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Tembovu the Elephant Posts: 805
World's Edge Captain atk: 7 | def: 9.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 18hh :: 10 HP: 77 | Buff: SWIFT
Mbwene :: African Elephant :: Ashen smitty
#1
Set a fire deep in my soul; One I can't contain, one I won't control.
The glass spears were unwieldy between his thick, black lips. Some warriors on the plains had opted to fight with spears or other weapons, but the Elephant General had preferred to fight bare. Even armor, lightweight leather and (rare) heavy metal, had been too restricting and confining. And his massive size required so much material, the Makutano could cover two small Banderi soldiers for one set of his armor.

“Rohan!” His booming shout was muffled by the weapons he held in his mouth, much to Mbwene’s chortling amusement. The Elephant King shot her a warning, sideways glance; the bonded pair’s relationship was taunt and frayed ever since his spar with the Icebound. He snorted once, before dropped a glass spear at his feet and then tossing the other far in front of him in the small clearing he had halted in. It was an amorphous shape, wider at the north and and narrower at the south end. And it was densely surrounded by the rough, flaky bark of pine trees. He had chosen this clearing because it was so tight—made even smaller by his great mass. It would mean close quarters for sparring with these glass spears, forcing both he and Rohan to use them.

“Sergeant! You’ve been absent from your training too long. Show me you know how to use our weapons!” His bellow moved easily through the thick forest, so accustomed was he to to calling for others in the Edge, now. He was glad that the mist was not as tense today; he would need all of his faculties to fight with this unwieldy weapon. Already, he could feel tension crawling into his withers. He would be much more relaxed if he was about to spar with just his body and his magic…

Slowly his head bent, taking the double-headed spear into his mouth. The glass was angled, allowing his teeth to take purchase on its length; though the sensation of enamel gritting against glass was strange. Still, he readied himself for battle; massive slabs of shoulder squaring and hooves spreading to a base-wide stance in the Edge’s rich soil. Great, heavy haunches were planted in the southern, narrower part of the clearing; chest facing the wider part, where his opponent’s glass spear lay glinting in the sun. His thick tail swayed once at his hocks, dark blue gaze staring into the morning’s murk of the forest. And he waited.


A: 0/3
WC: 406
Damage tracker: --
Summary: Tembo calls for Rohan; it's early morning, light mist, in a small clearing thickly surrounded by trees.
Note: They will be fighting with glass spears;
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#2
Rohan
The Warlander is not far from the Elephant King when the great monarch calls for him. The powerful echoing of his name stops the warrior in his tracks, cornering him suddenly into stillness; like a rope that has been cast to ensnare him, Rohan feels trapped by his king’s less-than-cordial invitation. Dark-rimmed ears flatten and green eyes narrow, his lips twisting with the bitter shame that festers in his stomach (rising like bile to the back of his throat, souring his tongue with the haunting taste of failure). “Is it really necessary to yell? Rohan growls to himself, hating the way a spotlight has been fixed upon him, despising how his weakness has been exposed and put on display for anyone within earshot.

If he had held any less respect for the mammoth of a stallion, Rohan would have ignored the summons—he would likely have wandered away and never stopped, even when the forested borders had come and gone, like a chapter written and closed in the book of his life. However, Rohan does respect his king (and he curses the needle-thin thread of morality that has tethered him to this land). Despite all the times herd life has chewed him up and spit him out, the Warlander cannot abandon those he admires for selfishness alone (not again).

Snapping his tail once around his hips, the striped warrior turns, pivoting in the direction of the Elephant King. Pale hooves carry him heavily forward. Each step feels more difficult than the last, like a march towards purgatory, ever closer to the judgement he feels weighing across his shoulders.

All too soon (and yet somehow so, so much later) he breaks into the little clearing his king has chosen. “Temobvu,” Rohan greets his friend and superior with a wry smile, though his voice is almost tired, laden with the load of emotions that have been haunting him. Lowering his eyes to the glinting light in the grass, Rohan observes the glass spear. With the pursing of his lips, he takes this as his judgement—a test of his own skill and reliability for the Edge. Unsure of the answers himself, the Warlander reaches down to grasp the weapon in his teeth: a wordless acceptance of this carnal inquisition.

He begins to circle, coming around in an arc towards the larger stallion. After a few steps he reaches an angle where the sunlight filters down on the glass spear he holds, the glare reflecting into his eyes. Quickly seizing this idea and the strategy it forges, Rohan lunges diagonally towards Tembovu’s right side, angling the spear in his lips. Thrusting the weapon upwards towards Tembovu’s face, Rohan attempts to either break skin or momentarily blind his opponent with the glare, while simultaneously aiming to skewer his antlers into the Elephant King’s neck. His heart pounds loudly in his ears, a resounding drum of expectation, not letting him forget the gravity of this test (and the cruel, sharp severity of his shame).


“Speech.”
Attack: 1/3
WC: 499
Damage tracker: -
Somebody make me feel alive
And shatter me

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Tembovu the Elephant Posts: 805
World's Edge Captain atk: 7 | def: 9.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 18hh :: 10 HP: 77 | Buff: SWIFT
Mbwene :: African Elephant :: Ashen smitty
#3
Set a fire deep in my soul; One I can't contain, one I won't control.
The Sergeant’s appearance in the clearing is lackluster. He does not burst out of the trunks, rallying to his King’s call. He appears slowly, unenthusiastically, from the trees. For a moment, some forlorn thread of nostalgia for the previous warm camaraderie he and the Wallander had shared wraps around his chest—though it is quickly snipped by the wry smile that crosses his dark, hairy muzzle. The King’s lips, stretched around the circumference of the glass spear, attempt to return his grin with a small (if somber) smile.

And, despite the near reluctance (or was it dread?) that the soldier seems to view the glittering glass spear at his pale hooves with, Rohan’s pursed lips part to pick up the weapon. And the King is surprised by the relief that clashes with his initial, cold readying for battle. Part of him (a part he hadn’t realized) had been worried that the finely antlered man was gone; that he had abandoned his post and the Edge for whatever demons that haunted him at the last meeting.

But this, clearly, is not the case, as his smaller, but stocky, body circles around the King’s massive form. Tembovu’s own mouth adjusts to the strange shape and weight of the spear. He swallows—there was so much saliva produced in the mouth! It would make for tricky, slippery handling if he did not pay attention to it. Luckily, though, Anzanie is thorough in her knowledge of crafting glass: the spear is well-balanced and razor-sharp. Just unwieldy in the King’s mouth due to its newness (for now).

His heavily horned head follows the muscular man’s circling body. Either the unfamiliarity of the weapon or his absence from the battlefield apparently have made the Sergeant slow, however, for his steps toward the King do not imply attack. They are deliberately placed, and the Elephant watches him closely, chin tucking and head dropping slightly as the soldiers come into close quarters.

He takes a half-step backwards, a hind hoof sliding in the thickly pine-needled floor (those would be slick for maneuvering, he notes). And it is this movement that allows his head to move just out of the blinding, glinting light of Rohan’s carefully placed spear. Tembovu grunts in approval of such an attack; using the spear’s reflective properties is resourceful. There are few other weapons that will reflect light as well as the Edge’s glass.

But, alas, the best laid plains oft go awry, and Tembovu’s movement breaks him free of any blinding glare. With a backward shuffle (partly slipping on pine needles and hitting a tree trunk with his haunches) and a forceful lunge to the left with his shoulders, the King just barely escapes the Sergeant’s murderously sharp tines. His black-rimmed ears pin back as they hear the branching antlers whistle through the air past them.

Though the King does not pause in his motion. Using the tree trunk his haunches hit against in his backwards shuffle for support, he halts his left-ward momentum. A cream and ivory left foreleg trembles once, straining against the massive forces—though the King trusts his body (if not his heart and mind). His neck drops and sweeps powerfully to the right, bringing the sharp and glinting right spearhead towards Rohan’s body. He aims for the chest, hoping to carve a shallow flesh wound; but, admittedly, his control of the weapon is not quite skilled.


A: 1/3
WC: 573
Damage tracker: ---
Summary: Tembovu moves backwards into a tree trunk and ducks left to miss Rohan's attack. He then (using the tree trunk to help stop his left-ward momentum) sweeps his neck/head to the right, seeking to cut Rohan's neck/chest area with the spearhead.
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Rohan Posts: 132
Outcast atk: 4 | def: 8.5 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.0 :: 8 years HP: 66 | Buff: NOVICE
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#4
Rohan
He pushes forward, charging, clenching the glass shaft of the spear between his teeth until he can feel it grate against enamel. For the shortest moment, the Warlander feels almost weightless, with the racing of his heart and the euphoria of adrenaline lifting him from the mire of shame anger that has overwhelmed him. For the shortest of moments, he feels—redeemed.

However, despite all the tricks and fantasies of his crooked mind, Rohan cannot escape the shackles of his disgrace.
(Not even for a moment).
Like hitting the hard ground after falling, he is buffeted by the literal pain of reality.

The tip of his spear strikes nothing. Like having the rug (your safe line) pulled from under your feet, the force of the Sergeant’s momentum propels him forward. Betrayed by the power of his own body, he openly delivers himself to his king’s counter attack, increasing what would have been a shallow wound into an awful, muscle-deep laceration. His breath hitches in a sharp gasp upon impact, the spear nearly falling from his lips, while pain shoots from his chest, lancing across his shoulders and searing through his veins like wildfire—

—And there is something else that blooms alongside the agony; something far more devastating, somehow. Humiliation. A new kind of shame, one that attacks his mind as terribly as Tembonu’s spear attacks his body. (How has he failed so viciously?)

All along, Rohan continues to stumble forward, his mind a disarray of panic, pain, and commands that do little to gain control of his hairy body.
Blood sprays from his severed veins like a geyser from the earth—a grotesque halation of his failure.

From the middle of Rohan’s breast to the left point of his lower neck, the tip of Tembovu’s spear slices a steep, diagonal line upwards. Fortunately (or perhaps regrettably) the sharp glass gouges a clean line through his flesh, penetrating his skin like a hot knife through butter (and oh how it burns). Groaning a muted roar past the glass weapon he holds, the Warlander half-way collides into the larger stallion before he is able to regain some control of his momentum.

Clenching the muscles in his haunches, he pivots himself back to the right and away from the Elephant King, awkwardly swinging the left point of his spear as he does so in a final hope of breaking skin.

As he turns, Rohan slips once on the slick ground, grunting when he has to land forcefully on his front legs to keep himself moving. Sweet adrenaline drives him with a dangerous determination, fed by the hot sting of his wound as it flares angrily (his chest is tight, pinched, and every breath must be forced between a needle-thin gap through the pain). Attempting to harness the force of his body to his own advantage this time, Rohan continues his pivot to 180 degrees, now bringing him around to Tembovu’s rear end. Trying to aim the right point of his spear perpendicularly towards Tembovu’s right flank, the Warlander hopes his momentum will aid in a deep enough blow.


“Speech.”
Attack: 2/3
WC: 525
Damage tracker: A bleeding, muscle-deep cut from the middle of his breast to the left point of his lower neck.
Somebody make me feel alive
And shatter me

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Tembovu the Elephant Posts: 805
World's Edge Captain atk: 7 | def: 9.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 18hh :: 10 HP: 77 | Buff: SWIFT
Mbwene :: African Elephant :: Ashen smitty
#5
Set a fire deep in my soul; One I can't contain, one I won't control.
The King’s intended shallow jab at his Sergeant’s chest easily cuts through the striped, tawny skin. The glass blade is sharp and sinks—deeper, deeper—into Rohan’s flesh. Black rimmed ears tilt backwards; he hadn’t meant to injure his friend so deeply. But the blade was sharper than he thought, and he hadn’t accounted for the antlered man’s forward momentum.

Navy eyes glance at the dripping flesh wound, watching the blood well and flow freely. He understands, now, why the Moon Goddess had wished them to fight with her glass. Before this moment, he had understood in an abstract sense: she wanted them to fully understand the glass’s strength against enemies. But now, here in the moment, the King understands and realizes the damaging extent their glass spikes may have on friend and foe alike.

A reluctant shred of respect for the goddess drags through his chest. After the clearing the bramble thicket and ridding her of her creatures, he had grown a healthy mistrust of the Moon. But now, appreciation weaves through his suspicion.

Though his mind wanders with these realizations, his navy gaze still tracks the Warlander’s movements. His body shifts, or tries to shift, in response to his opponent’s pivots and approach towards his right flank. But, unfortunately, the Elephant’s haunches are still backed against the thick trunks that line clearing’s edges.Makende! he curses himself aloud; though his earlier movement, which had backed him against the trees, had allowed him to avoid Rohan’s first attack, he now is trapped for this new attack.

Though the Elephant King does not sit idly and wait for the Sergeant’s sweeping glass spear to land its blow. Ears pin and teeth grit as he readies himself for the pain, but he also takes a half-step forward and to the right with his forehand. Readjusting his teeth’s grip on his own glass spear, he readies himself for his next attack as Rohan’s blade carves neatly into his flank.

A guttural groan bursts from his chest; the pain cannot be ignored. The gleaming, glittering spear slices deep into the musculature above his stifle. His half-step forward has spared the soft tissues of his flank and barrel from the sharp blade, but it also had put the thick muscle of his haunch’s meat right in the path of the sharp blade. Thick skin cleaves with ease, a burst of bright red against black and cream skin reveals gaping and cleanly cut muscle bellies.

The adrenaline surge from the painful, gaping wound clears the Elephant’s mind of the pain; he has but a moment with Rohan in close quarters to mount his next attack—if the Warlander is even still near him. The King throws his adrenaline pumped body up and to the right, though he must balance on his left hind as his right haunch trembles and fasciculates with pain. Teeth clenched around the smooth surface of his spear’s handle, he arches his neck to the right and tries to drive the gleaming, blooded spearhead into Rohan’s right side.

Blood runs in muddy red rivulets down the black and white right hindlimb, flesh wide and gaping in the Edge’s misted air.


A: 2/3
WC: 530
Damage tracker: Deep flesh wound above right stifle;
Summary: Rohan's attack lands on his right haunches, carving a nasty wound. While they're T-boned, Tembo half-rears and curves his body around the right, trying to skewer any part of Rohan's right side with his spear! (image)
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Rohan Posts: 132
Outcast atk: 4 | def: 8.5 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.0 :: 8 years HP: 66 | Buff: NOVICE
Éomer :: White-tailed Eagle :: Scream Reli
#6
Rohan
The spear’s tapered, clean blade slices easier into his king’s flesh than the warrior had been expecting.

It has been several years since Rohan had last fought with a weapon—not in all the time that has passed since his abdication of his homeland—and even then, he has never wielded a weapon forged from glass. It is strange for him, now, to not depend solely on the brute force and strength of his own body. He feels alienated from the heart of the attack, as if watching on the sidelines rather than participating; to be on the other end of a weapon rather than sinking his teeth directly into the flesh of his opponent. Like a spectator he watches, watches as his spear gouges into the meaty, steaming muscle of his king (his friend).

Hot, crimson liquid bursts from the wound (as though it is answering the call of his own falling, pooling blood) and the way it erupts is almost beautiful. The cardinal hue is stark against Tembovu’s creamy skin, spilling and scattering like rubies over the glittering glass of his spear (a color far too delightful for the harbinger of doom that it embodies). Rohan tells himself that he should not be so fascinated by a sight as gruesome as this, reminds himself that this is the blood of a comrade, that this is a brutal test for sport

(Are they barbarians after all?)

—With a tightening of his jaw, the Warlander forces his eyes away from the scene, his heart hammering against the deep gash on his chest. Of course, it would be in that exact moment that the Elephant King rises to initiate his counter attack. Rohan sees the shadow of the larger stallion in the corner of his eye, the mammoth’s body silhouetted against the morning light, and too late the Sergeant realizes his mistake. For too long he has languished in his idleness, his negligence dulling his finesse and rusting his skill.

Pinning his ears, he attempts to dart to the left and away from Tembovu, but between the pine needles now slick with blood and the tight throbbing of his wound, his hooves slip. Rohan knows that he is too late to evade the brunt of the Elephant King’s attack—still, nothing could have prepared him for what comes next.

In the initial half-second of impact, Rohan’s body suddenly feels cold all over (like a dark chill of impending doom, when goose bumps pepper your skin and the hair on the back of your neck rises). And then—in one swift surge of agony—the (hell)fire multiplies to melt the blades of ice.

From his elevated position, Tembovu’s spear enters through the right side of Rohan’s back, skewering him in a shallow laceration along his side, until the tip breaks through the skin just above his right flank. Rohan can almost feel the glass grating against the bone of his last ribs, the thin layers of entwined muscles and skin (now bulging with the spear’s shaft underneath) screaming their protest of this ruthless invasion.

Overcome by a blinding pain, instinct smothers skill, and the Warlander pulls away.

The tearing of the stallion’s flesh as his body releases the king’s spear is wet and morbid. Recoiling with trembling steps, the skin of his ride side hangs like a thick fillet of meat. Had Tembovu’s attack been any deeper, or angled any sharper, Rohan’s breaths would already be numbered; however, fortunately all of his bones and organs remain intact. Only his shredded muscle (dripping like a sopping rag with puddling blood) bears the terrible torture. If he were any less of a stubborn fool, the warrior would have forfeited right there, but his pride is too swollen to allow himself to give up. He will not feed his shame more than he already has.

He has no choice but to see this through to the end.

Breathing in heavy, groaning breaths, the Warlander is reduced to a ‘hail Mary’ strike. He moves slowly, blood seeping down his body as the skin of his side swings freely (the muscle underneath a bright, bleeding red). Squaring himself as best as he can, Rohan grits the spear between his teeth, and shuts his eyes (against the morning light, against Tembovu, and against his failure) before laboriously swinging his body in an arc. Releasing his grasp, he sends the double-edged spear hurling through the air, spiraling in the Elephant King’s general direction.


“Speech.”
Attack: 3/3
WC: 765 according to AbiWord
Damage tracker: A bleeding, muscle-deep cut from the middle of his breast to the left point of his lower neck; a gash-turned-fillet-o-muscle from the right of his back to just above his right flank.

Rohan's wound isn't at all inspired by real life events ;-; ;-;
Somebody make me feel alive
And shatter me

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Tembovu the Elephant Posts: 805
World's Edge Captain atk: 7 | def: 9.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 18hh :: 10 HP: 77 | Buff: SWIFT
Mbwene :: African Elephant :: Ashen smitty
#7
Set a fire deep in my soul; One I can't contain, one I won't control.
With his hooves slipping on the thickly pine needled floor, Rohan does not evade the Elephant’s attack. Even the King, though he has called this fight to test his Sergeant’s dormant battle skills, inwardly winces as the spear’s sharp edge carves into the Warlander’s flesh and slightly clips against bone. His teeth tighten, creaking against the glass’s smooth handle, as the blade drags through meaty muscle and thick fascia. Black-rimmed ears pin against flush with his neck, feeling a warning crackle from the glass against his mouth as it begins to give from the strain of battle.

Navy eyes darken as he watches Rohan pull away from his spearhead. Large ivory hooves land, sinking into the carpet of blood-drenched needles. He allows the Sergeant to move away, not seeking to chase him in another attack, because (truthfully) his injured right haunch could use a few breaths of respite from attacking. His pounding heart pushes blood from the wound as his navy gaze follows the flap of skin hanging from Rohan’s back with a combination of morbid interest (the glass spears were effective) and regret. He did not mean to injure Rohan that badly.

“Sorry, my friend,” his deep voice attempts to sound around the spear he clutches between his teeth. Slowly, he begins to shift to face his opponent in his new position, but he is forced to favor his right hind leg in the process. And so, with his attention distracted by the wound’s ache, it is nearly too late that he sees the flash of glass through the forest’s green-filtered light.

With a grunt and an instinctive duck of his massive skull, the sharp crack of glass against glass slip the air. Somehow, the Elephant King moves quickly enough to block Rohan’s airborne spear with his own, sending it sailing to the left of his head, rather than impaling his skull. However, another contributor to the loud cracking noise is his own spear. He did not heed its warnings, and so the shaft breaks where his teeth tightly hold it, sending splinters of glass into his gums and a jagged edge of glass into the roof of his mouth.

Spitting the broken glass spear out from his mouth, blood follows the gleaming splinters. Sharp pain pierces through his mucosa as his tongue swipes over his hard palate, feeling the small slice of flesh and tasting the metallic iron in his blood. It is not a deep cut, but the injuries of the mouth are felt so much more acutely than other wounds. Gingerly holding his mouth slightly open, both from the discomfort and to allow the bloody saliva to stream from his thick black lips, he slightly shakes his head.

And then he looks to his opponent, navy eyes assessing the bleeding Sergeant. Part of him wishes to stand down—Rohan was his friend. But a soldier would not see a pity-forfeit as a favor. No, it would be shameful; embarrassing, even. So the King, still limping on his hind right limb, approaches his friend, attempting to come head-on with the antlered man. His navy eyes briefly seek to meet bright greens, before he barrels forward in an attack, falteringly leaping over the now-forgotten glass spears (they have done enough damage). He aims to crash is massive, heavy, thickly spiraled horn against the forward-sweeping tines of Rohan’s antler.s

His body is heavy, drenched in sweat and blood. This battle is bloodier than the King had anticipated. But he is glad to be testing his Sergeant. They both need to know he is still fit for this job—and he most assuredly is.


A: 3/3
WC: 612
Damage tracker: Deep flesh wound above right stifle; sliced mouth from
Summary: Tembo apologizes, deflects Rohan's hurled spear with his own spear which splinters in his mouth, cutting it. He then rears (again) and attempts to bring his horn down on Rohan's antlers.
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Rohan Posts: 132
Outcast atk: 4 | def: 8.5 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.0 :: 8 years HP: 66 | Buff: NOVICE
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#8
Rohan
The Warlander doesn’t hear the Elephant King’s apology.

There are a plethora of things overwhelming his senses, attacking every sensation of his body until all the fibers of his muscles feel both acutely sharpened and dulled at the same time. The chaos of his black secrets and self-doubts riot in his mind, the haze of his eyes and ears straining to gauge the other stallion’s position and possible attack (never forgetting that this is a battle), but most of all, is the pain. The Sergeant’s chest aches and his side throbs—his skin is now saturated with sweat and sodden with blood. He can hear the steady drip, drip of his body’s lifeblood as it hits the forest floor, the morbid rhythm nearly in time with the hammering of his heart.

Lulled into a shallow haze by his physical exhaustion and the loss of blood, Rohan has almost forgotten that he had thrown his spear. Rolling his head beneath the weight of his antlers, green eyes suddenly open wide when a loud crack shatters through the cool morning air. Blinking rapidly to refocus his gaze on Tembovu, he sees a magnificent spray of glittering crystal. The king’s spear seems to have splintered against the force of his own weapon, tearing at the larger stallion’s mouth, and sending shards of glistening glass dancing across the moist grass.

As Tembovu turns his gaze to the Warlander, his black lips dribbling with blood, Rohan is suddenly afraid that the monarch will end their fight right then, when they have come so, so close. He is worried that Tembovu will look at him now and only see his injuries, and judge him incapable (unworthy) of finishing this to the end—that he is not strong enough to carry out the very burdens of his duty (and perhaps he isn’t).

Hairy limbs tremble from the warrior’s own weight, his eyes heavy as he stares at the Elephant King. So much doubt is held onto his shoulders (so much shame), that it almost surprises him when Tembovu moves. Rohan feels a swell of gratitude and pride that warms his cold uncertainties; indebted that Tembovu will not shame him into a forced defeat. They will finish this—together, this will end.

The king’s attack is more straightforward now, a simple and poetic finale to this bloodbath between friends.

With a throaty grunt of self-victory, Rohan manages to withstand Tembovu’s final blow. Catching the spiraled horn between the pale tines of his antlers with a rough jarring of bone against bone, the warrior sweeps his head slightly up and to the right (pushing more with the left side of his body, and trying to keep as much strain off his right side as possible), attempting to direct Tembovu’s horn so that it angles away from the majority of his face, instead grazing across his left cheek. The Warlander savors the hot sting (so miniscule compared to the raging fire of his other wounds), even managing a crooked smile as he stumbles back from the larger stallion.

His breaths are labored and he can barely remain upright, but past all the weariness and pain, there is joy in the warrior’s eyes. “Thank you, my king,” he rasps, we have done well.


“Speech.”
Attack: - final defense
WC: 557 according to AbiWord
Damage tracker: A bleeding, muscle-deep cut from the middle of his breast to the left point of his lower neck; a gash-turned-fillet-o-muscle from the right of his back to just above his right flank; and a streak of grazed skin across his left cheek.

ooc: I'm pretty sure it defaults to Tembovu because of the gap in HP, but if possible, I'd still love to be judged please! So I can tell how I did :3
Somebody make me feel alive
And shatter me

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Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
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#9
This fight ended with a 20 HP gap, so there is no rubric.
Rohan is awarded 1 EXP.
Tembovu is awarded 1 VP and gained a new buff!

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