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[complete] Skills to Hone [Gaucho]

Snö Posts: 155
Deceased atk: 4 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16.2 hh :: 4 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
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#1

   SNÖ</style>
  what did they aim for when they missed your heart?</style>


Sometime last evening the pale princess with a heart frozen over had slipped away to the Frozen Arch, across the Steppe snow wet and cold, to the cavernous place where the tunnels twisted tighter, into the very wombs of the Arch where one could, quite easily, become hopelessly ensnared. If not for the ice walls, it would be pitch, yet as it was in the height of noon faint light filtered through the sullenly dripping walls, beads of water trickling down as the full heat of the sun centered on the glassy maze; even as it was, the lighting was not unnecessarily bright here.

Snö settled her weight upon her haunches, setting her hind to the door. At her side Tarak stood, dim amber eyes unseeing, his metallic form shaped into a wolf's body. It was a wonderfully good sculpture, and Snö often found herself admiring Ulrik for being able to create such a detailed masterpiece, and liked the gruff crafter even more for giving Tarak to her, and never attempting to take it back. It would've been a poor thing to do, take back the spoiled princess' toys; she loved her toys, and possessed them like a dragon hoarding jewels. Never would she let them go without a fight.

Why had the filly burrowed away into the labyrinth of the Arch? Simply because she wanted relaxation, to be at ease, to forgo the niceties of society and it's burden. The mare dozed, easing herself into a catnap, while the golden machine set beside her stood, frozen, tail aloft and eyes sharp. Yet as the morning had dwindled onto noon, she find herself growing bored. So she called out softly, knowing the echoes would drift afar- "Fight me!"



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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#2
 


Gravedigger, when you dig my grave can you make it shallow? So that I can feel the rain..



Gaucho had never been to the Steppe before. It was almost as far away from the warm sands of the Throat, as one could go. Yet the brute had been feeling restless; his patrolling shift did not begin until later that evening, and Gaucho felt no desire to lounge around the Throat, avoiding idle chatter with the harem of mares.Although his sense of duty to protect his family was as strong as ever, he still felt distant from a great many of them, as he often failed to understand simple societal etiquette, or to even hold a conversation. He was a warrior, a sold-jur as My-dus called him; his duty was to guard and defend, not to chit-chat. Yet he constantly felt as though he was expected to uphold these strange and awkward customs. It was confusing, and while his primitive mind could not fully comprehend the complexities of the emotions he was feeling, he felt frustrated none the less.

And so, Gaucho flew.

Mara, the black mamba snake who had taken a liking to him, and literally hung around (in his antlers), did not approve of flying at all. As the altitude increased and the air pressure and temperature dropped, her cold-blooded body grew stiff and lifeless, and the mental bond that they shared became erratic and hostile. Still, Gaucho did not pay much attention - it was she who chose to stick around, and while he would provide for her the ways he could, he would not alter his decisions purely for her own physical comfort.

Nearing the Arch, the brute was intrigued by the labyrinth of caves which gleamed in the mid-day sun below. Bringing his wings to his sides and descending downwards, he landed upon the snow with a soft thud, marveling at how crystalline and unaffected by the sun these lands appeared to be. With a grunt, the large bay entered into one of the caves, folding his massive wings neatly at his sides, as the width of the cave dictated so. Moving towards the back - which was not a back, but merely an entrance to another cave - Gaucho’s gray-blue gaze inspected the walls with interest, noting how smooth the surfaces appeared to be.

Fight me...fight me...f i gh t m e .....

Perking his ears forward, he caught an echo which sounded relatively close, saying one of his favourite phrases. Without a moments thought, the bay lurched forward, picking up a bouncy trot as he moved deeper into the maze. Rounding a corner, still moving forward quite quickly, he spied a rather tall roan unicorn facing him, with some sort of contraption at her side. In the blink of an eye, Gaucho’s primitive mind did what it did best: it turned off. He no longer thought, he merely processed information. He took in the mare, and assumed it was she who made the challenge. He noted the horn, recalling his spar with the hearted-stallion, and became aware of the dangers of leaving her an opening to spear him. Finally, he noted the slick walls of the cave, and how little room there was on either side - room for them to pass each other, but not much more. All of this, his simple mind took in, in seconds, spitting out one simple command: fight

With a grunt, Gaucho’s trot increased to a choppy canter, as his large hooves slammed into the icy floor, trying not to skid. He was only about 10 feet away when this charge began, and quickly the distance between the two began to diminish. As Gaucho neared Sno’s left shoulder, he lowered his rack of antlers, meaning to scrape against her lower neck and upper shoulder as he passed. Assuming that she would likely try to step to the side, or rush past him as he came at her, he waited until the point when their shoulders might pass, and as his left foreleg was about to hit the ground, he threw his weight to left, into her flank, hoping to shove her body into the ice wall. As he passed, he tucked his head defensively away, to the right, incase her hooves should begin to fly. As he did so, he bucked towards her rear once he gauged he has passed her, hoping to smack her in the ass, should she be stupid enough to have stood still. Continuing his momentum, noting that it would be hard to stop on the ice without sliding, Gaucho continued down the labyrinth corridor, hoping it would end up in another cave, with more room to move around, rather than the hallway-like area he had just come from.

[WC 800. 1/3 Attack. 0/2 Magic/Companion. Gaucho will be using buffs endure, and bulk.]



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Snö Posts: 155
Deceased atk: 4 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16.2 hh :: 4 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
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#3

   SNÖ</style>
  what did they aim for when they missed your heart?</style>


All around the mare chiseled and honed of ice was the unfluctuating sound of dripping liquid, drops of glacial water that fell to the glittering, glistening floors, floors that shone and sparkled with a gorgeous light, a light that refracted off the breathtakingly beautiful near-mare, the mare that winter kissed with cold, frosted lips. Snö waited in silence, a smooth statue devoid of moment save of the elegant, steady rise and fall of her silver breast. Amidst the drops of water she detected a sound, a muffled little thump, and here and there a quick fall of rain hitting the ground, as if something, or someone, had disturbed the walls of the glacier tunnels. Patience had never been the exquisite princess' strong suit, yet she collected herself.

"Tarak," she warned with her creamy lips, feeling brazen and bold as the unknown approached. The metal machine did nothing to acknowledge her voice, but there was not a trace of her doubt in frozen heart nor glacial cold mind that he had heard her. Once Ulrik had told her the bronze creature had no feelings, but would listen, and Snö knew Ulrik would not lie. Never before had the metal wolf failed her, and it would continue to obey, the mindless servant it was. What she said was a simple omen to the coming battle.

Little ice princess stood, unblinking, as first the shadow loomed, long and warped from the refracted light twisting through thin walls and thick walls, of ice corroded and ice wide. An inferior creature, perhaps, may have shuddered to see the massive shadow blocking out the glittering light, and indeed Snö's heart skipped a beat. Her mouth tingled in fear, and she shook away the worries. Tarak would protect her if needed.

Then there was action!

Bursting out in a canter there was a stallion. Snö's eyes took in swiftly wings that would be absolutely behemoth if extended, the antlers on his brow, the glittering ebony snake coiled there, and the strange markings painted on his dark body. A dreamcatcher danced in his antlers- how strange. Revulsion rose in her at the sight of those wings, a sickening disgust that only urged her to fight, to defeat. On the other hand... she had little formal training in the matter of battle, and her natural instincts warned her of the snake. Despite all... of him, and his differences, something reminded her of Thais, the Monster of the Edge; perhaps his huge build, the slightly empty eyes. While this unknown stallion, however, had to focus on his movements on the tight enclosed space, Snö was lithe and slender, light-footed on the slick, treacherous ice that was all too ready to betray someone's hooves.

Snö waited patiently for the incoming stallion. Beside her, Tarak growled, a low rumble in his chest that deepened in pitch and grew louder in sound. Trained to protect her, the mechanical creature was more than ready to leap ahead of her, out of the complex mechanics running it. "Stay, Tarak." Snö ordered, voice clipped. Immediately the growl reverberating through the tight space shut off, falling silent.

The stallion's head dropped, and for the briefest of moments Snö hesitated, before letting her own fall downwards, glittering horn pointed towards him. Indeed his assumptions were correct; there was pain, surprising pain, as the massive pegasus- hybrid, Snö realized incorrectly- as the antlers cut at her skin. Brooking a quick side-pass, she moved to the right, away from him. Naturally she thought herself doing what was best, only to find herself with Gaucho throwing himself towards her. Well aware of the possibly catastrophic effects for her should he succeed, with his extra weight, she turned on her haunches, facing perpendicular to his shoulder, and continued the rotation, so her hindquarters were at his flank. Once-twice, her hinds went out in quick succession, doing her best to aim at his shoulder- or upper leg, considering their difference in size.

Unfortunately, this stallion seemed well aware of any consequences that may occur, keeping his head carefully tucked away to the right. Snö huffed a touch, realizing she had been so foolishly expecting an easy kill as she had that day with a rapist. The last kick at her rump had gone untaken, due to her movement. Picking up a canter behind him, she followed the stallion to wherever he was going to next, staying a safe twenty paces away. "Tarak, heel!" Snö called, feeling unsettled by the stallion's preparedness and collection. She wanted the company of her loyal dog.

[WC: 760 || 1/3 attack || 0/2 Magic/Companion Uses - counting Tarak as Companion/Magic]
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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#4
 


Gravedigger, when you dig my grave can you make it shallow? So that I can feel the rain..



Gaucho was still not used to the way it felt to have his antlers scrape against flesh. Because they were magically affixed to his brow, rather than protruding from his brow bone as surely they must with elk and moose, they felt…thick to him, relaying little information back to his brain. As he struck the Unicorn, Gaucho was unable to tell where he had exactly hit her; had it been her shoulder, as he was aiming for? Had it been lower, higher? Had it pierced her flesh, or merely scraped against her coat? Moving far too quickly to be able to tell, Gaucho swung his body left as his left foreleg struck the ground, but hit only air. Grunting, the bay concluded that he must have misperceived the width of the corridor they were currently in, as he had previously believed there was not room to turn length-wise with him next to her - but then, she was somewhat smaller; perhaps the reflection of the ice had played a trick on his eyes? Blending in her whitish coat with the icy walls? Whatever it was, she hadn't been nearly fast enough. Girl is dumb he thought with a grunt, hearing her hooves strike the ground twice as she kicked in his direction - though he was already easily out of her reach, having cleared the length of her body in one stride after gauging her with his antlers.

The footing beneath him was slick with black ice, the type that coated the rock colourlessly, only revealing how slippery its surface was once stepped upon. As Gaucho came into a large cave, this one about 30 feet in diameter, he skidded to a stop, spreading his massive black wings as he did so to buffet against the air and slow him down. Bringing his right wing into his body, he swung around to the right, like a crude skater. The unicorn was behind him, having followed at about 20 paces. Without hesitation, Gaucho lunged forward, his large hooves slamming down into the ice with the front of his hooves striking first, as if using the edge to push off with and aid in traction. He also kept his wings out spread to aid in balance, as he raced towards her. He gauged that even should she try to stop, surely she would slide as he did: she was smaller than he, but not that much smaller, and had a somewhat thicker build which would add additional weight. As he ice-picked his way towards her, he was glad that he had trained in the mud with Aryel, and on the sands with Lupus and Valentine. His muscles did not feel tired, as they once might have, from the increased effort and strength required to move oneself steadily and quickly across the ice.

Rather than veering for her shoulder like last time, Gaucho's bulk was aimed head-on. With outspread wings, Gaucho was able to correct his movements, and kept his steely gaze directed upon Sno to combat any defence she might make, whether it to be to veer to the side, or spin to kick him. He was aiming to use his antlers, once again. As he neared her, brow lowered, he intended to heatbutt her cheek, or to catch her horn in his antlers should she try to stab him. With his head lowered, although Mara could not participate on the ground, given the temperature, she could still aid Gaucho from her place in his antlers. Her black eyes were focused on the white unicorn, just waiting for Gaucho to bring her within reach. All it would take was to be within 6 inches…Like a flash, as Gaucho neared Sno (either hitting her or not), the white snake lashed out. Holding on with her tail to Gaucho's antlers, she launched herself towards the right side of Sno's neck her white body elongating like a thrown yo-yo, aiming for somewhere near where where Sno's neck connected to her jaw. At the same time, Gaucho braced for impact, throwing his body forward hard, using his bulk to his advantage as he had learned to do in his past array of spars.

As Gaucho's momentum carried him onwards , his primitive mind wondered why a creature with even less resources to use to combat the ice than he had, would demand a challenge in a place like this? Of course Gaucho would never turn away from a spar regardless of how odd the terrain was - he merely considered it a learning opportunity, and a way to gage his skills, but still. An ice maze? Flaring his wings up and out to slow himself and block her from attack his face, he kept his considerable ass pointed in her direction, defensively.



[WC: 796. Attack 2/3, Magic/Companion 1/2 ]

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Snö Posts: 155
Deceased atk: 4 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16.2 hh :: 4 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
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#5

   SNÖ</style>
  what did they aim for when they missed your heart?</style>


Damage check. Snö mused, testing the tender condition of her pearly neck. The wound inflicted was crassly created, with the rough tines of the antlers creating more scrapes than actual wounds, yet nevertheless marring her appearance far more than she liked. Likely she was not badly wounded around her creamy neck was because of the antlers' natures- on elk, and deer, and caribou, they were meant in order to rut, to crash heads and lock, but not to kill or harm. It was sore, because of the force put behind it with the huge stallion's red-painted bulk. But it would heal- hopefully not with scarring. Perhaps it would give her air-de-warrior, but she preferred her body gorgeous as ever, not banged up.

It was a pity, she reflected, that her hooves had hit only empty air, sending her in a rather slapdash manner running along, unable to stop as quickly as she would've preferred. Every time she put weight along her forehand, the wound on her neck throbbed in pleading protest. Princess, Snö scolded herself, shaking her head firmly. Yes, she was a princess, daughter to Mauja the FrostHeart and Psyche the DarkEmpress. No others she had ever heard of could boast of such royal lineage, and for that she preened herself. Even Tamlin was only the offspring of a slut. Yet she had to be strong, together, and sharp despite her age. She needed to be powerful, just as her father was, and her mother, as much as she may be unwilling to admit her mother was anything more than a run-away mare. After all, mother hadn't become the Dark Empress for nothing.

The ground was slippery underneath, devouring the sparkling light that poured in through the thin sheets of glassy ice and hard snow that made up the tunnels of the glacier. Every step had to be done carefully, eyes wary of treacherous footing that could throw her to the ground and betray her. Even Tarak seemed to be struggling, until he began to sink his toenails in deep, where they made a hideous sort of screech as they scraped along. The sound wasn't too loud in itself, but in the echoing caverns...

It was strange, chasing this pegasus. What did he have to be afraid of? She was just an innocent little girl, aft- black wings buffeted, hooves skidded. Quickly as she could, Snö reined herself in, back-pedaling, nearly dropping onto her hind-end in her composed haste to stop, before she went flying into the great, furry, winged (hideous) obstacle, and eliminating the thread of charging head-long into him. Here, the cave was larger, considerably so, with much more room. So this stallion was smarter than he looked. In the tighter cave, Snö with her height difference and more compact build, she would've held the advantage on the turf. On the other hand, Buttercup as she named the pegasus (the name mainly because it gave her amusement) was longer in the leg as a Hanoverian, but then again, they were known for fancy feet work. A pity that was.

Quickly as she could without rushing over details, Snö gauged the situation. First, they were still in the hall. As soon as entering the cave, he had turned about, with her being twenty paces behind him, she had not yet entered. Tarak was to her right, standing a step before her. Gaucho was coming in, already only five strides away. The tunnel could fit roughly four horses abreast here, opening up to the much larger cave. There was room to maneuver, but only just, even for her smaller form- and the ugly Buttercup was charging head-long at her.

Instead of moving, Snö waited, patient, cool, calm. Long legs. That was the key. The pale mare twisted to the left length-ways, blocking the tunnel, and she moved her head to the right, horn aimed towards the stallion's wings, pressing her hindquarters against the wall. It was then the snake struck out at her, gleaming white, but she was safe. Doing the instinctive reaction, she had tucked her head to protect her throatlatch, and twisted her head downwards, so the fangs slipped across her mane without nerve endings.

As the stallion moved towards her in order to buff her against the wall, she broke into a swift gallop, shoulder scraping against the ice, lashing out with her hinds as she went, aiming for his back end, well aware he could easily retaliate. Then, swiftly and smoothly, she turned, cantering forward with her head lowered, veering off slightly to the right, horn lowered and ready to spike him in the ass.

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( Sno is not able to use the wolf Ulrik crafted as a companion. It relies solely upon Ulrik's magic. You may not use another character's magic in battle. )

Snö Posts: 155
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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#8
 


Gravedigger, when you dig my grave can you make it shallow? So that I can feel the rain..



As Gaucho glided towards Sno, he watched as her body turned perpendicular, her horn angled at his right wing. Still a few strides out, Gaucho had time to sweep his wing up, pulling it closer to his body, but not completely out of the way. His focus became her thick white barrel which was now directly before him, rather than her cheek, which was guarded by her horn. Maybe not so dumb he thought halfheartedly. Still, she was stupid enough to stand still while he was charging at her. Bracing himself, he waited for a collision that did not come. ?????? his mind blanked. Magicz? he wondered frustratedly, but it was cut short by the feeling of her horn gliding between his feathers. Given the amount he had pulled the appendage up and in, her horn only grazed against the bottom, pulling a few feathers out and slicing the surface cleanly. The wound was shallow and not very long, but like with any paper-cut type wound, stung like a bitch. SssssssssssssSS Came a sound that felt like physical static to Gaucho’s soft mind, distracting him from the sting of his wound; it was Mara, internally screaming her rage as she recoiled with only a mouthful of mane. Her anger only confused the bruiser more; Yes, the unicorn must have magic- it would explain how the snake could find purchase on her neck, her horn could slice him, without Gaucho’s body ever hitting her.

As he swung his ass to the right, he felt a flare of red-hot pain, as one of her hooves caught the muscle on the back of his hindquarter. Luckily the cold of the ice caves likely diminished the immediate pain he might otherwise have felt, but no doubt it would leave a bruise tomorrow. As she galloped, Gaucho grunted with frustration, now understanding why she had chosen an icy arena; she must have some sort of ice-magic that allowed her to begin moving so quickly on such a slippery surface. He thought he had been clever digging his hooves into the ice, but clearly the stocky mare had more up her sleeve.

As his momentum slowed somewhat and Gaucho neared the side of the cave wall, finally turning without fear of slipping, out of the corner of his gaze, he spied the whitish mare turning with uncanny precision on the black ice. Slowly Gaucho felt the deliciously overwhelming feeling of his magic begin to grow, as the small sliced capillaries in his wing gently released what little blood they had within them. The wound was small, but it was enough to arouse his magic. Rotating on his hind-end to face Sno as she cantered his way, he threw caution to the wind. Twice now, he had hurled his massive frame towards her stocky body, and had hit nothing; all he wanted was to crush this illusive bitch. Digging his hooves into the ice as he had done before, he charged towards her; his purchase on the slippery cave floor was slow at first, but as his momentum increased he was able to ice-pick his hooves into the ground with growing accuracy and force. He didn’t care that she was running at him, nor that her horn was lowered his way: she wasn’t the only one with magic.

As he charged, an ethereal mist bled from his antlers, dropping in front of him but keeping pace with him as he moved. The mist took the form of a massive bear, who charged before Gaucho with uncanny speed. As their bodies neared, the bear leaped into the air - aiming itself straight for Sno. Its massive paws spread to either side, as if to clap on either sides of her skull, as its gaping jaws aimed for her muzzle. Roaring, its scream echoed throughout the cave. Moving with little fatigue, Gaucho lowered his right shoulder and pushed off with the left side of his hindquarter, feeling a twang of pain the muscle from her previous kick, and drifted to her left. Given the spirit-bear’s monstrous presence, Gaucho was unable to fully see the unicorn through the veil; relying on instincts and the ricochet of her hooves against the floor, he threw his body to the left once he gauged their shoulders where just passing. As he attempted to slam his left shoulder into any part of her right flank, he snapped his teeth as he turned his head to the left for just a stride, hoping to take a chunk out of the soft flesh behind her rib cage as he charged by. Defensively, Gaucho then tossed his head to the right, out of the way of flying hooves, and bucked towards her left hip, before continuing towards the opposite side of the cave.

[WC: 800 Cut down from 873 :| Attack 3/3, Magic and Companion 2/2
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Snö Posts: 155
Deceased atk: 4 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16.2 hh :: 4 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
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#9

   SNÖ</style>
  what did they aim for when they missed your heart?</style>


Pride. It overlaid the utter disgust, sickening twist of the gut, as she touched the foul creature given wings upon his shoulders. Her horn, a frosted silver spiral, cut smoothly, gliding, really, through the lower wing, catching and spearing a few feathers upon it. For a moment she thought wryly of her mother, the mare who festoons her mane and tail with teeth and bird-fur. Maybe she could do the same. No; she wanted to be feared at sight with the underlings, the ones inferior to her, not needing decor to represent her hate of them. Her horn, slender and strong, was considerably longer than the six inch length that Mara needed in order to strike.

As she swung in to kick out, her hooves caught on warm hide, finally. Patience she had, but like any little girl, she always wanted something instead of having to wait. Her delicate little ears, snow white, caught sound of his quiet grunt. A smile fell into place on her silvery muzzle, yet it quickly slid as she skittered forward, narrowly avoiding cracking onto the ground. Ice, glittering and shining, came what seemed obscenely close to her face as her cloven hooves went for a dance. The hot skin on her neck, slowly being dulled by the chilled air, gave another protest. Perhaps the reason, though, for Snö's grace was in her lineage, her background- Friesian blood. Known for high-stepping action and their natural agility, hence their use most frequently in dressage, allowed her somewhat of an advantage. Yet she was also smaller than Gaucho- a hand could be quite a bit in a fight- and she was hot-tempered, from time to time, in her cold, quiet way. Instead of hitting ice heavily, she skated over it- dubiously called 'ice magic' by Gaucho. Perhaps he forgets that she was raised in this land of ice, had lived here for a while now, and was at ease on the slick snow and treacherous ground.

Real magic, however, was the mist and silver fog that began at his antlers, lifting and curling, forming into something that Snö found, naturally, terrifying. Terror was not a feeling the filly was accustomed to. Always she had been respected, at least within her herd, being known as the daughter of ice and cold. She lived up to the expectations of the Plague, with her heart frozen over. Not quite so machine-like as Thais, maybe, but rarely did she feel true heat- passion, or fury, or consuming fear.

But a ghost-bear charging at her was quite unlike anything she had seen before. Her heart practically stopped in its beating, pumping tracks as it leaped, paws reaching out and forward, a silver ghost. While uncertain about how substantial the beast might be, she did not want to run headlong just because she was uncertain. That would simply be idiocy. Terror. Paralyzing fear that sent her hauling back on her haunches, yet the beast did touch her, sending a chilling, numbing sensation crawling down her face. It did not hurt, except for the wild bump-bump-bump-bump of her pounding heart. For whatever reason, Tarak had not leaped to defend her. It must have something to do with it being a spirit, not a real, tangible thing. In any case, her mouth was too dry to cry out, command him to her side.

Eventually the ghost did fade, but in the narrow corridor her and Gaucho were inside, she had little room to maneuver, at least in the few moments before he came hitting her head long. But hey! If he wanted to attack her parallel, she could hit back. Snö's heart eases back to normal pace as the stallion comes charging, throwing his weight into her. Without resisting, she allows her body to move fluidly, not necessarily gracefully but well-enough, away, her shoulder scraping the wall, absorbing the main shock of the blow to her side. Yes, it hurt; red blood still welled up on her left side where her body had scraped ice, and her right shoulder felt intimately bruised from the larger stallion's weight. But as for his kick out, she turned, having more room now that Gaucho was largely past her, backing away with her hooves slipping over the ice, sunlight flashing in her eyes.

As far as she was concerned, she was ready to finish. Enough blood had been taken from her satin coat, and she would prefer not to have to deal with any more wounds. "Finish?" She calls, backing away to a respectable distance, wary of any more attacks. He might have been a good opponent, but she still hated him for bearing wings, still found her gut twisting in horror at the sight of him.

[WC: 790 || Attack: 3/3 || OOC: It was lovely sparring with you!!]

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#10
 


Gravedigger, when you dig my grave can you make it shallow? So that I can feel the rain..



In his last few spars, Gaucho had been perfecting his shoulder-check method, employing it whenever it was possible for him to do so. He had learned how to push off with his opposing hind leg, to throw his considerable bulk into his opponent, and always enjoyed the feeling of their bodies skirting away under his force. Given how elusive this filly has been during their ice-escapades, Gaucho grunted pleasurably as he felt her body’s trajectory change after contact with his. His primitive mind flooded with emotion, something akin to, about fucking time. He was a little disappointed that she had evaded his long-legged buck, but given that she had not retaliated in anyway, he supposed that was alright.

Nearing the opposing end of the cave, Gaucho slowed his momentum, raising his massive black wings to aid in stopping. Turning on the ice, he eyed the filly stoically, his steely gray-blue gaze blank and emotionless. Finish? He heard her call out. His large ears flicked forward to catch the sound, then his left ear pointed backwards as her voice echoed throughout the enclosed cave. Snorting, the bone piercing his nose moving as he did so, he felt Mara pressing upon his mind with her will, wanting to attack again. She was the one who had issued the challenge after all...But as his gaze took in the blood on Sno’s side from where he had launched her into the wall, even his primitive mind could understand. She was a child after all, perhaps looking for nothing more than a way to pass the time - not a way to break her bones. Knowing nothing of the racism of the Basin, not that he would understand it if he had, he decided to let things be. He had fought a new opponent who had challenged, and bested him on the slippery ice, and for that he was grateful. While some might be annoyed at having been disadvantaged in such an arena, Gaucho was forever looking for opportunities to better his skills, and this filly had unknowingly aided him in that.

Gaucho nodded, his thick muscular neck arching it somewhat, in the manner of stallion’s, as he extended his right wing, where a thin line of blood had formed on the surface from her slice. Holding it out for a moment, as if to say perhaps You held your own, he folded the wing back to his side. His left hip was a little sore from her kick; no doubt the chill of the cave had numbed the flesh somewhat, masking the bruising which was sure to come. Perhaps he would walk a little more in this frozen place, so different from his herd land, to stretch out his bruised muscle, but also to learn what this area had to offer strategically, should he ever find himself sparring here again.

With a grunt, Gaucho turned from the filly, ignoring Mara’s flashes of striking at her again, and exited the cave.

[WC: 510 Closing Defense 1/1 Great sparring with you as well! Thanks!]

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#11


G a u c h o | S n ö
- - - - -
By my verdict GAUCHO is the winner.
Gaucho has been awarded one VP and has unlocked DANCE.

GAUCHO -- post 1 (attack only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Attack: horn scrape.
+ 1| Attack: shove.
+ 1| Attack: buck.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Ease of read.
+ 1| Flow.

SNÖ -- post 1

[Realism]
0| Defense: the horn scrape. I would've liked a bit more detail, in regards to where they scrape her skin, and the effects of it - blood? Nice with the side pass, though.
+ 1| Defense: spinning away from the shove, though it's somewhat of a stretch in the narrow corridor.
- 1| Attack: bucking. With Gaucho running past Snö, I find it unlikely she'll have the time to do a 360 and kick at him, least of all his front end, before he is past her.
- 1| Defense: moving to avoid kick. I am a bit iffy about it, as the close quarters, and the fact that realistically this buck would be simultaneous to Snö's attempt, I think he would've hit her. A good thought to try and avoid it, but in this situation it wouldn't really work.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Ease of read.
+ 1| Flow.

GAUCHO -- post 2

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: avoiding buck by running past.
+ 1| Attack: antlers to her face.
+ 1| Attack: snake bite.
- 1| Situational: I don't understand what you're doing in the last few sentences. Running past her? Stopping where you are? I think it would've been much better to end this post on the open note of striking for her face, and the snake striking too, and just leave it at that, instead of moving past that point in this manner, as I frankly have no idea of where Gaucho is anymore.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Ease of read.
0| Flow: this post had some awkward transitions and choppiness, especially with repetitive wording in a few pargraphs.

SNÖ -- post 2

[Realism]
- 1| Attack: was the horn to his wing an attack? Because, as I read Snö's movements in the tunnel opening, right would face away from him, not against him. And if it wasn't an attack, it would've had to be more obvious it wasn't, as right now I'm wondering what it was and if it was one, it also should've been more obvious, and aimed.
- 1| Defense: no mention of the fact that he tried to gouge her face.
+ 1| Defense: tucking head to avoid the snake.
- 1| Attack: I'd see this as Gaucho running past her (given that that is what I think he did at the end of the previous post, though I'm not sure), and if she then broke into a gallop, she'd cross his path at a perpendicular angle, into the open/the cavern wall on the other side of the opening, so the whole thing with her shoulder scraping ice and kicking towards his butt confuses me, as I cannot properly picture where they are in relation to one another.
+ 1| Attack: horn to ass.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Ease of read.
+ 1| Flow.

GAUCHO -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: pulling wing in, sliced slightly by horn.
+ 1| Defense: somewhat bucked at.
+ 1| Attack: spirit bear.
+ 1| Attack: slamming against her.
- 1| Attack: bite to just behind her rib cage. The flank area of a horse is just in front of their hind leg, meaning that, realistically, he would not reach his aim if he slammed into her flank and then tried to bend back and bite towards the end of her rib area.
+ 1| Attack: bucking at her.
- 1| Defense: no mention of her attempt to spear him.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Ease of read.
+ 1| Flow.

SNÖ -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: spirit bear through face.
+ 1| Defense: moving with him up against the wall, though I didn't know they were still in the tunnel, I thought they were in the cavern. xD
- 1| Defense: no mention of his bite.
- 1| Defense: somehow doing a 180 and backing away from his buck. I don't really see this as plausible within the time frame.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Ease of read.
+ 1| Flow.

GAUCHO -- post 4 (defense only)

[Realism]
0| Nothing of note.


GAUCHO

[Bonus]
+ 2| Surroundings: well played with the slippery ice.
+ 1| Breed: I felt that the differences were mentioned a few times, but not really enough in relation to attacks/defenses to warrant the full points.

[Injuries]
0| Nothing of note.

[Creativity]
0| Nothing of note.

Comments: We-e-ell... this was a somewhat confusing fight, for me, as I was never quite sure of where, in relation to tunnels and caverns, the pair of you were... Anyhow, I haven't got a lot to remark on: you did well, on the whole, and with the footing too. Sometimes you were a bit mushy with what you were actually doing, and once you acted in an anatomically illogical fashion, but they were isolated instances. Good job.

SNÖ

[Bonus]
+ 2| Surroundings: well played with the slippery ice.
+ 1| Breed: I felt that the differences were mentioned a few times, but not really enough in relation to attacks/defenses to warrant the full points.

[Injuries]
0| Nothing of note.

[Creativity]
0| Nothing of note.

Comments: In all honesty, this was, sometimes, very confusing.. there was the whole tunnel entrance thing where I was just like "what", so try to elaborate more on that! I think that one of your biggest problems during this fight was pacing, as in, how long/short it actually takes to do something. A buck is very fast, for example, but a spin-around for a horse in these conditions would take a lot longer. So try to visualize everything as you write, with lefts and rights, and make sure that all the necessary details to make it believable are there - and if it still doesn't seem believable to you when you envision/write it, it probably won't seem believable to the judge either. ;) Keep practicing!
Also, it was really strange that you did no last attack in post 3, as that effectively rendered the closing defense obsolete, and made it some kind of 2,5 round spar. xD

TOTAL
Gaucho - 69
Snö - 60

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Thank you judge! This setting was pretty confusing xD


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