the Rift


[complete] Rage [Aryel - Challenge]

d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
Aurora Basin General atk: 6 | def: 9 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#1

d'Artagnan was seething. He had made up his mind, allowed Aviya to take care of the filth that had fallen across the Basin, his daughter was more than capable of dealing with them. She was strong and none knew it more so than her own father. However, the fly who had laughably called herself a Sergeant said one too many words she should not have. Teeth had clenched and the Nightshade had gone eerily still, the mare had crossed the line when she belittled the horn. If that was not enough she had then, the stupidity to carry on, like he needed more bait to put her six feet under, this Aryel continued to brag about her precious warriors. The Nightshade smiled at her last words to him. "That must be terrible. Not being able to kill anyone without an order?!" He looked at her pitifully, maw turning into a sneer as he turned back and began to advance forwards towards her. "Too bad for you, I'm not burdened with such ceremonies and sentiments. The law is clear here, you trespass we show no mercy. You dare come into our land and besmirch the horn, my species, show me then, Aryel how much better you really are."

d'Artagnan allowed his gaze to travel to Aviya, in one look he tried to convey an apology. The Time Mender didn't want to take the glory away from her, but the heathen before him had taken it to a level where d'Artagnan just couldn't ignore it. He was sure, however, that his daughter would understand. Daddy had to go teach the bad flies a lesson. Aramis shared his bonded's rage, heckles lining his back and he glowed in red anger. Claws out and digging into the surface he was by the side of the Nightshade, waiting for the words that would set him loose on the winged vermin. His time would come eventually.

The Nightshade stood with a confidence that came with deepening age, with the eyes of a mad man starved of blood and a body that harboured magical power. d'Artagnan had always hated the Throat, ever since the day they took him captive whilst beating his herd out of their rightful home. He smiled and looked to the moon, two of her blue amulets hung loosely from his mane, the night belonged to him. The cold air and the familiar landscape, it all played into his favour. He watched Aryel coldly and wondered if the mighty Sergeant would run with her tail between her legs, or whether she'd take up his gauntlet like a good warrior should. "I asked you to leave, but it seems you don't want to. You leave me no choice other than to force you to leave."

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[w/c: 460]
[d'Artagnan is challenging Aryel for trespass.
Standard Challenge rules apply.
4 Posts each + closing defence.]

To reach greatness
You must step on bodies
Though the cost of it may
Drown the world in blood.

my heart’s an endless winter
              filled with rage

Use force at your own peril ;) please tag me!

Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#2



Aryel was finding it difficult to discern what was going on outside her mental haze. Everything was fuzzy, indistinct, and echoing. That didn't stop her from noticing the stallion's body tense up in response to her insult. From her bent, uncomfortable position kneeling on the ground, she watched as his form approached, all but demanding a duel.

He didn't seriously expect her to fight with that damned mare's fog in her brain, did he? Anger rose inside her. Anger at his arrogance. Anger at Lana's and Athena's servitude. Anger at the bratty white-faced mare who had left her prone and terrified on the ground. Anger at the white stallion with black spots who now stood on the scene impassively. She wasn't taking any more of this. She shut her eyes and clamped her jaw, trying to force out the alien presence. Her stretched-out front leg bent stiffly, and her head no longer craned towards the ground. She could feel the fog slipping away, her lead-weighted limbs coming back under her control. She held onto that feeling, finding that reasserting her will over her own body was not so different from calling up her own magic. Her front half rose again as her feet were set firmly beneath her, and with a final burst of strength, her cobalt wings with their intricate silver marks rustled open and flapped, dispelling the last of the mist from around her. She met his cold glare with a glare of her own, the miasma's glaze gone from her eyes. For the moment, she appeared every inch a warrior, albeit a very small one who had no doubt this would be a painful fight.

Refolding her wings, she smirked and began to slowly circle the male and his hellhound. Two amulet gems clinked together on a length of metallic-colored rope around her neck, one a purple drop of Time blood, the other a golden gem from the Sun. The stallion had had his time to brag and throw his weight about. It was her turn now. Her head was tilted at an angle that suggested skepticism, one brow raised. "Leave? Do you actually think I want to spend any more time in your barren land than I have to?" She chuckled, the surge of energy that battles brought to her leaving her both nervous and confident. "I just want to collect my friends and go." She had completed her circle by now and stood a few yards in front of him again, sighing. "But if you really must demand satisfaction, then I suppose there's no harm in humoring a hornhead." Taunt delivered, she stood still for a few heartbeats

Giving no sign, she broke into a charge, galloping towards the male head-on. Her eyes sparked once before the irises began to glow an electric blue, accompanied by bright blue flames trailing from her wingtips and licking around her hooves. These flames hissed as her daggers struck the snow, but never went out. Seconds before she collided straight into D'artagan, she made two rapid turns. A tilt to the right to avoid a collision, then left again to close back in, so she was now on his right side, their barrels almost touching. The false charge had been a feint in the hopes he would assume she was simply foolhardy. Her left wing opened enough to close the gap between them, the flame burning brightly. She kept this wing open as she ran past him, intending to drag the flame across his side and create a long, painful scorch down his shoulder, chest, abdomen, and hip.

As she passed his rump, she tilted quickly to the left again. When their rumps were facing eachother, she dug her front hooves into the ground to stop herself and threw her hind hooves, still flaming, up and forward at his flesh. This attack, because of the speed and direction she had been going, would not carry the force of a full buck, but her flames could still burn him. And if he ended up with a hoof-shaped brand on either side of his tail? Bonus. As soon as her hooves came back to earth, the flames fizzled. She could only hold the ability for so long, but she had completed her attack. Now, her focus was on defense. She galloped a few paces to the right and whirled, trying to give herself space for the counterattack she knew would be coming. As she watched the stallion, she noticed a weight leaving her back and glanced up, still trying to keep D'artagan in her view. Java was on his first flight! His outline was difficult to see against the black night sky, but she was able to make him out as he fluttered in a rough circle around the two duelists.

(Words: 800 straight!
Posts: 1/4
Magic/Companion: 1/2
Amulets: 0 used out of 2
Summary: Charges him head-on, feints at the last moment to run down his right side, trying to drag her flaming wing down his side as well. Finished her attack with a flaming buck at his hindquarters, gallops a few paces to the right and turns to prepare for his attack. Java starts his first flight and circles them, ready to help.
Injuries: None

OOC: Aside form getting beaten up, are there any other consequences D'art will enact if she looses?)


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d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
Aurora Basin General atk: 6 | def: 9 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#3

"Aramis, stay away unless I say otherwise" the shade commanded of his companion, who obeyed and went to stand over where Aviya had been. d'Artagnan smiled when the Sergeant replied to his challenging words, if the mare had simply stayed away, then both Lana and Athena would have been free. The Nightshade was even bringing himself to excuse the intrusion of Aryel until she spoke the words that belittled his race. He could feel the anger coursing through him, boiling his blood and infecting his mind with the madness so many knew him for. Once taken by that kind of rage it was almost impossible to bring d'Artagnan back to the world of sanity, it was the moment the shade felt most powerful. When he held nothing back and let the beast that roamed within free of it's metaphorical chains. d'Artagnan became the nightmare that plagued the dreams of young foals in their sleep, a creature of darkness who loved nothing more than to wallow in the blood of his enemies.

He watched Aryel through simmering eyes, she was small, they always seemed to be small from the Throat herd. Even the armoured freak was short in stature. However he was bigger boned than this one. The mare before him was compact, but finely built, her body seemed to be more equipped for speed rather than the unforgiving power of his own build. She reminded him vaguely of Kou and her dainty structure that had much more flexibility than his tall, rangy body when they had duelled together. Then, of course, there was the matter of the wings that grew from her body, d'Artagnan had never been in one-on-one combat with a pegasus before now. Yet, he knew one thing was for certain, if the mare wanted to win, she couldn't just take off and hover in the sky all day. She would have to come down at some point. His cloven hooves itched to carve scars into her blue body, the moon's glow lit up the cold ground of the Basin and the first attack came from Aryel.

d'Artagnan's body was flung into life as her hooves pounded into the ground, her charge seemed unrelenting as she galloped straight for him. The Nightshade flicked his tail and grunted as she neared, intending at first to take Aryel's charge head on. However, the mare was clever and feinted to the side, unfurling wings that sprung to life with blue roaring flames. Dual painted eyes widened and the red stallion recklessly danced to his left with the one objective of staying away from her flames. His movement was fast enough to avoid the crucial burns, but she found purchase with a glancing blow to the right of his rump, burning his hairs and scorching his skin. The burn was small and with a flash he saw the image of Aaron. The bare headed stallion that had used an invisible fire against him, the simmering wound would not prove too troublesome, but the burning sensation was all the reminder he needed. Of the day the child of the Edge had challenged him for his mother. The Nightshade took solace in the fact he had been victorious that day, but seconds pressed on and he wasn't completely out of the woods. He continued veering left in his gallop, scampering away from her flame ridden buck that singed his tail in its near miss. Tall legs were spurred onwards and d'Artagnan already knew his next move.

The Time Mender didn't miss a heart beat and as she galloped away and turned to face him once more, d'Artagnan sent forth his magic into her body. Filling the water that resided there with poison, a narcotic drug that he hoped would send her drowsy as he turned as tight as his large body would allow him. Cloven hooves slammed hungrily into the ground and he attempted to approach her right side in hope of over powering her with his sheer height. Trying to slam his left shoulder into her own shoulder area whilst teeth flashed and aimed a vicious bite for her wing joint. Hoping he had succeeded, d'Artagnan galloped away to his right and danced around in the darkness. His body a flash of red in the shadows.

The burn still niggled at his rump, but as d'Artagnan awaited the next attack he knew he would be lucky if that was all he received. The Nightshade was happy though, his heart pumping excitement into his bones and thrills into his blood. He may be a healer by rank, but he had been born a fighter, born on a battlefield and born a killer. It was in battle he felt most at home.

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[w/c: 787]
[Magic/Companion uses: 1/2 || Battle Buffs: Bulk]
[ooc commentary: d'Artagnan dodges Aryel's flaming wing by veering out to his left, he is however nicked on his rump and suffers a surface burn. d'Artagnan carries on galloping forwards to dodges her buck and singes the ends of his tail. d'Artagnan then turns and uses his narcotic magic to make her drowsy, hoping it gives him chance to barge into her right shoulder and bite at her wing joint.]

(ooc note: If she loses then d'Artagnan will expect her to leave the Basin, with or without Athena and Lana.)

To reach greatness
You must step on bodies
Though the cost of it may
Drown the world in blood.

my heart’s an endless winter
              filled with rage

Use force at your own peril ;) please tag me!

Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#4



To her disappointment, the brute had been quicker than she anticipated and was able to skitter away as her wing flames licked at his hide. She thought she had felt contact, but couldn't be sure. The two had now parted, prepared for their next joust. Aryel pawed the ground like an enraged bull, lowering her head as if she had a horn of her own to challenge him with.

She hadn't expected the sickening, dizzy feeling that suddenly invaded her body, though. It was magic, obviously, and left her swaying on her feet, peering through rapidly-blurring eyes at the beast bearing down on her. Did every unicorn here have nasty magic? Why on earth did Kri bother declaring neutrality with them? They should've swept every unicorn out of the north and into the embrace of death a long time ago. Oddly enough, the sensation only lasted a few seconds. She was aware of a high, clear, almost ringing noise emanating from somewhere near her chest. Her Spark amulet was glowing brightly, the drowsiness vanishing. With a final flash, a bolt of oily-colored magic leapt from the amulet and flowed into D'artagnan as he approached. Somehow, the gem had cast his own spell back at him. With a crack, the amulet shattered, shards of vivid purple burying themselves in the snow and rapidly changing to grey.

Well, if she was getting a stroke of luck, she would take it.

Not wasting a moment, Aryel charged forward. This time, she wasn't feinting. Her head was lowered and her body tensed as she braced herself for what was sure to be a nasty collision. She was hoping that the narcotic effect was working on him as it had on her, trusting that it would unbalance him and leave him more vulnerable to a full-body tackle. She did not, however, assume it would leave her entirely unscathed. Sometimes, you had to take a risk.

As she neared him, she brought her right shoulder to bear, aimed at his chest. With unicorns, she figured, close combat was about coming in low and fast, essentially staying under their horns. If they met, she would no doubt end up with bruising on her shoulder, as well as non-severe teeth scrapes on her wing joint. Whether or not they collided, she also tried to lift her front legs so they were on either side of him and snap viciously at his throat, aiming for right under his skull. This was partially to inflict damage, and partially to keep his head upwards to prevent him from biting or stabbing with his horn. Had they not been in a fight, she would have recoiled from being in such close contact with him. At least her stature benefited her in this position, giving her easier access to his throat. Overhead, Java continued to circle, bright black eyes trained on the unicorn and his hellhound.

(Words: 483
Posts: 2/4
Magic/Companion: 1/2
Amulets: 1/1 (I was a dumb and thought Sun amulets didn't have to be purposefully cast at)
Summary: Amulet absorbs D'art's magic and sends it back at him, then she charges towards him and aims her right shoulder for his chest. His bite lands, but due to her charging the force is reduced. She then pushes her front half up to bite at his neck multiple times.
Injuries: Shoulder bruising, wing bite)


Walk walk walk walk.
"Talk talk talk talk."

ARYEL</style>
In blood and honor, we will prevail.</style>

image by gpabill @ flickr.com
Thanks for the good times, and no hard feelings for the bad times.

Vicer and Aryel's new threads never happened.


d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
Aurora Basin General atk: 6 | def: 9 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#5

Something was wrong. His magic wasn't working. Time seemed to slow down and for a few mere moments the Nightshade thought the Moon Goddess may have cheated him when she bestowed upon him a magic. A series of colourful words stuck in his throat and d'Artagnan watched on in confusion as his eyes caught the glow of the amulet, similar to the ones strapped around his own neck, if d'Artagnan had time he would probably have laughed at the irony of the Time God's token being his undoing. The God who favoured them and gifted them with the land he now galloped upon. The amulet shattered and a dark foreboding filled his heart, the magic he had cast gathered around him to infest his body with its delightful narcotic. d'Artagnan cursed profusely and looked to his last resort in his current situation, begging one of the amulets by his chest to save him. Begging the Moon to come to his aid in a wild panic, his heart thumping in his chest with his eyes flashing white.

The magic that was his own touched his body and one of his blue amulets sprung to life, it's tiny smoothed form sucked in the poisonous magic like an antidote purging the ailment. It left d'Artagnan in a state of shock that by the time he noticed Aryel bearing down on him he had just enough time to veer to the right to avoid the main damage, her shoulder did inflict a light blow to his own left shoulder, however, and d'Artagnan scrambled on his rangy legs to keep his balance, which was hard on the permafrost surface. His teeth that had bared to rip at her wing had still managed to find some flesh, but the blow was considerably lessened. The Nightshade was not given time to think as she followed one vile attack with another that was equally dangerous. Crimson ears had slapped back onto his neck and in his wild jump to the right a piercing pain inflicted the left side of his neck, missing the fatal jugular in his dodge, but bloodying him nonetheless.

The red liquid was warm and plagued d'Artagnan with a sharp pain that, combined with the dull ache in his left shoulder, hampered his concentration and niggled at his mind. Again, he remembered Aaron, the shade had suffered similar injuries from that fight and by the end was beginning to flag as his stamina had ebbed away. Right now d'Artagnan felt different, it seemed all his recent fighting had done his body good and he knew he would at least have a little more left in the tank then in the fight with Aaron.

Ideally d'Artagnan had wanted a little more room and he knew he'd be hard to spot under the cover of night. However, he couldn't pass up the chance to try and over power Aryel. In mere seconds he turned his body round in attempt to put his chest in line with her left shoulder and lent back on his hind end, forcing his knees up in the tightest rear he could manage. Throwing himself forwards hopefully towards her left shoulder to try and overpower her and push the mare sideways on the unstable surface of the Basin. His thoughts were to use his sheer height to gain the advantage, always an eye on her wings, though they looked pitifully fragile to him.

With a hope he had succeeded d'Artagnan, once all four hooves were back on the ground, attempted to chase after the advantage he sought. Aiming a violent bite for her crest which he hoped would only take a matter of steps to find.

In the heat of battle d'Artagnan was always faintly aware that Aviya maybe watching him and that his pride as a father was also at stake. He must try his best to set a shining example for his talented daughter. He must also make sure this feather brain learnt her place in the world; beneath the hooves of her superiors.

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[w/c :: 673] [2/4]
[Magic/Companions use :: 1/2] [Used 1 Moon Amulet of 2] [Battle Buffs :: Bulk]

[ooc commentary :: d'Artagnan uses one of his Moon Amulet's to store the his own power reflected back at him. The surprise of the incident causes him to realize the charge of Aryel too late to completely dodge it. He veers to the right and takes a minor blow to his left shoulder, her bite consequently misses his throat and instead gashes his neck. d'Artagnan then tries to turn his chest in on Aryel, hoping she's still in the same position, attacks with a tight rear and aims his knees for her left shoulder. Hoping he has succeeded, once all fours are on the floor, d'Artagnan then attempts to bite at her crest.]

To reach greatness
You must step on bodies
Though the cost of it may
Drown the world in blood.

my heart’s an endless winter
              filled with rage

Use force at your own peril ;) please tag me!

Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#6



Yet another grazing! The bay was fast for his size, which frustrated Aryel. Well, aside from his magic, his strength, and his arrogance. All that frustrated her too. The odds were stacked against her, and she knew it. All she could do now was give him hell and hope , by some divine miracle, that she would survive.

It was going to be difficult, though.

She grunted as D'art brought his weight to bear again, arching up and trying to push her down with his body. The two were still locked in a sort of vicious embrace, their hooves over eachother's shoulders as they viewed for control. Idiot, she chided herself, trying to keep her hooves from loosing purchase on the snowy ground. In this position he could use his greater weight to his advantage. She was forced to take shaky, quick steps backwards as he pushed, lest her back snap under his weight. She had caught the glimmer of his amulet not long before, and it had obviously negated the magic she had rebounded back at him. He was gaining more ground as he shoved, and she could feel her hooves beginning to slip. His knees pressed painfully into her chest. To avoid being slammed onto her side in the snow, she relinquished her hold on him and her front legs dropped to the ground again, in time for him to grab a mouthful of mane and skin on her crest, narrowly missing the eagle feather that was woven into her mane. Aryel whinnied as the pain shot through her, and something shifted inside her. Rend. Kill. Tear. Inflict pain. That was all that mattered.

She recalled the sensation of releasing her fire magic, the glorious rush and rage and energy that came as flames erupted from her hooves and wingtips. While his bite held her head, and by extension kept her body from rearing up to her previous height, their close quarters meant that hopefully she wouldn't need height, although she certainly would have liked it. She brought up that feeling again, irises shining electric blue as the flames returned to their places. She pushed herself forward, front hooves rising off the ground the strike at his chest and legs. With her crest held down, she didn't have as much accuracy or force as she normally would, but she was trying to scorch him, not break something (although she would have loved to crack his ribs). At the same time, her wings opened, then swung forward as she tried to smack the flaming tips to his shoulders. The position was uncomfortable, she was not used to bring her wings so far forward, but it was bearable, and in the stress of the situation the soreness could be ignored. With luck, he would release his painful grip and give them some space. The flames would extinguish after thirty seconds, but she doubted he would be stupid enough to maintain his hold. At the same time, she jerked her head back and forth, trying to jerk her mane out of his mouth. The pain intensified when she did so, though, and she knew she would be missing a chunk of mane, not to mention skin, from that area.

(Words: 538
Posts: 3/4
Magic/Companion: 2/2
Amulets: 1/1 (I was a dumb and thought Sun amulets didn't have to be purposefully cast at)
Summary: Gets forced to all fours, is bitten on the crest, and begins half-rearing to strike D'art's chest and front legs with her flaming hooves, while flapping her wings forward at him to brush the flames against his shoulders. Injuries: Shoulder bruising, wing bite, crest bite)

Walk walk walk walk.
"Talk talk talk talk."

ARYEL</style>
In blood and honor, we will prevail.</style>

image by gpabill @ flickr.com
Thanks for the good times, and no hard feelings for the bad times.

Vicer and Aryel's new threads never happened.


d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
Aurora Basin General atk: 6 | def: 9 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#7

His slight victory was a bitter one. The force he inflicted upon her was successful and his bite ripped flesh and dark hair. Yet, the upper hand he wanted to gain hadn't quite swung his way and d'Artagnan cursed profusely as he landed, hooves almost seemed to tremble on the cold ground, totally in her domain. The Mender's breeding gave him great speed on long legs and oodles of power from his Warmblood side. His one major flaw, however, was indeed his height in tight situations, his leggy build was not one for close encounters and he needed ample room to manoeuvre his great body. In other words, he'd managed to put himself at a disadvantage instead of gaining the upper hand and d'Artagnan continued his curses at his lack of forward thinking. The Nightshade had only seen one half of his plan and failed to regard what might happen if it failed, truly he was an arrogant creature in that aspect.

Injuries plagued him and sent shivers of pain through his body, d'Artagnan wasn't too keen on suffering any more damage, but it looked like he'd have to make do out of a bad situation. Eyes catch the movement of Aryel as she moves to form a half rear directed for his front, blue flames spring to life and d'Artagnan's gaze shifted into surprise once again. Fucking fire was the only thought that ran through his mind as he caught sight of her wings falling towards him as well. The Doctor ground teeth together and began to stumble backwards, gripping the magic of Time that flowed within him and in a fierce cry he let it loose. "NO!" The magic responded to his call and the portal was opened to another dimension, attempting to suck and drag in Aryel's blue flames into an alternate universe. It drained on his life force and d'Artagnan now rather staggered under the barrage from Aryel's rear, grunting as he took the attack full on. Her hooves slammed true into his chest and the shade could feel the wind being knocked out of him, each cloven hoof still retreating backwards with one common motive of getting away from her.

d'Artagnan felt a brush against his side, ears still flat, he lunged a fierce bite for her feathers that he had drained the fire from with his magic. Hoping to grab a few in his fury. The Nightshade continued stumbling backwards until he thought he was clear out of her way, with enough room, and turned away from her. Wincing at the pain the movement caused to his now bruised chest and burnt shoulder, the surface burn on his rump he could have done without too. His legs felt heavy with exhaustion from his recent magic use and right now he probably looked 19 not 9, but d'Artagnan couldn't afford to hang around. He hadn't the strength for it to prolong much longer. As he turned on hooves and attempted to scamper away from her, he flicked up his injured rump and let loose his rear hooves. Hoping to catch a part of her face.

A smile drifted onto his lips as he felt an odd feeling in his stomach flutter away. He knew that feeling, he hated that feeling and it was something he remembered encountering when fighting Aaron. Fear. The fear of the flame that burnt his flesh. d'Artagnan didn't know why he had developed this nonsense fear, but he inwardly shivered and cursed his luck. Then, his eyes caught the shards of his Moon Amulet strewn across the floor and his gaze saddened, as if it symbolized an internal conflict.

[w/c :: 606] [3/4]
[magic/companion use :: 2/2] Used 1 Moon Amulet of 2] [Battle Buffs :: Bulk]

[ooc commentary :: d'Artagnan uses his time magic to warp away her flames but takes a physical blow to his chest that bruises and winds him. He continues to stumble backwards and attempts to rip off some of Aryel's feathers. Hoping he had got free of her, d'Artagnan attempts to turn away and bucks at her face]

To reach greatness
You must step on bodies
Though the cost of it may
Drown the world in blood.

my heart’s an endless winter
              filled with rage

Use force at your own peril ;) please tag me!

Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#8



At the stallion's cry of fear, an uncharacteristically sadistic smile pulled at the mare's lips. Good. Let him fear her. You didn't trifle with her friends without consequences. Aryel did not seem to notice her heightened bloodlust. Whether it was the thrill of the fight or her own fire magic adversely affecting her mind was of no concern. What mattered was making this arrogant, highborn bastard squeal. With a sickening lurch, her flames seemed to pull away from her body, flickering into nonexistence. Somewhere unknown to the two, in another world, they were burped into thin air, startling a blue roan winged stallion and a bay mare adorned with glass horns out of their fight. Back in this world, Aryel reflected that the entire encounter had been full of unpleasant feelings. First, that terrifying feeling of loosing control over herself. Then, the stallion's narcotic magic briefly working on her, and finally, the sensation of having her flames sucked away. She liked to think she was repaying him for it, though. She certainly felt at least one blow connect with his chest.

She noticed his eyes straying to her wing, but before she could retract them he had snapped successfully at her right wing. However, if he had been trying to injure her, he hadn't entirely accomplished that. Her wing muscles did not extend all the way down her wings, in fact, they stopped soon after her "wrist" joint, where the ulna bone was located. These were not the leathery, draconian wings of her sire and half-brother, magnificent and clawed but laced with nerves and blood vessels. He did, however, pull out a couple of primaries, causing her to yelp. Feathers fell out naturally, but yanking them out so roughly would result in a few drops of blood and a stinging feeling. She took a moment to examine the damage, glaring at the stallion as she reflected that her flight would be affected until her feathers grew back. And he did really have to pull out two of the silver-marked ones? Those were her favorite, as foolish as it sounded.

She made to pursue him as he turned to flee, until a memory from a fight with Gaucho surfaced. He had pulled the same trick, running away only to present a view of large, flailing hooves. She backpedaled and turned her face to the side, but felt his hooves scrape her left cheek. It was better than taking a blow to the nose, though. She had had enough of that with Gaucho, to be sure. She found herself wondering if the tactics used by the two of them in their spars could be of any use here. Kicking snow into his face wouldn't do any good, he was fleeing. Pulling off impressive acrobatic feats was useless unless he grew a pair of wings (and a pair of balls, since he so obviously lacked them). The thought did give her an idea, though. She dug deep into her reserves of stamina, fighting off the fatigue that had begun to creep in. She chased after him again, but this time her wings were thrashing the air, bearing her aloft with a powerful jump. Her wings stirred the snow into flurries, a contingent of formless snow specters to flank her. Aryel wasn't strong, but she was quick. The lack of her primaries showed, leaving her tilted to the right. However, it was a straight, quick flight with no turning required. She gained altitude as she pursued him, counting on his exhaustion to slow him enough for her plan to work. When she was over him so that her shadow fell over his, giving him ghostly black wings of his own, she folded her wings and dived, holding her limbs out straight. Her intent was to strike him from above, using her weight to inflict damage on his back or rump. She was small, yes, but a slightly-larger-than-pony-sized mass of flesh, bones, and feathers dropping on one's back had to hurt. She also knew keeping up while she fell would be difficult, but she was not far above him, only a matter of feet, and was hoping her velocity would keep her form above his. At the same time, she was watching him carefully, ready to spread her wings to break her fall should he move. If he did veer away, she would have a rough but successful landing and immediately turn to face him.

(OOC: Genderbent dimension mentioned because it's 11 PM and that doesn't mix well with caffeinated Coke YAY. At least it seems to be good for my muse.
Words: 740
Posts: 4/4
Magic/Companion: 2/2
Amulets: 1/1
Summary: D'art's magic succeeds, and his bite takes two primary feathers. She tries to chase after him, and takes a hoof brushing to the left cheek. She goes after him again, jumping into the air to pursue him by wing. When she is above him, she drops, intending to drop her hooves, and her body weight behind them, onto his back or rump, and is prepared to land if she misses.
Injuries: Shoulder bruising, wing bite, crest bite, lost feathers, cheek bruise/scrape)

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d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
Aurora Basin General atk: 6 | def: 9 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#9

d'Artagnan spat out the clump of silvery feathers that had plagued his mouth, his satisfaction tinged with revolution of holding something so disgusting. Maybe Psyche would add them to her collection later, as long as they weren't diseased. As his buck reached its pinnacle, the Nightshade felt his annoyance flicker once again when his powerful kick failed to stove her head in and instead scraped her cheek. It seemed whatever he did she always managed to wriggle her way out of it, how many death blows would he have to attempt to get the bitch to stay down. His legs were getting heavier and the ground was becoming more dangerous as the snow patched areas were becoming compact, which made the surface almost like an ice rink in places. It was just another thing d'Artagnan had to worry about and he continued cursing when he heard the flap of wings carry Aryel into the air. He took in a breath and swallowed, wincing at the dull pain from his chest, she may just be a little flea, but she sure packed a punch.

The Moon shone bright in the starry sky and d'Artagnan brought his retreating run to a halt, nostrils were puffing from weariness. He knew he had more stamina since his very first Helovia fight against Kou, but the injuries and the constant running were beginning to get the better of his fit body. Though d'Artagnan dared not think about the state he would have been in if he was not in the fighting condition he was now. Noting the shadows upon the ground with eyes growing wide, d'Artagnan shot a glance skyward in alarm. This was the Mender's first experience at fighting a pegasus and so his retaliation was rather erratic. Crimson ears flicked back and teeth bared through sooty lips as he made the best of another bad situation, legs fumbled over themselves as he dived to the left, shouting a curse as both his chest and shoulder protested. His shout was cut off, however, turning into a sharp intake of breath as he hooves brushed down the left side of his fleshy rump. He had managed to reduce the damage caused if she had hit him full on, but it still hurt like hell on top of his other injuries. Yet, the fight wasn't quite over.

Move you idiot!

The thought triggered his aching bones into action and as Aryel came to land, d'Artagnan went to turn on his inside and aimed his upper glass horn to slice the right side of her neck. Hoping she would be vulnerable to attack and that she hadn't suddenly moved. There was no way he could impale her, not with the set of horns he had been cursed with. His lower horn a reminder of what happens to glass if given enough force.

The Nightshade's mind fell silent then, this was surely the very end of the battle. He knew he wasn't going to die and he was pretty certain he hadn't killed the bitch who dared trespass. It left a bitter taste in his mouth, but still, he had drawn blood from her. The Mender just hoped it would be enough to discourage her as one thing was for sure, he wasn't expecting her to have such magical ability. It was disgusting that any race other than the unicorn be allowed it. He remembered the image of her flaming hooves coming towards him and the feeling of fear, what a stupid emotion that he had no need of. d'Artagnan felt a tender touch on his mind then, a feeling of worry projected from his bonded who anxiously awaited his return.

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[w/c :: 613] [4/4]
[magic/companion use :: 2/2] [Used 1 Moon Amulet of 2] [Battle Buffs :: Bulk]

[ooc commentary :: d'Artagnan dodges the worst of Aryel's attack by side stepping to the left and taking the blow on the left side of his rump. He then turns on his inside to aim his top horn to slice at the right side of her neck.]

(ooc note: Nice fight Fennec! I really enjoyed battling Ayrel <3)

To reach greatness
You must step on bodies
Though the cost of it may
Drown the world in blood.

my heart’s an endless winter
              filled with rage

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Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#10



Well, if she couldn't snap his back, at least she could bruise his rear. She smirked again at his pained curse and subsequent gasp as her hooves collided with his body. Oh, I'm sorry. Did that hurt? Good, you bastard. That's what you get for keeping my friends hostage. She still couldn't believe they would violate the neutrality agreement the two herds held. If only she had know about the Plague and their twisted reasoning, she would have led in an army instead of going alone. At least she could take out her rage on this stallion. Every injury she inflicted gave her a feeling of grim satisfaction. She hadn't escaped being wounded herself, but she had learned how to turn her pain into rage, lashing out as any injured animal would.

It didn't mean the fog of battle left her completely blind, though. As she landed, she noticed D'art swinging towards her, transparent horns gleaming coldly in the moonlight. Her cobalt eyes narrowed as he did, wings remaining half-open, her entire pose suggesting tension and focus. So now the unicorn finally brought his birth weapons into play, for all the good they would do. Why on earth would he want a chunk of keratin sticking out of his head when he could have wings to soar out of range with? Sure, they were useful as weapons, but that was it. He would never experience the euphoria of flight, of chasing the moon over the horizon or feeling the wind lift him up, of being well and truly free. That was well worth the lack of an extra weapon. Furthermore, wings could heal if given the proper care. Horns would not regrow if cracked or damage. He was proof of that. Had she been as racist as he was, she would have pitied the ground-bound stallion.

As his horns sliced at her neck, she threw herself to the left, at the same time lowering her head so her nose was pointed at the ground. She also beat her wings once to increase the speed with which she turned away, hopefully blowing some powder snow into his face while she was at it. She grunted as his top horn scraped briefly at her neck, leaving a half-inch vertical scratch near her mane that would leave a raised, red mark, but it was nowhere near as bad as the long horizontal cut he obviously meant to inflict. Maybe her frequent fighting had made her grow tougher skin? She certainly felt more in-shape than she once was, as well as more coordinated.

She continued her turn away from him, galloping off several paces and giving him a contemptuous flick of her tail. She came to a skidding stop, hooves leaving trenches in the snow, and stopped, sides heaving, more aware of her injuries now that the fight was winding down. Her fury was replaced with a sullen anger mixed with fatigue, but there was a feeling of accomplishment as well. She had shown him what happened when you disrespected the Dragon's Throat. Aryel turned to face him, comparing his state against his. D'artagnan was just as injured as her, if not more. Breathing clouds in the cold air, she grinned in spite of herself.

(OOC: Thank you for the compliment ^^ I liked fighting D'art.
Words: 541
Posts: 4/4, 1/1 Closing Defense.
Magic/Companion: 2/2
Amulets: 1/1
Summary: Lands after striking his haunch, then throws herself to the left to lessen the effect of his horn stab while beating her wings to increase the turn. She then gallops away and comes to a stop, then turns and faces him.
Injuries: Shoulder bruising, wing bite, crest bite, lost feathers, cheek bruise/scrape, small cut on neck.)

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"Talk talk talk talk."

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#11


A r y e l | d ' A r t a g n a n
- - - - -
By my verdict D'ARTAGNAN is the winner.
d'Artagnan has been awarded one VP and can forcibly drive Aryel out of the Basin.

ARYEL -- post 1 (attack only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Attack: trying to drag your wing down his side. It should, however, be noted that it ought to be his left side. If you're running head-on, and swerve right, your left side will be close to your opponent's left. Your right, their left. :]
- 1| Borderline powerplay: ".. their barrels almost touching. (...) Her left wing opened enough to close the gap between them..." You cannot know that d'Artagnan is standing still. You cannot declare that you are almost close enough to touch, as that is essentially trying to rob d'Art of the ability to run off.
+ 1| Attack: bucking at him.
- 2| Powerplay: "When their rumps were facing eachother." You cannot know that he is still there, or that he's not turning. Running past and saying "I swerve left and kick out where his hind end had been" would be totally fine, but again you are saying where d'Artagnan is, when that is not up to you.
0| This is just a note, about your "defensive running away" at the end. It is something I greatly discourage doing, as it assumes d'Artagnan does not retaliate when you are nearby. What if d'Artagnan bucks at you at the same time and your hocks get tangled/Aryel gets hurt? Suddenly you've then nixed this last portion of this post, creating a kind of time warp. I greatly recommend ending the post in the moment of attack, to leave your opponent the opportunity to counter, as well as create the most realistic and streamlined time scenario.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

D'ARTAGNAN -- post 1

[Realism]
0| Defense: running away from the wing. Solid defense, however, realistically, you'd run right to get away from it, and your left side would be injured as Aryel's movement would bring her on your left side. Not sure if you wrote left since she wrote attacking your right, though? I would've liked some mention of pain, or if the burn would affect/hinder you in any way.
+ 1| Defense: running away from the buck.
+ 1| Attack: magic.
+ 1| Attack: shoulder slam.
+ 1| Attack: bite to wing joint.
0| As d'Artagnan does a similar "defensive running away", I'd like to discourage you too from doing it.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

ARYEL -- post 2

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: using the deflection amulet.
+ 1| Attack: deflection amulet.
+ 1| Attack: charging at him with her shoulder.
+ 1| Defense: some bruising.
+ 1| Defense: bite to wing joint.
- 1| Attack: trying to snap at his throat. With the way you describe using your right shoulder to slam into his chest, I find it hard to see how you can spread your front legs on either side of him and snap directly at his throat, as you'd have to meet chest-to-chest and not shoulder-to-chest for that. Very clever to try to keep his horn away, though!

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

D'ARTAGNAN -- post 2

[Realism]
- 1| Incorrect amulet use: a Moon amulet only copies an ability, meaning that it would not suck the poison out of d'Artagnan's body, merely store his own ability in the amulet for a later use.
+ 1| Defense: bruised shoulder.
+ 1| Defense: jumping aside to avoid the majority of the bite.
+ 1| Attack: trying to knock her over.
+ 1| Attack: bite towards her crest.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

ARYEL -- post 3

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: locked in a rear. I don't know where this came from, as Aryel in the previous round only tried to rear with a leg on either side of him, making no mention of trying to grasp him, and it was voided anyway by d'Art moving sideways and presenting her with his shoulder. d'Art moved in an attempt to be perpendicular to her and just shove her around, unless I got it all wrong.
+ 1| Defense: held by the crest.
+ 1| Attack: trying to punch his legs/chest with her flaming hooves. I like how you mention she can't move as good as usual because of his hold on her.
+ 1| Attack: flaming wings forward.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

D'ARTAGNAN -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: time warp magic to remove the flames, rendering her wing attack mostly useless.
+ 1| Defense: backing away from her lunge but still hit.
+ 1| Attack: lunging for her wing.
+ 1| Attack: bucking at her.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

ARYEL -- post 4

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: having a few feathers torn out.
+ 1| Experience: using knowledge from the fight with Gaucho to predict his attack.
+ 1| Defense: backing from his buck, scrape to the cheek.
+ 1| Attack: diving at him. While the "being over him" part was a little like borderline powerplay wording, flight is generally faster than legs.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

D'ARTAGNAN -- post 4

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: sidestepping to the left, and then taking injury on the left. I'd rather have thought you'd sidestepped to the right, especially as you attack her right side, which leads me to assume she'd have touched down on your left side.
+ 1| Attack: horn cut to the right side of her neck.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow.
+ 1| Easy read.

ARYEL -- post 5 (defense only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: moving away so the cut isn't as bad.


ARYEL

[Bonus]
+ 2| Breed: you were aware of height differences, wings vs. horns, physical size.
+ 1| Surroundings: you mentioned the snow a bit, but nothing about footing.

[Injuries]
0| Nothing of note.

[Creativity]
0| Nothing of note.

Comments: Well done! Nothing stood out in particular as "oh, Fennec should work on that", as for the most part you fought well and what misses you had were more of the here-and-there type that just happens. In the first post you had a few issues with how you worded it, but that did not really come back in the fight. Try to think about left and right in your posts, and I often use my hands to visualize how the horses interact, and on which side of each other. Otherwise I think you did a great job, you have a very nice emotional presence that I really enjoyed, and you seem to have a generally good grasp on how to move in a fight.

DEFENDER

[Bonus]
+ 2| Breed: you were aware of your own size versus hers, and I just loved how aware you were of d'Art's not-perfect-maneuverability in close quarters
+ 2| Surroundings: you mentioned the patches of ice, some snow, the uneven ground, and that it affected your footing at times too.

[Injuries]
0| Nothing of note.

[Creativity]
0| Nothing of note.

Comments: Good job! Once or twice you did things about left and right that seemed a bit questionable to me, but on the whole I was never confused as to where you were and what you were doing. You've got a nice grasp on d'Artagnan's body, and what his strong/weak points are. However, remember to read the rules about amulets carefully, as a Moon amulet cannot deflect/absorb an attack the way Spark and Earth amulets do. d'Artagnan would still be hit, though the amulet could be activated to copy the ability for a later use. I loved the emotional presence, d'Artagnan is always a pleasure to read!

TOTAL
Aryel - 75
d'Artagnan - 77

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Aryel Posts: 229
Dragon's Throat Soldier
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.4 :: 4
FennecFyre
#12



(Yeah, I figured. Thanks, judge.)

The fight was finished, and while it was obvious that D'art had clawed his way to the top, Aryel refused to let her disappointment in herself show. She may have lost this fight, but this would not be the end of the issue. She looked up and smiled as Java fluttered down, the adolescent bat landing heavily on her forehead and clinging there, resting his cheek against her head and looking at her with concern. "I'm fine, Java." she laughed softly. "Well, if you count 'being able to walk' as fine. And look at you, you're flying!" Puffing out his chest proudly, he detached from her head and did a quick loop in the air, then fluttered above her to come to rest on her neck, holding her mane tightly. After ensuring he was settled, she turned to D'artagnan, all pleasantry gone from her gave to be replaced by a snide grin. "Did you enjoy your temper tantrum, foal?" she asked sweetly. "Perhaps you should go back to sucking on your mother's tit." As far as she was concerned, that was all the fight was. The stallion throwing a tantrum over being called names like a spoiled child.

Cobalt eyes now went to Athena and Lana, and her jaw tightened. She would retrieve them one way or another. Turning to leave, she looked back at the bay male. "You let them go, hornhead," she spat, "or there will be trouble from the Throat. The next time I come here, I won't be alone." Threat delivered, she flicked her tail at him and began walking out of the Basin, managing to keep her limp from becoming obvious.

Next order of business? Speak with Kri and organize a squadron.

-exit Aryel-

Walk walk walk walk.
"Talk talk talk talk."

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