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[COMPLETED] Strike the War Drums [Gaucho]

Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#1



Her fight with Note had been stimulating, but after a few day's rest to restore her aching muscles Aryel was at it again, searching for more horses willing to train with her. Crowley may have been an arrogant, cowardly bastard, but he was an arrogant, cowardly bastard that was bigger than her, had two dangerous jabbing horns, and no doubt had an ace up his metaphorical sleeve if he was finally willing to fight the blue mare. Some time before, she had propositioned Gaucho for a second fight between them. As in her previous spar with Note, she wanted to train herself to rely on her light hooves, dancing away from attacks instead of simply bracing her muscles and throwing herself into them. It was effective at times, but horses her size couldn't throw their weight around in a fight with impunity.

And so Gaucho had agreed to a rematch, and thankfully, it seemed that they wouldn't be fighting in the rain this time. A few clouds scudded across the bright blue sky, but otherwise it was a beautiful clear day. Aryel on a cliff overlooking the oasis in the distance, her wings shining dully in the sunlight as she half-spread them to let the wonderfully cool breeze cool her feathered limbs. She had opted not to spar in the canyon arena she had discovered, finding it a somewhat stupid thing to do when it was high noon. This area provided a good breeze, at least. The plateau rose high above the desert sands, it's flat top composed of red-orange rock. A sloping trail wound across one face of the cliff, but it was much more easily accessible from the air. A handful of palms and scrub clustered in one area, it was anybody's guess as to how they got up there in the first place. The thicket was now occupied by one juvenile fruit bat, happily sleeping in the shade of a palm. Keeping her pet on her back while fighting would be a pretty foolish thing to do. All in all, it was a perfect place for two pegasi to spar, giving them the opportunity to both fight on the ground and take to the skies with ease. Aryel looked out over the desert, then sent a high call on the air, letting Gaucho know the location of their fight. As she waited patiently, she reflected on the brute. She had yet to meet a horse who had such a weak grasp of their language and such a seemingly simple mind. He was also one of the most loyal horses she met, as well as one with notable rugged, almost handsome looks. She wrinkled her nose at the last thought. Where The hell had that come from? Mooning over stallions who didn't even think for themselves. Ridiculous. With a snort, she banished the thought and thought about Crowley's smug face instead. Any thoughts of masculine stallions were quickly banished by happy thoughts of sending the brindle crying for his mama.

(3 action posts each, no magic or companions. Setting is a large, roughly circular plateau with one trail up/down and a thicket of palms and scrub on the south edge.)

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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#2



During the invasion of the Foothills earlier that season, Gaucho had squared off against a flying paint, who had been his only opponent to land an actual attack during the entire battle. While his shoulder had healed without any complications, and the invasion had been successful and swift, Gaucho still realized that he had much more training to do. Although he had represented the Throat well, had circumstances been different, well....The warrior knew that his skills could always be improved upon. Since his last spar with Aryel, that afternoon in the rain, Gaucho had sparred with anyone who would face him. His strength and agility had greatly increased, as had his use of the antlers which he now wore proudly on his forehead, and the collar of sharpened bone around his neck. Still, he recalled how swift Aryel’s slender and delicate body had been during their last spar, and new that once again, that would likely be her greatest advantage.

Gliding high over the Throat, Gaucho herd Aryel’s cry ringing out across the light breeze that billowed around him. He was happy to oblige her request at a re-match, especially since she had seemed so off during the invasion. It was as if her heart wasn’t in attacking the Foothills; a completely foreign concept to a warrior such as Gaucho. But she had been there, gotten in an attack or two, so he supposed she did all that Kri asked. Alas, such things were far too complicated for Gaucho’s simple mind to understand anyways.

Emotionless as always, Gaucho veered his body towards the plateau upon which she stood, allowing the breeze to push him her way. Mentally, he informed Mara that she would not be participating in this spar. The snake hissed at Gaucho, but complied by winding herself tightly around the base of his antlers and out of the way - for up in the air, there was no other place she could go. Still, the dry heat of the Throat made Mara’s reptilian body all the more agile, and she was not at all pleased that she would be decorative for this round.

About 30 feet in the air now, Gaucho began to swiftly and silently descend. He had been used to fighting creatures much bigger than Aryel as of late, and mentally he checked himself, to remind him that this was only a spar, and that he should try to avoid hurting his sar-gent. Tucking his wings to his sides and aided by the breeze, Gaucho shot towards Aryel from behind, currently on her right. He was sure that she would likely move away, or at least turn to face him, but that was alright; he wasn’t planning on landing on her. He kept his steely blue-gray gaze trained on her, ready to adjust his descent for whatever move she might make.

Mere feet from hitting the dusty terrain about 5 feet behind her, he angled himself so that he would try to land more perpendicular, at about a 45 degree angle, hopefully out of the way should she be foolish enough to buck at his immense body speeding towards her. Should she take to the air to avoid his attack, his intentions would be replicated there as well. Spreading his massive wings to slow his descent, his hooves struck the dusty ground hard; his legs carrying his momentum forward in a gallop. Having landed on what was Aryel’s right, lest she moved, Gaucho tucked his chin to his chest, angling his antlers down and to the left. Covering the ground easily, Gaucho threw his weight to the left once he judged he had passed her flank and would be more likely to hit her shoulder - he did not want his sharpened bone-collar to gauge into her flank for fear of puncturing something. Nose already to the left, he attempted to knock into her neck as he passed, with his antlers.

After he gauged his hind-end had passed her shoulder, the bay veered sharply to the right, bucking out behind him, aiming for her chest lest she try to immediately charge after him.

[WC: 696 Attack 1/3]

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Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#3



It seemed her herdmate would be starting the fight immediately.

The swoosh of his wings and a faint whiff of his scent were the only warnings she got. Whirling around, she was greeted with the sight of the enormous bay bearing down on her, leaving her seconds to react. The sight sent her heartbeat into overdrive, forcing adrenaline through her body and driving her to action. She pushed herself to left, hooves digging into the rock below as she scrabbled away, instinctively bracing her muscles for 17 hands of horseflesh to collide with her body. It never came, though, as Gaucho landed heavily on her right, immediately drawing his head in, then charging forward, antlers lowered to her shoulder level and dully gleaming in the sunlight.

She had anticipated getting hurt in this fight, especially with a sparmate such as Gaucho, but she needed to avoid those antlers like the plague, not to mention the snake slung between them. All the better practice for going against a unicorn, she would reflect later. Right now, though, there was nothing but action on her mind, animal instinct pushing some of the sentience to the side for a moment.

She used her front hooves to push her front half away from the charging stallion, making a sharp turn to the left. While she was able to avoid taking any injury to her jugular (no telling if those antlers would've simply jabbed her or punctured her skin) she did feel Gaucho's antler's dig into the right side of her shoulder and briefly scratch her neck, as she had been a fraction of a second too late moving away. They raked painfully across her skin, opening several horizontal slashes that, while not deep, were very painful. So much for relying on agility.

It wasn't as easy as she had anticipated, ignoring the desire to simply throw herself into a fight and hang the consequences. A mixture of emotions rose within her, anger at the pain of her wounds that had risen up immediately and unintended, the excitement of the fight, and at the very bottom of her mind, a slight worry that if she couldn't hold up in this fight, she couldn't hold up to Crowley. The idea of loosing to that smug-mouthed ass caused her panic to grow, while becoming something akin to fury at the same time. Even if she lost to Gaucho, she would not loose to Crowley.

She made to charge after the bay, only managing a few steps before his hooves went up, thrashing the air in front of her face, causing the mare to rapidly jerk her head back and skitter to a stop. Her nose was now aching horribly where Gaucho's hoof had clipped it. A trickle of blood began from her right nostril.

Trying to calm her rapidly-pulsating heart, she gathered herself again, paused to size up the stallion, then made a diagonal charge to the right, this time making sure to sidestep his flailing hooves. Trusting, perhaps groundlessly, that approaching him from the rear would require him to turn to bring his antlers into play, she leapt forward and opened her jaws to land a bite where his wing met his shoulder, trying to bite the muscle and not merely the feathers. While it was unlikely to be as dangerous as an antler jab, she had bitten as hard she could, hoping it would play to her advantage. For as she completed her bite and released, her wings unfurled like twin indigo banners. She downstroked as much as she could without her long wings hitting the ground and bending her feathers, pulling herself away from the bay, then turned tail and galloped toward the edge of the plateau. With a few powerful flaps, she had jumped into the sky to circle over the plateau. She had turned it into an aerial battle, as Kri had done to her during the roan's first spar in the Throat. They would test eachother in the air now. Let them be the hawk and the sparrow.

Words: 671
Summary: Aryel tries to avoid his antlers but takes a jab to the right shoulder, gets clipped on the nose by his hooves, then makes a diagonal charge at his right side and bites sharply at his wing muscles before turning away from him and taking flight.

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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#4



Going easy, was not something that Gaucho was particularly used to doing. While of course even his primitive mind could understand the importance of not causing irreparable, or undue injury to a fellow herd-mate, especially a sar-gent during a spar - even a friendly one - it was hard not to let his primal nature take over. In his most primal mode, he was a killing machine; as he had been during the invasion. But this was a different arena, and he neede to be mindful of that.

Turning to face him, rather than keeping her slender blue ass pointed his way, his antlers gorged against Aryel’s right shoulder, and he wondered for a brief moment if his bone collar had also nicked her? The brute hadn’t quite figured out the sensation of the collar in relation to his opponents yet, as this was only the second time he had worn it into battle. Perhaps given the angle of his antlers, his shoulders had not touched her at all. But things were moving far too fast, for him to scrutinize the situation now. As his hind-legs flew out behind him, he couldn’t tell what part of her body they had struck - was it her rump? And yet, even though Aryel was rather slender, it felt far too small to have been that. Had she turned? He recalled from their last spar, her incredible speed and agility - perhaps she had spun around as he passed, and it was her nose he had caught? Silly Aryel He thought; she was making it harder for herself for him not to injure her, but it also told him that she was following behind him.

Training his large ears back hoping to place her based on the sound of her hooves hitting the dusty ground, he could both hear and see her charging up on his right. The brute assumed she would aim for somewhere behind his shoulder, lest her face pull away from him, bloodied by his collar of spikes. A small smile played on his maw as he made zero effort to change his course at all. Come, come, he thought, why you no learn?. As she leaped towards his right, somewhere around his wing, the bay grunted, throwing his large body to the right, hoping to smack her squarely in the nose for her ignorance, with the full force of his right side. This was the very same move she had used in their last spar, and Gaucho was countering in very same way, only this time, Aryel had used teeth. Although he couldn’t tell whether or not she had broken skin, she had certainly grabbed a significant chunk of flesh; enough so, that pain radiated outward just below his wing joint making the flesh itch and flare painfully. Okay. Maybe not so stupid after all.

Only having slowed for a second, he watched as she galloped away, wings spread, obviously meaning to take this battle into the air. Flattening his ears against his skull, lest she try and nip at those too, Gaucho charged after her, his long legs covering the ground easily as his black wings unfurled. Although the day was bright and sunny, Gaucho doubted he could use the sun to his advantage to block her vision. As he took to the air following behind her, he resolved that he would have to rely on brute strength, and letting her get close enough for him to retaliate, as he surely was not as nimble as she, regardless of how much training he had done as of late.

Following her movements as she arched across the plateau, Gaucho took advantage of his larger wing span, aiding him in trying to catch up to her. He meant to rise to a slightly higher altitude than She, to avoid any flailing hooves, then to dive down to knock her right shoulder with his left, so as not to aggravate his right shoulder-bit wing joint. With any luck, his bone collar would scrape against her wither and shoulder as he descended. Throwing his muzzle to the left, he also attempted to bite at her neck. Continuing on, Gaucho took advantage of a warm thermal just before him, allowing it to swiftly pull his body up higher than the two had previously been flying at, to try and defend against Aryel countering with the same maneuver, by trying to place himself above her once again.

[WC: 750. Attack 2/3 Closing Defense 0/1. Gaucho is using buffs BULK and DANCE.]

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Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#5



(Overdue post is overdue.)
Nose throbbing from the dual injury of Gaucho's hooves and bodyslam, she tried to keep ahead of him as he chased her into the sky like a falcon after a songbird (actually, if somebody compared them that way, she would've complimented them on their poetic skills and then kicked them for calling her a songbird). She had expected to be able to outmaneuver the stallion in the air due to her smaller size and narrower speed-designed wings, but he seemed to be keeping up just fine. This spar was proving to be just as difficult as their first. Gaucho countered each attack methodically, almost infuriatingly. Even now he was rising above her, obviously intending to divebomb her. She scowled and bent her wings to fall forward and away from him in an attempt to evade him, yet still felt his teeth scrape at her neck without breaking the skin. It wasn't nearly as bad as his antlers slashing at her, but it was still a reminder that she needed to be quicker.

As she broke away, he went the opposite direction, catching a gust of wind and riding it higher. This thankfully gave her a few moments to catch her breath and desperately try to think up a tactic she could use. The mare opened her wings back up to soar and looked up, squinting against the sunlight at his form. By ascending like that, he obviously meant to foil any attempt to attack him from above, drawing a quiet curse from the mare. No matter what she threw at him, or how quick or clever she thought she was, he was never shaken. As she went into an incline, curving back up towards the stallion, an idea struck her. It was risky and difficult, but maybe he wouldn't be expecting it.

With a grunt, she put on an extra burst of speed, flying towards Gaucho's left side at a slight upwards angle if she was going to do a full-body tackle in the air. She offered up a silent prayer that her idea would work, then, seconds before they collided, threw her head right and tilted her wings, rolling in midair so her hooves were in the space previously occupied by her head. Flying upside down was difficult for a long period of time, but she didn't need to do it for long. She folded her wings and, relying on her previous velocity, flew directly under him between his front and hind legs, intending to clout him in the chest or abdomen with her hard hooves and knock his wind out. She did take care, however, to avoid his groin. No need to castrate him. Her neck was stretched out and craned towards the ground to protect her head and throat in the event he dropped. Her hooves should keep him at bay though, or so she hoped.

It wasn't long before her speed ran out and she found herself slowing, curving downwards, falling like a blue meteor. She opened her wings again, heart pounding as she tried to pull out of her dive. On the ground, Java covered his eyes with his wings. She could feel the air building under her, slowly but steadily, and made a spectacular save, leveling out and then curving upwards again, breathing shakily. She debated coming in for another strike, but knew Gaucho would be ready, and instead soared in a wide turn towards him, ready for his attack.

Words: 572
Summary: Dives away from his attack, then soars back up towards his left barrel, flips, and tries to "kick" him in the belly as she passes under him, then dives again and recovers to prepare for his attack)
Injuries: Cuts on neck, bashed nose


Walk walk walk walk.
"Talk talk talk talk."

ARYEL</style>
In blood and honor, we will prevail.</style>

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Thanks for the good times, and no hard feelings for the bad times.

Vicer and Aryel's new threads never happened.

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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#6



Was she surprised by the force of his attacks, and his evasiveness? Good. Gaucho had been practising nearly constantly. He had been sparring with unicorns to understand how to avoid their horns, as well as creatures of all shapes and sizes (including wolves), and had dominated the skies in his small portion of the Invasion. He had learned many new tricks and saved some old ones (like throwing his body into Aryel's nose, once again), and had found ways to train his body to become faster, regardless of its size and bulk.

As he flew away from her, he tasted her scent upon his tongue, from where his bite landed. Rising higher on the warm thermal, Gaucho found that his defence had indeed worked, as her slender blue body failed to appear above him. From his peripheral vision, he could see her flying on his left. He assumed she meant to knock into him from below, as he had just done to her from above. Bracing himself, he wondered if this time she would be able to avoid the 2inch spikes of sharpened bone that jutted from the collar around his shoulders. He winced slightly as their bodies were just about to collide, but did not throw himself to the left as he had before; if she was going to injure herself on his spikes, he didn't need to add any force. What he was intending to do, was save Aryel from injuring herself further. What he actually did, was make her attack easier: Gaucho in no way expected the lithe rotation of her body, nor did he expect to see her flying under him.

As her body dropped from his left, he felt a sharp pain on the right side of his belly as her hooves struck his underside. With a grunt of pain, Gaucho's steely gaze dropped to see her newly-patterned wings unfurl to catch herself from simply falling. Pinning his ears back, Gaucho struggled with the urge to simply drop on top of her, injuring her spine. The damage it would cause would be nearly unfixable, and if he had had this chance in the invasion, he surely would have taken it. But regardless of how much his instincts wanted to take revenge for being outsmarted, Gaucho would not hurt the pretty blue mare. That didn't mean he couldn't scare her a little though.

Already having his steely gaze fixated upon her, he dropped just after she did. Would she be able to see his shadow, ominously looming above her as she saved herself from falling to the earth? He hoped so. He tried to mirror her movements to remain above her as she descended, but as she began to rise, he held his position. He spread his massive black wings against the blue sky, far wider than they needed to be for flight, but aiming to appear intimidating. As she arched back towards him, Gaucho screamed a blood-curtailing screech and threw his entire body towards her. As he flew, eating up the distance between them with each beat of his wings. Lowering his antlered brow, he meant for it to appear that he was going to fly at full speed directly into her chest. At what he believed was two body-lengths away, he leaned back, spreading his wings out vertically to dramatically slow his massive body. With a grin and a twitch of the bone piercing his nose, to show he was only teasing, he passed on what would be her left had she not moved, and leaned his muzzle in to the left, aiming to bite at her shoulder or wither. As momentum carried him past her, for there was no way he could have completely stopped, he kicked out with his left hind-leg, aiming for her left side, as if to 'get her back' for her recent kick. He couldn't mirror her attack, of course, but if he landed the kick, it would suffice. As his kicking-leg retracted into his body, he veered sharply to the right, to avoid her flailing hind-legs, should she try to kick out at him.

With a grunt as he swerved away, he tried to watch her out of his peripheral vision, and keep his considerable brown-ass pointed her way, in case she tried to follow him immediately. Defensively he tucked his chin to his chest, protecting himself from a forward attack with his antlers, and tucked his legs neatly underneath him to protect his belly from any more of her aerial aerobics. As he waited for her to make her final pass at him, he wondered why he had not seen this side of her, during the invasion? Why had she remained on the ground then, when she was so agile and creative in the air?

[WC: 798 Attack 3/3 Closing Defence 0/1. Using buffs BULK and DANCE]

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Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
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FennecFyre
#7



Her gambit had worked, amazingly. She had half-expected for the warrior-shaman to find some way to evade her strike, but he apparently hadn't be prepared to take an attack from below. He had recovered remarkably quickly, though. As she soared upwards, a feral screech drew her attention. To her shock, he was hurtling straight at her, antler prongs trained on her chest. Panic jolted in her gut, but there was no time to react. She bunched her muscles and screwed her eyes shut, waiting for the collision, but what came was a whoosh of wind as his wings were applied like airbrakes. Her eyes opened, incredulous, as she caught the unmistakably mischievous look in his eye and realized she had just been subjected to an aerial round of Chicken by a horse who could barely form a sentence.

The fight was still going, though, as he lunged out at her with his teeth, then attempted a passing kick at her side as he dove. By throwing her front half to the left, she avoided his bite, but the kick thunked on her ribcage, and although his hoof only scraped against her barrel, it was enough to stun her momentarily, giving Gaucho an opportunity to get away without a parting attack from her. She wasn't out yet, though.

When she had sufficient breath in her lungs again, she twisted and dove after him, almost completely folding her wings to maximize her velocity. Attempting a tactic that had just been used by opponent was undesirable, not to mention foolish, but she hoped to put enough of a twist on it that she would be successful. She kept his rear in her sights, stretching her front hooves out before her. While Gaucho might have been trying to protect himself by keeping his hindquarters between her and the rest of him, she hoped she would still be able to land an attack. When the two were close, she folded her wings all the way to create a final burst and speed and held the course, intending to slam her front hooves onto his rump, either bruising or scraping him. It was similar to his feinting charge before, but she fully intended to strike him, rather than simply bluff him. Had they not been going the same direction, which would remove some force from the blow if it landed, she would have hesitated to put all her weight behind the attack. Even though she was aiming for a less-vital area, she didn't want to accidentally injure him.

Despite her injuries, the thrill of battle buzzed through her mind, a product of their rollercoaster flight path and the fierce fighting. Gaucho may have been a little...simple, but damn, could he fight! Whether or not the kick hit, Aryel would pull away to avoid a counterattack from his hind hooves, then continue to fly down in a wide circle towards the mesa again, alert for another attack. The fight had begun to wind down, but adrenaline was a tough thing to get out of your system.

Words: 509
Summary: Is startled by his mock dive, pulls away from his bite but gets kicked, then dives after him and tries to slam her hooves onto his rump, then breaks away.
Injuries: Cuts on neck, bashed nose, bruise on side from kick
(Is this my last attack?)

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Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#8



If nothing else, Aryel was nimble. As she threw her body to the left - seemingly into his bite - Gaucho wondered if she wasn't trying to use his previous tactic against him, and was trying to hit him the nose. Although her slender body wouldn't be able to do as much damage as his, it would definitely hurt, due to the pain the bone through his nose would cause. As his teeth closed upon nothing, the brute was puzzled, but chalked his missed-aim up to a miscalculation of their sizes. As his hoof connected however, the brute squealed an almost child-like taunt of Got you!, as he veered away with a proud grin.

As with any body type, there are pro's and con's. The pro's of being such a big fella like Gaucho, was that he could literally throw his weight around, as Aryel had seen. His kicks rarely left light bruising, and a ram from his antlers could leave one bleeding, as Aryel had also seen. One of the many con's, was that it was almost impossible to aim an attack at Gaucho, and not hit at least some part of him. He was simply too big to miss. So as Aryel nimbly darted behind him, like a smear of blue that had dislodged itself from the sky, hellbent on following him, Gaucho knew he would soon feel her hooves on his ass.

Gaucho is a simple creature - we all know that - however simple does not imply that he doesn't learn. In his last 10 or so spars, Gaucho had learned a thing or two about how to make his large-self more evasive, and while Aryel was certainly one of the fastest of his opponents, he believed his experience would still best her. She was fast, and the slender proportions of her frame cut through the air far more aerodynamically than his large body did. If they were angled straight towards the ground, he might have a chance, given that his weight would pull him down faster than hers would, but they were not. Seeing her wings pin to her sides, Gaucho assumed she meant to bridge the distance between them and make her move. A kick from this position, would have little force given he would have nothing to steady himself against, and yet the speed with which she would be flying towards his dinner-plate sized hooves could be deadly. He had already reminded himself to be wary of injuring her once, and did not need to be reminded again. With a grunt, Gaucho beat his wings hard against the air, using his strength to overcome the air-resistance and propel him forward. He also snapped his luxuriously long tail up and behind him, hoping that should she catch some of that hair in her mouth, or around her eyes/face, her attack might be put-off, slightly. Even with these two defensive measures, the pain in his wing joint from her previous bite stifled the muscle enough, that he was unable to pull away completely. With a primitive grunt, Gaucho felt her hooves graze down the back of his thighs, painfully stinging his large muscles.

Spying her arching away from him, the bay snorted, assuming that was her way of ending the spar. Making bicycle-riding motions in the air, Gaucho tried to stretch out his stinging leg muscles as he flew down to meet her. Landing on the dusty plateau, Gaucho tossed his head towards her. "Same fight" he observed, thinking about how similar their last spar had been - only that time, it had been Aryel who had swung her ass in his face. With a frown, he moved towards her, extending his bone-pierced nose towards her, as if he meant to nuzzle her. Inhaling a few times deeply, he narrowed his steely gaze, revealing that he was actually inspecting her nose for wounds, as he recalled striking it twice during their spar. Satisfied, he took a step back, frowning, but nodding at the same time; not bad.

[WC: 697 Closing Defense 1/1 Using buffs BULK and DANCE

Yep! That was your last one - the spar is done now, if you'd like to change the prefix :3 ]

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#9


G a u c h o | A r y e l
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By my verdict GAUCHO is the winner.
Gaucho has received 1 VP.

GAUCHO -- post 1 (attack only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Attack: antlers to her neck.
+ 1| Attack: bucking towards her.

[Prose]
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.
+ 1| Emotion, though the last paragraph got quite dry.

ARYEL -- post 1

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: jumping aside from the antlers but being raked by them. Remember that if he tried to land on your right from behind, it would be your left from the front.
+ 1| Defense: clipped nose. Be careful with damage to the face, as the bones can easily fracture/break to cause great pain and hindrance.
+ 1| Attack: biting towards his wing joint.
- 1| Powerplay: the attack is worded in a way that, to me, makes it seem like you're saying it's landing. ".. and opened her jaws to land a bite..." Better to say, "to try and land a bite".

[Prose]
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.
+ 1| Emotion.

GAUCHO -- post 2

[Realism]
0| Experience: I'm on the fence about this one. Aside from being a diagonal charge I don't really see the similarities. The attack in the previous spar was more of a sneak attack, this one was an obvious charge. The defense was the same, yes, but I don't agree with the reasoning.
+ 1| Defense: bitten below the wing joint.
+ 1| Counter-attack: slamming into her.
- 1| Attack: trying to slam his left shoulder into her right. I find that this attack largely ignores the fact that you both have wings. where are Gaucho's wings as he does this move? Does he tuck the left and roll down sideways to smack into her?
+ 1| Attack: bite to neck.

[Prose]
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.
+ 1| Emotion.

ARYEL -- post 2

[Realism]
0| Defense: mentioning that she was smacked on the nose again. I would've liked some more mention of what specifically happened ,though.
+ 1| Defense: scraped neck from his teeth.
+ 1| Defense: dropping down to fall at the same rate as him to avoid him.
- 1| Attack: going under his belly. This is a really creative attack and I love it, but. You're folding your wings as you go upside down. Folding your wings in flight means that you take away your source of lift, meaning you fall. You cannot glide without holding your wings outstretched, and even upside down you will be able to glide decently. However, if you fold them, you'll just drop down. A horse's body cannot glide without the aid of outstretched wings.
- 2| Powerplay: you say that you're directly under him, but you can only try to be.

[Prose]
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.
+ 1| Emotion.

GAUCHO -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: taking the kick to the belly.
- 1| Attack: bite towards her neck. First of all I'm not sure what you're doing with your wings. Pointing them up? Or just increasing the area you present to the airflow to brake? Secondly, Gaucho has large wings, and the way you've got them out they'll be in between you and Aryel, effectively putting her out of reach. So if you're close enough for a bite, her head would pass through your feathers and you'd hit the leading edge of hers.
- 1| Attack: kicking out towards her. Given the fact that you have to pass through her left wing to be close enough for this, I don't think it's plausible.

[Prose]
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.
+ 1| Emotion.

ARYEL -- post 3

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: he's on your left, so I'm not sure you can avoid the bite by throwing your head to the left.
- 1| Defense: taking the kick to your barrel. I'm pretty sure you've got a wing attached to your side, I'd think his leg would get tangled in it at that area of her body.
+ 1| Attack: air strike.
- 1| Minor powerplay: again, you decide that you get close. You can only try. Something like "if I caught up with him I would..." You only need to mention the if like.. once, maybe twice, to make it clear that you're only attempting. Aryel is diving, yes, but what if Gaucho starts diving too? Not sure you'd catch up as he'd fall faster due to more bulk.

[Prose]
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.
+ 1| Emotion.

GAUCHO -- post 4 (defense only)

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: scraped down the thighs. Given the positioning and how she's falling, I would've thought her chin would've hit your ass too, or some other part of her. You don't really explain where the rest of Aryel passes you. Also, you have nothing under your hooves, and given the fact she hits at all I think it'd shove your hind end down in the air, which would jerk your front up and probably make you lose your balance for a bit. Momentum would make sure you didn't just drop like a rock but I would expect a scenario like this to involve some wing-flailing to regain balance and easy flight.


GAUCHO

[Bonus]
+ 2| Breed: you were well aware of Gaucho's and Aryel's differences.

[Injuries]
0| Nothing of note.

[Creativity]
+ 1| I really liked his feint.

Comments: Overall, well done! However, I noticed one thing that hampered you a lot on this fight: wings. Most of the time when I read your attacks/defenses in the air I got the feeling neither Gaucho nor Aryel had wings. They'd be quite in the way in an aerial fight, and the need to keep them out to order to maintain flight would severely hinder close combat horizontally. Try to remember that they're there, and large, and vital. Otherwise I think you did well!

DEFENDER

[Bonus]
+ 2| Breed: you tried to use your smaller, lither body to your advantage, as well being wary of direct hits from Gaucho.

[Injuries]
0| Nothing of note.

[Creativity]
+ 1| "no need to castrate him" made me laugh.

Comments: Good job, Fennec! Largely, you have two problems. The first is that you often word things in a manner I don't quite agree with, making it sound as if your attacks do land, or that you decide where your opponent is (which you can only do, within reason, when dealing with their attack against you). Try to work on getting more "try"'s, "if"'s, and "where he had been a second ago"'s in, and you'll be free of a lot of unnecessary points. The second I noticed was your wings, and that they, also, kind of.. "disappeared" in flight sometimes, like when Gaucho kicked you. Aside from that I think you did well, and I think Aryel was present well emotionally throughout the entire spar. Well done!

TOTAL
Gaucho - 64
Aryel - 61

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