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Ázzuen the Ardent Posts: 94
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Stallion :: Pegasus :: 15.1 :: 8
Whit
#1

The stallion had been pushing himself recently. He had been yearning for another test, a challenge, something to take his mind off the troubles of politics and leading a band of soldiers. The stallion lost himself in his physical activity, most days were spent drenched in sweat, and sometimes blood if he was not careful enough.

He was in a different mode, one where he saw nothing but targets, targets that needed to be defeated before he could move on to the next. His magic was on edge, itching to be used, his spear in his mouth, twirling artistically - like a deadly paintbrush being wielded by a painter trained to kill.

It was mid-afternoon. The sun did not look to be setting any time soon. A light breeze allowed his wings to still be useful in giving him altitude, the cool zephyrs of spring giving him a refreshed outlook, despite spending the morning working on his endurance. It was time to work on his agility - only he was bored of dodging inanimate obstacles.

A deep call rang out, echoing across the Thistle Meadow, asking, almost demanding for a partner to test themselves against him. A crooked grin split his lips, as he awaited who may come. Eyes of electric yellow sparked with restrained magic, as he did his best to exercise patience and eagerness to get on with the spar.

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2 attack posts each, plus closing defence to the first attacker.
2 week time limit on replies unless in the case of absence.
Setting is Thistle Meadow, mid-afternoon, sunny day with a light breeze.
VP will be awarded to the winner.
Magic and companion use is allowed.
This is an Open Spar, meaning whoever is welcome to reply, and start sparring straight away if you like. ]


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Lace the Silverthorn Posts: 459
Deceased atk: 5 | def: 9 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 15.3 hh :: 14 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Fajira :: Plain White Dragon :: Fire Breath Chan
#2
"We're soldiers in a war and none of us are backing down
And I will show you victory is mine before we leave this battleground
'Cause you don't wanna leave, and I don't wanna go
And I know just how this battle goes
You don't wanna leave and I don't wanna fight this kind of war...

- Jay Sean


The voice that called out over the meadow was familiar, and the vibrating tones made Lace jerk his head up from where he had been grazing. Nostrils flared in a sudden surge of excitement, and without thinking he reared up and returned the call. Eagerly. Cheerfully. Such a nostalgic tune... It brought him back to the day of battle a season ago, when bodies had clashed and the blood ran hot in the veins, when everything had been at stake; lives, homes, glory and honor.

It had been too long since he'd done any real sparring. The life within Helovia was making the warrior soft, and with the return of spring it was time to chance that. As he headed off towards the owner of the battle cry, the white-maned grullo quietly assessed his own condition, tried to find his own weaknesses before the opponent could do it.

Winter had been good to him, but there was still a decrease in muscle tone that might leave him short of stamina. His belly was full from gazing - not optimal, he'd have to be careful not to get a stitch in the side. Fajira flew by his side, she too excited by the sound of the endless chattering voice. He grinned, thrilled by her company; still, their teamwork might be somewhat affected by the lack of mental communication, it wouldn't be as smooth and effortless as before. And then there was the matter of the new abilities that had awakened within him; the connection to the plant life of the surroundings, his control over the wooden specimens - and the borrowed fire that burned quietly in the chest, allowing him to exhale a searing hot flame much like his bonded companion could. Overall, Lace wasn't at his best now, and he sincerely hoped that this spar would be a friendly one; he had no desire for broken bones, not again.

A grin dawned on the lips as his opponent came into view. He recognized the big pegasus stallion as one of the Throat soldiers that had assisted in the battle for the Edge, though couldn't recall a name - poorly handled on his part, as such a well-trained warrior deserved to be recognized. It definitely sealed his intentions on taking it easy; in no way did he want to have the injury of an allied soldier on his conscience, potentially damaging the relations between their herds. He hoped Fajira would know to hold back her fire too.

Lace readied himself as he approached, canter slowing to a steady trot and weight subtly shifting backward to leave the front free to move with ease. Silver gray neck arched, he tucked the chin in to protect the throat and ears turned back to keep them out of reach of bites. Would the winged soldier take the fight to the air, or stick to the ground? Did he have magic, would he use it, was he going to be as careful with an ally as the grulla? For now, the only thing he knew for sure were the things he could behold with the naked eye. A bulky, black stallion that was somewhat shorter than Lace but made up for it in muscle, movements of one who knew his own strength. The spear he carried in his mouth was curious; would he actually use it? It was definitely something to be weary of.

Were they equal? This would be a chance to find out.

"Lace of the Edge, and Fajira" he presented himself, offered a grin to the other and then surged forward, daringly charging straight into the pegasus. At the last moment he brought up the front into a rear and let the hooves paw toward the face of the other - careful not to expose his belly too obviously to the sharp spear, that was likely to spill his gut if the opponent wanted it. The attack was blunt, unrefined - and a great way of getting a first assessment of the opponents strengths, intelligence, reflexes and experience.

Meanwhile, Fajira flapped the wings and darted off to the side, gaining height until she hovered above the two horses; ready to make a move when and if it would prove necessary.


[Word count: 708 Approached from the front, reared and aimed the front hooves toward Azzuen's face, to assess his strength and intentions with the fight. Fajira flies up to circle above them, currently just watching.]


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Ázzuen the Ardent Posts: 94
Deceased
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 15.1 :: 8
Whit
#3

Enthusiasm accelerated the speed of the dark stallion's heart beats as a call echoing his sentiments was returned to his eagerly awaiting ears. The grin upon his façade only broadened as the steed who came into view was one he found himself recognising - he was glad to know it was a stallion he had been fighting for and not against at the time. Memories rushed through his mind as he placed the silver grulla and his pale dragon, vaguely recalling the stallion having taken on an injury that had left him immobile for some of the battle, while his dragon defended him and fought in his stead. It was admirable, the devotion shared between them. Azzuen had been preoccupied with chasing down a certain goat-sized opponent then, the most he could recall from the encounter was a dash of white scales and scorching flames.

He had hoped for a friendly spar, and was glad to see the seasoned warrior, an ally, as his opponent. He didn't toss his spear aside, but made a mental note to only use the blunt, wooden end of it, so that he could strike as hard as possible against Lace, and only give the stallion some parting bruises in remembrance of this spar.

The General took silent, mental notes as the grulla approached, absorbing the differences in stature and physique. They weren't totally different, though their breeding obviously leant them varying conformation. Azzuen, being the mutt he was, seemed to be stockier, thicker and perhaps a bit bulkier in muscle. This didn't mean much, as winter had had its effects on everyone - though he had spent most of it in the comfortable climate of the Dragon's Throat. It meant his coat was already shorter, meaning it took longer for him to become sweaty under the Spring-time Sun, meaning he felt the cool breeze all the more sensitively as he was more accustomed to warm, desert-sand breezes. If anything, it made him more alert, more on edge, more ready to take whatever his opponent had to give.

Azzuen nodded a small nod of his crown as the stallion introduced himself, murmuring his own name in response. "Azzuen." he did not waste his breath with any further utterings, however, as Lace was in action. Instinctively Azzuen bowed his crown down, much like a cutting horse when turning to chase a cow, except the move instead allowed him to miss the flailing hooves that waved so dangerously at him. He bowed down to the right, so that he was standing less face-to-face with Lace, rather, his left shoulder was now nearest to the grulla. Azzuen angled his wing upwards, not wanting to inflict damage upon the joint crucial to his ability to fly. The feathers splayed high in the air, and did little but perhaps obscure the other's vision.

With the wooden end of his spear, he wasted no further moments in then striking at the stallion's left side, just behind his shoulder. With Lace coming down from his rear, the angle was awkward. It might catch on the slightly loose skin just behind his elbow, or else give a hefty bruise upon the soft flesh just behind his shoulder blade, before the ribcage began. Azzuen was as precise as he could be with his strike, the spear was like and extension of his own body, he knew how it worked, how to use it best, and what areas were most prone to receiving maximal damage with minimal effort.

His own ears mimicked Lace's during the move, becoming lost amongst the thick mess that was his forelock and mane. After he struck out with the blunt end of his spear, he lifted his muzzle, and re-angled his wing to be lower, more to his side - by this time Lace was presumably on his way down from his rear, closer to the ground, so they were on slightly more even ground. The dark steed now used the bony edge of his wing to wrap around the underside of Lace's neck. The wing itself was incapable of choking or otherwise pommeling the stallion from this angle, so Azzuen swiftly used his weight to push into the stallion. If he was lucky, he might have caught Lace while he was still recovering his balance, and he would be able to simply knock him further off balance, and otherwise assert his dominance in this spar.


[ 735 words.
Azzuen dodges the rear by bowing down and to the left, before surging forward with the blunt end of his spear, aiming for just behind Lace's shoulder area. As he stood up higher, he wrapped the bony edge of his wing around the underside of Lace's neck and pushed into him, trying to tip him off balance. ]



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Lace the Silverthorn Posts: 459
Deceased atk: 5 | def: 9 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 15.3 hh :: 14 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Fajira :: Plain White Dragon :: Fire Breath Chan
#4
"We're soldiers in a war and none of us are backing down
And I will show you victory is mine before we leave this battleground
'Cause you don't wanna leave, and I don't wanna go
And I know just how this battle goes
You don't wanna leave and I don't wanna fight this kind of war...

- Jay Sean


It was pleasing to know that his opponent was about as skilled as Lace had imagined. Immediately evident from how the stallion ducked under his raised front hooves rather than trying to fend them off by rearing himself, Azzuen immediately exceeded his expectations by thrusting the spear toward his chest. With no time to pause and look to see which end of the spear the allied soldier chose to use, the Glazier steeled himself for the sensation of metal cutting through skin and flesh, coldly counting on his ribs to protect the vital organs within. He couldn't move away, the thrust was too quick, his body still suspended in midair, with hooves just barely beginning to make their way back down towards the blessed earth upon which they had been walking from the moment of birth.

The gray stallion gritted his teeth and grunted from discomfort as the wooden end of the spear smacked into his flesh and raked back over the ribs, with enough force to cause bruising and scrape off the outer layer of skin in some places. It was as he'd been hit by a whiplash, painting a line of stinging fire along the barrel. But he was grateful. Oh, so grateful, because the alliance was upheld and he wasn't bleeding, and with this Lace was allowed to enjoy the battle on a whole new level. No more worrying about whether this was a serious fight or a friendly bout, whether his life was in danger while holding back on the opponent. Now he could relax, and by the gods he would enjoy himself.

The impact when he reconnected with the ground was familiar and comfortable, the jarring of the head enough to shake unimportant thoughts from the mind. When the crook of the Throat soldier's wing caught his neck and pushed into him, Lace backed up while trying to endure the disgusting feel of something clamping in on the windpipe. He wouldn't allow himself to be knocked off balance, and he wasn't so kind as to let a challenge go unanswered.

As he backed away, the front hooves stepped high and attempted to rake down the shins of the black stallions forelegs, hopefully trampling the sensitive coronets in the process. The neck arched further, tightening into a narrow arch in order to reach over the feathered wing and aim a bite at the joint where appendage met body. It would be little more than a nip to mark the intent should it land, as Lace had no intention to impair the flight ability of an ally, but had he been serious it would have been more than painful. A pegasus wings were their greatest strength - and their greatest weakness. Take them away, and they would be clumsier than most equines since few were trained on ground battle tactics.

Using the opportunity of Lace occupying the front of the General, Fajira suddenly decided to make her move. Silently, without her normal defiant battle cries, she folded her wings and fell from the sky like a white projectile. At the last minute she unfurled the wings again and aimed with the claws on all four legs towards Azzuen's rump, intending to dig the sharp talons into his skin and latch on, biting the dock and whipping with the scaled tail to cause as much discomfort as she could without doing permanent damage.


[Word count: 562 Magic: 0/1 Companion 1/1 Lace took the hit with the spear, bruising the point just behind the shoulder and scraping over the ribs. Stepped backwards to avoid being pushed off balance by the wing, attempting to rake the shins and trample the coronets on Azzuen's forelegs. Aimed a bite for the joint between body and wing.

Fajira flew down from her spot above the horses, attempting to latch onto Azzuen's rump with her claws, bite his dock and whip the tail over his flanks. ]

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Ázzuen the Ardent Posts: 94
Deceased
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 15.1 :: 8
Whit
#5

It stung, the retaliation of the grulla stallion, as Azzuen's shins felt the raking motions of Lace's hooves, he curled his muzzle up in pain and distaste. Azzuen's immediate reaction was to strike out, move his forelimbs, get them out of the way, stop the other from being able to hit them so easily. The small, tender target of his coronet band was struck, however it was only his left hoof that felt the blow - the right one had managed to flail wildly enough out of the way, and hopefully back into Lace's own forelegs. Teeth ground together, as he gritted them against the stinging pain - though his mind told him it could be worse, a lot worse, sometimes those small, stinging scratches were more painful simply because they were more irritating, itched for ages afterwards as they healed, and left scars that could take a season to fade. Just with all the other scars my bodice does possess.. The thought barely had time to gain any traction however, as the pressure of this fight rose considerably.

A deep, rumbling call echoed from the maw of the stallion, as the tender flesh of sinew and joint were clamped between dull, blunt teeth. Again, the General reflected on how much worse this situation could be, how much deadlier it would have been should an enemy have heeded to his call today. He was grateful, that his life was not on the line, and relished in the challenge of tiptoeing along the line of causing severe damage, or damage enough to assert one's prowess in battle. It was a thin, delicate, fragile line, one that he clearly did not have enough practise with - too often had his skills been put to the test in true dire situations, not enough had he simply sparred for the sake of sparring. Even in the pain that was caused, it was refreshing to know he was only defending himself from some bruises and cuts.

The ache of his left wing rendered it awkward to try and take flight, but the intimate contact their bodies were in made that option unviable anyway. Azzuen pulled away, sitting down upon his rump to dislodge the grulla's vice-like grip, before catching a glimpse of white in the periphery of his vision - it wasn't until the stinging of her bites that he realised Fajira had joined the fray, attempting to inflict more damage upon him. It was almost immediate for him to buck in response, but that would require bowing his head closer to Lace, as his hind end would rise. So, instead of bucking, Azzuen let a grin, manic and wild in the rush of the situation, cross his façade. With crackling efficiency, his wild, unruly mane stood on end, and swinging his tail as a sort of warning to the dragon, he activated the magic that would repel from his hide, leaving behind only minimal bald scratches where she had managed to land upon his broad, muscular hide. The Pegasus didn't worry about using his magic against her, it would push her back to the skies, where he was confident her wings would spread and carry her safely away - not like ground ridden foes who would be pommelled only further into the dirt.

With his wings clamped tightly against his flanks now, Azzuen used his hindquarters, which were already engaged, ready for action, to pivot his bodice to his left, exposing his right side to the equine steed of the Edge. The soil beneath him bent to the weight of his body, the grass tickled his pasterns as they carried him about. As he transferred his weight to his front feet, he continued bringing his hind end around, lifting both his back feet from the ground to swing them around, and strike a firm kick out in Lace's direction, using the momentum of his move to its highest advantage. If his aim was accurate, he would touch near where his spear had struck before, or perhaps a bit higher, on the softer, more pliable flesh of his nape. Upon landing from his kick, the stallion pranced forward several strides, bellowing a great, hearty chuckle as he did so. Tossing his handsome crown, he turned to Lace with a smile, even though a small limp affected him, he nodded to this ally, and awaited the dust to settle to see who would rise the victor.

[740 words.
Magic: 1/2
Posts: 2/2
Azzuen flails his forelegs a bit to dodge most of Lace's foreleg strike.
Gets hit with Lace's bite to his wing, pulls back to dislodge him, also calls out to maybe disorient Lace a bit.
As soon as Fajira lands Azzuen uses his magic to repel her away, therefore only getting himself some minor scratches.
Azzuen's final attack is to turn himself to the left and swing his hindquarters around to round-house-kick/double-barrel at Lace, aiming for his neck/area that his spear hit before.

<3 This has been great Chan, they should chat afterwards :-) ]


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Lace the Silverthorn Posts: 459
Deceased atk: 5 | def: 9 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 15.3 hh :: 14 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Fajira :: Plain White Dragon :: Fire Breath Chan
#6
"We're soldiers in a war and none of us are backing down
And I will show you victory is mine before we leave this battleground
'Cause you don't wanna leave, and I don't wanna go
And I know just how this battle goes
You don't wanna leave and I don't wanna fight this kind of war...

- Jay Sean


The sensation of having his hooves connect with skin-clad bone was an odd one indeed today. On one hand it was very satisfying, seeing as his choice of attack had been correct and landed where intended, but on the other hand he didn't really wish to hurt this stallion. They held no grudges against one another, wasn't quarreling about anything. The grimace of pain Lace noticed on Azzuen's face caused him to hesitate, pause in the trampling of the legs for a fraction of a second. Had he gone too far? Did he do too much?

He ultimately payed for that mistake as a retaliating pegasus managed to land a few scrapes of his own in the efforts to get away. Hissing on exhale, the silver grulla felt the stinging sensation as skin was scabbed away from his left cannon, adding to the dull throbbing of the ribs.
The pain was good though. It washed away the moment of hesitation like a mouthful of dry grass would drain away from the throat with a chug of water. Only, in this case it was a water consisting of annoyance over himself, for bringing emotions into a fight like a green colt. After all these years, he should know better than to go too easy on an opponent; in the end, he'd always suffer for it himself. And in a friendly spar like this one, he'd do the General a disservice by not coming at him properly - what would they gain by turning it into nothing but a dance?

It felt better when the second attack landed and his mouth became filled with a mixture of feathers and skin. The pained bellow of a cry erupting from the black steed didn't bother him this time, and while the grip wasn't overly hard, Lace did his best to hang on to the joint as Fajira swooped down, realizing her attack would come despite the silence that echoed between them.

Oh, how well they knew one another.

What he didn't know about, what none of them knew, was that Azzuen had a concealed weapon in his arsenal. Fajira realized it only when an invisible force flung her backwards, away from the broad target and all but nullifying her attack. The squawk she made as she tumbled back into the air was a mixture of surprise and dismay upon realizing that her claws held nothing but a few tufts of coarse equine hair.
As for Lace, he barely realized it at all. He was too busy with the fact that his prey was escaping, managing to tear himself free - leaving the Glazier with a mouthful of down and a strange prickling sensation in the lips, as if he'd tasted water struck by lightning. Curious, but nothing he had time to dwell over now.

Ceasing his backward movement, black hooves found traction against the moist green ground once more just in time to see how the other stallion threw himself into a forward leap. Their positions were familiar, the initiating jump to gain momentum one he had seen many times before. Recollections from earlier battles told the white-maned veteran how the other would most likely touch down with the forelegs, swing the rear around and launch a kick... It was a basic move, very common but also quite tricky to avoid.

There was a choice to make. Either try to back off and risk having those powerful rear hooves smack the underside of the head, veer to the left and perhaps get hit squarely in the chest... No, he would do neither of them.
Instead, he gathered himself and leaped to counter the others move, aiming for a point ahead and slightly to the left of himself. It brought him out of reach of the kick, but also rattled him as the massive bulk of the pegasus smacked into the right side. Air was pushed from his lungs with a wheezing sound, Lace sidestepped slightly to regain his balance - and watched Azzuen charge forward with a hearty chuckle, out of range and thus ending the bout.

He couldn't help but laugh too as he slowly began to follow the other, even though the shoulder ached from the stab of the spear and the impact with the heavy soldier, even though he was out of breath and the legs dirtied by mud and grass and stinging scrapes. It didn't matter; it felt good, to know that he'd held his own and not shamed himself.

And really, wasn't this just a lovely spring day? Fajira certainly seemed to think so, judging by her jubilant cries that echoed across the Meadow.

[Word Count: 775 Lace received a scrape down the left cannon. Fajira was pushed away by the magic. Lace countered the barrel-roll kick by jumping forward and to the left, landing side by side with Azzuen and colliding with his rear end.]

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#7
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L a c e | A z z u e n
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By my verdict AZZUEN is the winner.

LACE -- post 1 (attack only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Attack: rear

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Easy read
+ 1| Flow

AZZUEN -- post 1

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: avoid rear
+ 1| Attack: wing distraction
+ 1| Attack: spear
+ 1| Attack: wing off-balance
- 1| Powerplay: “The dark steed now used the bony edge of his wing to wrap around the underside of lace’s neck.” – you’re assuming too much of their positioning and trapping Lace into this maneuver. Remember you can only aim/attempt/hope for actions on another character.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Easy read
+ 1| Flow

LACE -- post 2

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: no mention of wing distraction
+ 1| Defense: ribs hit by spear
+ 1| Defense: back away from wing
- 1| Attack: shin scraping – if you’re backing up you wouldn’t be able to utilize your front hooves. Even if you did lift them higher than normal there’d be no power behind them as you’re using your front end to push you back.
+ 1| Attack: wing nip
+ 1| Attack: dragon to rump

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Easy read
+ 1| Flow

AZZUEN -- post 2

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: coronet stepped on
+ 1| Attack: hoof flailing
+ 1| Defense: wing bite
+ 1| Defense: dragon bites
+ 1| Attack: repel magic
+ 1| Attack: buck

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Easy read
+ 1| Flow

LACE -- post 3 (defense only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: struck cannon
+ 1| Defense: Fajira tossed into sky
- 1| Defense: leaping forward/left – you running into Azzuen would likely hurt him as well, which attacks are not permitted in this post, and I’m not understanding how you would have avoided the kick? If you land so Azzuen is on your right side, the kick would have gotten you at some point on your right ribs/flanks. It doesn’t make sense you’d be side by side with Azzuen when he did 2 points of turning to angle away, and neither can you be out of reach of the kick, but close enough to run into Azzuen when you landed. I’m just confused and it doesn’t seem to make sense for the situation.


LACE

[Bonus]
+ 1| Breed
+ 1| Health - tied

[Injuries]
None.

[Creativity]
None.

Comments: You did a really fantastic job, I loved the emotion in this post and how well you used your companion, even with the bond block. Your biggest point deductions were some attacks/defenses that didn’t seem physically realistic, so focus most on that and don’t forget to include surroundings!

AZZUEN

[Bonus]
+ 1| Breed
+ 1| Health - tied

[Injuries]
None.

[Creativity]
+ 1| Wing choke hold was neat!

Comments: This was a great fight, I definitely get a good sense of Azzuen’s military mind, but you still manage to inject motive and emotions in. You had some great attacks and defense reactions, but don’t forget your surroundings next time!

TOTAL
LACE - 62
AZZUEN - 68


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