permanent injury or death. We'll get to that part at some point.
xoxo

Volterra the Indomitable Posts: 785
Dragon's Throat Sultan atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 17'2hh :: 3 HP: 80 | Buff: SENSE
Vérzés :: Common Red Dragon :: Frost Breath & Toxic Breath & Vadir :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Fire Breath & Shock Breath Snow
#3


V O L T E R R A
IF IT FEELS GOOD, TASTES GOOD, IT MUST BE MINE
HEROES ALWAYS GET REMEMBERED BUT YOU KNOW LEGENDS NEVER DIE

She steps closer, and offers a warning to him; that her herd will not be pleased to see her current injured state. He smiles a cold smile. "I am sure they will understand that you cannot expect to fight and return home with only the mildest of bruises to your name. Things don't always work like that - but I appreciate the warning, and will bear it in mind." He idly swings his tail, and casts a glance up to the dragons. He is sure that, between the three of them, they could fend off any assault from Orithia's irate herdmates. He has never been to the Edge before, and knows nothing of it. It will be an interesting experience, he's sure.

She hobbles closer and lifts a wing; the stallion steps forwards, pressing his side gently against her and allowing her to lean as much weight onto him as she desires. Perhaps letting her get so close to him is not the wisest of moves after she's proven herself to be a devious little madam who will stop at nothing to land a blow, but this does not cross the black's mind. The sensation of flesh touching flesh elicits its usual natural reaction in the behemoth, but he fights to force his lust back down into its cage. Now is not the time to hunger after this particular mare; he simply lends her his strength as they begin to walk.

She gives her name, and even offers a compliment. The giant fixes her with his gaze, anger fizzling away to be replaced by curiosity. His berserker rage usually only lasts as long as the battle itself; he appreciates that the battlefield is a whole different world, and what one does during a fight should not be held against them outside the arena. Although he is a man of fire and untamed passion, he sees no reason to continue to nurture the fury that had exploded within him at her attempt on his manhood. "I am Volterra. You also fought well...although if I may ask, did I somehow offend you to cause you to strike for my balls, or is that just your token move?" He raises an eyebrow and glances at her with an amused expression - now the rage has dimmed, the attack has lost its original hateful aura. He's not sure he'd have been so casual about it had it succeeded, but thankfully his thick draft's tail is a worthy piece of armour.

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Ahh yeah that makes a bit more sense now you've explained it like that! Just try to make sure you get that amount of detail in the post as well :) @Orithia

[ you can't stray from what you are, you're the closest thing to hell i've seen so far  ]
[ use of force/magic on him is permitted aside from death/maiming ]




Orithia Posts: 59
Outcast atk: 7.0 | def: 10.0 | dam: 3.0
Mare :: Pegasus :: 16.2hh :: 4 HP: 60 | Buff: NOVICE
Eris
#4
Relief flashed across her features as the stallion accepted her silent plea, his muscular bulk welcome against her bruised skin. Though it took a bit of adjusting on her end, Orithia at last found a position against the brute where the pain proved manageable. Eyelids dropped slightly, gratefulness at the support he offered filling her belly. The journey would remain slow, she knew; even with the behemoth's assistance, she was forced to hobble. 

As the pair moved forward, Orithia took careful inventory of her injuries, brow creasing as she did so. The ribs along the underside of her chest were, at the very least, fractured. Along with the severe bruising to the muscles at her chest and the points of her shoulders, the pale mare could feel acutely the painful scraped along the lower portions of her front legs. She winced with every step, doing her best to keep her breathing even as Volterra spoke.

The defeated lass managed a nod at Volterra's smooth dismissal of her concerns, reinforcing her confidence in his abilities to defend himself. A faint smile graced blood flecked lips at the brute's complement and subsequent question. It took a moment for the injured woman to retain enough oxygen to reply, her voice a fraction stronger than it had been without her adversary's support, "I admit, if it were a signature move, I would be long dead. Not many stallions take as kindly to an attempted castration as you, Volterra." She cast a wry glance toward him, surprising herself with how easily she had slipped into comfortable conversation with one that she had been battling mere moments ago. 

A wheezing laugh was pushed from between her coral stained lips, eyes dimming briefly as pain lanced through her ribcage. "It was borne of desperation and a savagery I've learned to hold within me. Savage histories make for savage futures." 



OOC- done from mobile, sorry for lack of coding❤️

 @Volterra
[Image: ypCJIiV.png]
Honestly, kick her ass at any time. Seriously.
Any and all aggressive and non-aggressive contact permitted.
Please no permanent injury or death. We'll get to that part at some point.
xoxo

Volterra the Indomitable Posts: 785
Dragon's Throat Sultan atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 17'2hh :: 3 HP: 80 | Buff: SENSE
Vérzés :: Common Red Dragon :: Frost Breath & Toxic Breath & Vadir :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Fire Breath & Shock Breath Snow
#5


V O L T E R R A
IF IT FEELS GOOD, TASTES GOOD, IT MUST BE MINE
HEROES ALWAYS GET REMEMBERED BUT YOU KNOW LEGENDS NEVER DIE

Their progress is slow, but the giant does not object. He has little else to be doing with his time, as he won't be able to battle again for another few days in order to allow his injuries to heal. Escorting a beautiful woman home...he can think of worse things to be occupying himself with, even if said beautiful woman tried to bite his most precious parts off just a few moments ago. The beast often holds grudges about such things, but on this occasion he thinks the mare has been appropriately punished. Her broken ribs and plethora of bruises are enough, hence why he's happy enough to drop his drive for vengeance.

He cannot resist a chortle at her next words, even if the sudden wracking movement makes his bruised side ache. "You took me by surprise, I'll give you that. Had you succeeded, though, I would be able to deliver what remained of you home to the Edge in a small leather bag." His smile fades as he fixes her with his penetrating red gaze, saying in no uncertain terms you'd be unwise to try that with me again. And, indeed, had a man attempted it, Volterra rather thinks he would have slaughtered him regardless of its success or failure. But Orithia is decidedly female, and decidedly attractive, and that swings the odds in her favour.

Her reasoning behind the attack, though, piques his interest. Appearances can be deceptive, but he would not have associated this darling mare with a savage history. She seems so...pure, which was why he'd been so taken aback by her devious words and antics. But could it be that her pearly white fur hides a blackened and tainted past? It would appear so. "It is clear you know how to fight men like myself successfully. Calling them impotent ignites their temper and causes them to make mistakes, which you can then capitalise on. Smart, if dangerous." It had worked effectively on Volterra, and he thinks it would work just as well on any other man with masculine pride held in his heart; but she runs the risk of riling them to the point of annihilating her, and signing her own death warrant with her clever little tongue. "So is it safe for me to assume it is my gender as a whole that you dislike, and not me personally?" His colossal head tilts, his interest thoroughly fixed on this odd little woman.

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@Orithia

[ you can't stray from what you are, you're the closest thing to hell i've seen so far  ]
[ use of force/magic on him is permitted aside from death/maiming ]





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