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[OPEN] Throes of Perdition [Invasion]

Crowley Posts: 166
Outcast atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 12 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Talbot :: Common Hellhound :: Acid & Name? :: Caracal :: None Dingo
#1

We build cathredrals to our pain
Establish monuments to attain


The plan had been a brilliant one. Due to the Basin's contract held with the Foothills, the mercenaries of the Grey were off helping them to take over the World's Edge. There was hardly a doubt in Crowley's mind that a few of the Throat's own soldier's had gone off to help defend their sister herd, but honestly, it was a mistake on their part. A very, very grave mistake.

It seemed to be a Plague reunion as the group stalked the borders of the desert land, thankful to have the cover of night on their side at all times. They would tire less easily without the heat of the sun on their backs, putting one less worry on their shoulders as several members of both the Basin and the Plague neared the borders of the Dragon's Throat. As he walked, Crowley couldn't help the sadistic smile that curled the corners of his lips at the thought of how this all might play out. What if the Basin did come out of this victorious, on both sides? And they took reign of not only the World's Edge, but the Dragon's Throat as well?

For all that they had done, they deserved every drop of blood lost today.

At the Weaver's side walked Talbot, his nose dropped to the ground and quivered as he sniffed about. It was hard to imagine that this wouldn't be the pup's first taste of real battle, and because of that, Crowley was confident that he would only do better this time around. After all, today they would be fighting similar creatures to himself, not some wretched dragon spawned from the earth itself.

'Not far now.' The words crept into Crowley's mind from the hellhound's, the sensation still incredibly strange to the brindle. Being able to speak to one another would certainly prove useful in a situation such as an invasion like this, and the dark-hearted stallion couldn't wait to put their new abilities to the test.

The footing wasn't terribly different when compared to slippery snow, but he knew he'd still need to keep in mind that this wasn't the best ground to fight on. At least it didn't make a crunch which could possibly alert the current(for now) residents of the Dragon's Throat. Up ahead, her form glinting beneath the open light of the moon, Crowley could see the Empress' silent command to push forward, and onward he went. It was unlikely they would get very far past the unfinished wall and to the center of the land before they were detected, but at least they were in.

Today, the Throat would fall, and the Plague would be one step closer to their ultimate goal.

[WC ;; 459. Opening post. 0/2 magic/companion uses.]



Freedom from all of the scars and the sins
Lest we drown in the darkness within

Levi Posts: 270
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Stallion :: Pegasus :: 16.1hh :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Ava
#2
Levi

This was the time to prove his brothers-ship to the Throat. He was once Sergeant, so this should be easy enough…right? It was not until he heard the unmistakably thundering roar of numerous hoof beats tearing the soft earth’s crust, that he knew an invasion was coming and he knew now had never faced something like this before. Trying to get a better look, the grullo narrowed his eyes watching the walls. He spotted several soldiers approaching with their horns held high. They got past the unfinished walls, but their entrance was almost too noticeable. It was no other then the very welcoming, racist, and lovely Basin guests. Oh, joy Levi thought to himself with disgust. His heart was beating faster with wired anxiousness and his muscles ached of hatred towards the Basin. He hated them with all of his being and he especially hated Faelene right now because she was part of this whole charade. How could she even want to be a part of this horrible excuse of a herd? He thought to himself clenching his angular jaw. This was not happening now… it couldn’t be! A sour taste wrenched inside his mouth as he prepared to launch himself. He felt his bones ache for a fight, he wanted this now more than ever.

He was going to fight to the death he knew that for a fact. He was planning in his mind to try and calculate what he should do. As he was in the air, he flew slowly getting an overview of these horned monsters. He wanted so badly to let out a scream. He wanted to scream at them all and tell them how much he hated them. He was going to kill if it was necessary, and he would have no regrets. It was final. Levi began to see others go towards their opponents and he knew right then that he had to go to someone now. It didn’t matter who, he just needed to get his ass down towards anyone!

He narrowed in on a stallion with a mutt companion. Aiming down towards his left ribcage, he dove like a falcon towards the opponent. As he was arriving he knew that he was going to make this little fuckers stomach twist because he was going to flaunt something that he HATED. His wings. Levi flew so close to the little granules that made up his home, for a reason. He urged the little bits of sand and stone to came towards him. The little granules rose in large heaps, as they slowly come to his body as he wished. He concentrated more on his opponent than himself, but he wanted some kind of protection. Making himself a light coat of armor, the little granules hardened almost as though it looked like metal. They spun quickly urging him to go forwards. This is it he thought to himself.

GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE YOU HORNED PRICK!” He hissed towards this devil stallion. “THIS IS OUR LAND, GET OUT NOW!” Before he said anymore Levi threw himself towards his opponent in anger. Flapping his wings loudly, he flew toward the monster, charging at him. He flew high enough so he could still kick at him. Taking his right back leg, he struck towards the figures back of his neck or skull as he flew by. He hoped he was successful in hitting his target, but he wasn’t sure. The beads of armor stayed in place as he flew over, spinning crazily in one another. Quickly, he turned back in the direction of the dark figure and landed so he could fight on the ground. Now he was facing towards the stallion’s rear and ready to fight on the ground. He was fucking ready. The brute dropped the little granulates of sand so he could face this beast with nothing but his bare skin.

[ Opening post

Summary: Okay ,so, Levi made himself armor from his magic. Then he dove towards Crowley towards his left so he would be able to face Crowley head on. He flew towards him, but flew over him as he aimed to kick Crowley in the back of the neck or the skull. Then Levi turned around and landed facing Crowley’s rear so that he could fight Crowley on the ground.

Attack: Aims to kick Crowley on the back of his neck or skull

Defense: Temporary armor

Injuries: None

Magic count: ½ I’m not sure if it counts but I will count it anyways!

@[Crowley]

]


"Talk talk talk."




Crowley Posts: 166
Outcast atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 12 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Talbot :: Common Hellhound :: Acid & Name? :: Caracal :: None Dingo
#3

We build cathredrals to our pain
Establish monuments to attain


As predicted, it didn't take long for the Throat to become aware of the threat that had come in through their wide-open door. Most of them were winged, dropping out of the sky towards their desired targets to commence the inevitable battle. Keeping all senses alert, the brindle was prepared to come under attack any moment now, and it was Talbot who alerted him of his approaching adversary.

'Above! Came the young hound's alert, which was more than enough to launch the stallion into action. Digging his hind hooves into the sand beneath him, he propelled himself forward in an attempt to dodge whatever was coming at him. He didn't know at what angle this Pegasus was coming from, for he'd no time to look up and assess that fact, and only knew that he needed to move lest he get pummeled beneath flying hooves of fury.

Crowley had not moved quite fast enough to evade his attacker's move entirely, feeling hooves plow right into the tail-end of the top of his hindquarters. More out of instinct than anything else, the Weaver's ears slicked back and his rear popped up, legs kicking outwards in defense. Keeping at a fast paced trot, the stallion circled to the right to face his opponent and was expecting to be greeted by a whirlwind of sand to his face, but much to his surprise, the grains of the desert had taken to the Pegasi's body in the formation of armor.

From what he could see, his foe was nearly the same size as him, lacking the birthright weapon of a unicorn but instead possessing the limbs of a bird. They ought to be equals, each having an advantage in their own way; the sandy grullo could fly away and bide his time all he wanted, while Crowley had the upper-hand in possessing horns and having the aide of Talbot.

The hornless screamed at him, proclaiming him a 'prick' and that he needed to turn tail now. The corners of Crowley's mouth trembled as they tried their best to hold back a deep, rumbling, sinister laugh, but they failed in the end and it burst forth anyway. "Or else what?" The Weaver questioned rhetorically, though the supposed a part of him truly did yearn to know what this stallion of sand would dare do to him. The Throat stallion could scream like a sailor to him all day if he wanted to, but it wouldn't stop the inevitable fact that the Basin would be victorious today.

But just as soon as the words had started to leave Crowley's mouth, the hideous flurry of wings was coming at him again; and the Weaver could only be thankful for the cover of night that masked the unsightly being. Having not yet ceased movement, it was easy for Crowley to move to the right, going from a trot into a canter. Ducking his head down as the Pegasus grew much too close, the most that the poor sap's hoof hit was the tip of his left horn, jarring the brindle and causing his sight to go wonky for a moment, but otherwise, the kick hadn't done much to hinder him. He couldn't say the same for his opponent's hoof, though.

Circling back to the left, Crowley could see that his foe had grounded himself, dropping the sand that had once bound itself around the grullo's body in a protective manner. The brindle scoffed and nearly shook his head; what an imbecile. Didn't he know that if he truly wished to protect his home, then he should do so using all the advantages that he could? Or did he not care about the Throat after all?

With Talbot at his side, Crowley charged at the Pegasus, arching his neck so that his horns were vertical. As he drew closer to the grullo, anticipating his moving to the left or right, the Weaver made haste to his opponent's left side. Turning his head slightly to the left, his intention was to cause his horns to rake across the Pegasi's face and neck, or whatever they could manage to scrape. A buck followed, Crowley's left shoulder aiming to plow into the grullo's own, before he attempt to turn to the right and put distance back between himself and the Throat stallion.

Talbot was right on Crowley's heels, leaping upwards after his master's attempted ramming, jaws parted and intending to wrap around the joint of Levi's left wing joint. With any luck, he could at least cause a painful flight for the grullo for some time to come.

[WC ;; 774. 1/4 attacks. 1/2 magic/companion uses.]



Freedom from all of the scars and the sins
Lest we drown in the darkness within

Levi Posts: 270
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Stallion :: Pegasus :: 16.1hh :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Ava
#4
Levi

We will not lose.

When the brute flew towards his opponent with sanded armor, he had succeeded in striking his foe in the tail-end top of the brindle’s hindquarters. The flow of energy he used to strike out was powerful, but he did not use all of his energy. He felt his muscles tensing as his opponent reacted quickly, almost instantly. The brindle’s rear popped into the air and Levi did not have enough time to move out of his way. Levi tried to dodge the sudden bursts of kicks moving to the right and then to the left. Anxiety began to take over his body as he watched out of the corner of his eye, the kicks coming towards him feeling as though there was nothing he could do. The armor he had suddenly thrown together did not cover his stomach. His flesh was open and an easy target. Suddenly both of the Brindle’s hooves struck the left side Levi’s stomach. Levi winced in pain, feeling as though to large knives had cut into his abdomen. He couldn’t breathe. His breath was always there, and in the blink of an eye it was taken away. He gasped and clutched for the precious air that mocked him as he pierced through it. It was as though the air taunted him, laughing from every direction. His throat began to be an abyss, and nothing was coming in or out. Clenching his jaw and squeezing his eyes the brute gasped for air again. The pure air came flowing through his nostrils, and then flew into his throat. He was starting to regain composure.

We WILL not lose.

When he turned left after landing to face his brindled foe, he stood tall, waiting to see what the weaver had to say for himself. Levi listened, but he did not acknowledge a word he was saying. Levi knew that Crowley was just trying to rile him up, get him angry and unfocused. The sinister laugh made Levi want to cringe, but he just scorned an evil glare back towards Crowley and his dumb mutt. Wowww, Levi thought to himself You’re going to use a FLEABAG to help you fight? You’re not a true warrior because if you were you would fight me yourself.

Levi leaped forwards once again, pushing off the comforting sands which made up his desert home. His teeth were bared open, ready to face the brindled and his mutt. They raced towards each other, Levi pushing himself into a steady canter. His bones ached for more and his heart beat steadily. The soldier anticipated, preparing for any sort of movement that his foe might attempt. The opponent came to Levi’s left side. Levi saw his head tilt and he knew that Crowley was going to attempt to scrape him with his horns. Levi moved towards the right, slightly, but it was all too quick. Crowley scraped his left side, near his rib cage, tearing into the skin. Levi grunted again in pain, but it wasn’t too bad. It would probably leave a slight scab. As he passed Crowley he flapped his left wing hard towards his face or anywhere he might be able to temporarily stun his foe. Quickly after, Levi saw Crowley’s butt twisting towards him. Levi moved to the right and dodged the attack. Levi did not attack Crowley again, like he would have, because he had another pleasant surprise coming his way… joy

We WILL NOT lose.

The demon came sprinting towards Levi, leaping into the air as Levi moved to the right. If the mutt was trying to leap onto his left wing, then he succeeded, but partly. The mutt grabbed his left wing, weighing Levi down. Levi kept running, as the dog gripped to the lower part of his wing with his jaw wrapped around it. Levi screamed in pain as the mutt’s daggers dug into the skin and flesh of the wing. Levi attempted to shake the dog off, but knew that wouldn’t work. Feathers were flying everywhere. Levi quickly twisted his butt to the right, swinging his powerful legs towards the mutt, aiming to kick him off, wherever that would be. If that did not work, then Levi attempted another attack to the mutt. His bared his teeth as he craned his neck, attempting to bite the demons neck. He hoped that at least one of these attacks would work. Even if Levi were to lose this battle, he was not going to give up… no matter what.

We will be victorious.

[ PC: 2/4

MC: 1/2

@[Crowley] ]
"Talk talk talk."




Crowley Posts: 166
Outcast atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 12 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Talbot :: Common Hellhound :: Acid & Name? :: Caracal :: None Dingo
#5

We build cathredrals to our pain
Establish monuments to attain


With his head dropped, the sound of Levi's hooves against the packed sand below was the only signal given to the brindle as to what his opponent was doing. The Weaver kept his head tucked, however, following through with his attack all the same. A moment later, he could feel one horn drag across Levi's barrel with satisfying force. He'd certainly cut into him judging by the grullo's grunt, but he had not impaled him, such a thought nearly causing the stallion to frown. His kick proved to be in vain, however, for his hooves only met the still air of the night before resuming their position in the sandy earth as Crowley moved away from Levi at a lengthy, steady trot.

Talbot's initial plan of attack hadn't worked entirely the way he had wanted to, but his jaws did find themselves wrapped around the lower part of the grullo's left wing. It was better than nothing, at least. The hellhound bit down with as much force as he was able, pulling his legs close to put as much weight on the wing as possible as he began to thrash himself back and forth, left to right. The more damage that was brought to the Pegasi's wing, the better chance they had at victory.

Now that Levi was tied up with trying to deal with his partner, Crowley had turned to face Levi again, having placed himself at the grullo's right. With cold, calculating eyes he watched. Did the Pegasus really think that he could win? Whether the Basin was victorious or not, Crowley intended to shut at least this one's mouth and leave him with a good impression on the Basin. Crowley wanted to see Levi and all of his kind's blood spilled until they were no more, even if they must resort to taking one down at a time.

A yelp catching in his ears as the Throat stallion retaliated, his bite landing right on the back of Talbot's neck. It was successful in pulling skin and fur away, pain radiating down the hound's spine down to the very tip of his pointed tail. It would leave a bruise for quite some time, and it was enough to make him drop from Levi's wing and turn tail, scampering directly away from Levi's left as quickly as he was able in order to plan his next attack from a distance.

It was when Talbot's yelp had rang out that Crowley rushed forward in a gallop under the cover of the eternal night, hoping it would aide him in remaining undetected despite the crunch of sand beneath his hooves. As he drew closer to Levi, the Weaver curled his neck and brought his nose close to his forearms, horns poised and pointed for the right side of Levi's barrel. Using the last couple yards to slow himself, Crowley then threw his head up, intending to jam his spiraled horns into the soft underside of Levi's barrel, but the brindle would be just as happy if he were to pierce any other part of his horrendous, winged adversary.

[WC ;; 521. 2/4 attacks. 1/2 magic/companion uses.]



Freedom from all of the scars and the sins
Lest we drown in the darkness within

Levi Posts: 270
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Stallion :: Pegasus :: 16.1hh :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Ava
#6
Levi

A blood curling scream, pushed itself out of Talbot’s Pegasi thirsty mouth. Levi cringed at the disgusting, ear piercing, cry of the dog. Before he even realized why the dog was crying, Levi’s taste buds alerted him of a metallic taste traveling down his tongue. Levi was successful in his attack. The dog’s skin was ripped fleshly off and hanging from the grullo’s mouth. Levi spit coughing a bit as dog fur’s covered his mouth. With a snort he realized the weight being lifted off of his left wing, as the dog went scurrying and whimpering away back to his opponent. His wing felt damaged… like something was horribly wrong. A shooting pain was moving from his lower wing, where the dog had locked its daggers, to his upper wing. Feathers were gone and he tested moving his wing slightly to see if it was bearable to fight with. Ouch! The grullo thought to himself. There was no way he would be able to use his left wing again in the fight, or to fly away. Levi didn’t care though, he was going to finish this monster whether he was injured or not. Levi wanted to make sure that his opponent knew that he was not ever going to beat the throat and surely that he was not getting past Levi. Levi was going to make an impression on this stallion for sure.

Levi was surely not accustom to fighting a dog, but he figured sure enough that no dog, especially this one, would never bother with him again. With a snort Levi dragged his front leg across the sands, indicating that he was ready for more.

Hoof beats were collecting in the sands once again as Crowley made his way towards Levi. Crowley must have been upset about his precious companion’s injury. Levi grinned at the thought, as Crowley was arriving closer. Levi again leapt from his back legs, racing towards his opponent. His wings pressed against his rib cages, ready. There was still a sharp pain arriving from his left wing, but Levi was trying hard to ignore it. When Crowley had reached Levi his horns were pointed towards his figure, like swords. He arrived on Levi’s right side, slowing down at the last couple of yards, aiming his horns at the stallion’s barrel. Levi quickly twisted his butt so that he was facing Crowley, rearing backwards flailing his front hooves hoping to knock Crowley wherever he could. Crowley’s horns were successful in slicing Levi’s chest vertically from his upper chest almost down into his stomach. Levi squealed in pain as he felt the warm blood spill down his chest. Levi felt as though he was being cut with two knives which quietly slipped down the depth of his chest.

Levi was not giving up so quickly. Pressing his hooves down back onto the sands, Levi raced towards Crowley, aiming for his right side. Levi threw himself towards Crowley, attempting to body slam his right side. If he missed, then he quickly opened his mouth, the grasp whatever he could, hoping to injure Crowley. Levi did not know what he was going to be successful in hitting or grasping, but all he knew was he was not going to give up until he won for the Throat.

[PC: 3/4

MC: 1/2

@[Crowley] ]

"Talk talk talk."




Crowley Posts: 166
Outcast atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 12 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Talbot :: Common Hellhound :: Acid & Name? :: Caracal :: None Dingo
#7

We build cathedrals to our pain
Establish monuments to attain


In mere moments, Crowley found himself beneath Levi, the fool rearing and thus exposing his very tender underside. The brindle was terribly disappointed that his horns only seemed to have pierced the grullo's chest; oh, how he would have loved to see the length of his belly sliced open and his life-force, among other things, pouring out. He could try again later, but for now, he had other things to worry about in regards to flying hooves.

Levi's hooves were successful in knocking into his topline and then into his withers, causing a throaty grunt of pain to leave his lips. The hit to the top of his neck would do little more than bruise and be sore for several days, if not a couple weeks, but the strike to his withers was more painful and would linger for a longer time. Each hit flared with pain, white-hot especially upon his withers, but Crowley was in no position to stay where he was any longer than he had already been there. Shifting himself to the right, he took off into a canter, ears tipping backwards in mild annoyance as his shoulders flared in time to the beat of his hooves.

The Weaver had expected the Throat stallion to come to his left, but he was proved wrong when he heard the other stallion approaching from his right. The two of them were almost exact in height as well as build, so a ramming from the grullo wouldn't be as terribly detrimental as it could be from an even larger stallion. Crowley doubted he had the advantage of speed, either, considering his rank didn't require too much activity and thus, he never found himself building stamina as much as a soldier might. Instead, before Levi could get too close, he kicked out and to the right, aiming for the stud's side, head, legs; whatever he could manage to get a hit on.

However, the grullo launched himself to the left, pushing his chest into Crowley's right hip and effectively shoving him. It nearly sent his hind legs out from under him, and Crowley had to struggle to keep himself upright at such a speed as he was going, especially in the sloppy, sandy footing so graciously provided by the Throat. Head lowered to try and help keep his balance, the brindle managed to straighten back out after what should have been four or five strides, only to be met by teeth when he pulled his head back up. They scraped and pulled away at the skin on the middle of his neck, managing to leave a bare patch on his dark hide. It was a quick, sharp pain, but would be more of a nuisance than anything else as this battle resumed.

From where he was, positioned no more than a hundred yards away from the pair, Talbot watched Levi with hungry eyes, pacing along at what would currently be Levi's right side, ready to leap forward and run in for another attack on the Pegasus.

Dropping his hind-end and cranking his front legs to help him stop, Crowley turned his head to the right and aimed to take a bite out of Levi's rump as he passed by. His stop was made more difficult than it should have been due to the sand underfoot, sending him sliding a few more feet before he finally stopped. Straightening back up, Crowley turned himself to the left and continued at a trot, head turned to watch Levi's form for the next oncoming attack. Crowley was thankful for the Moon's light from above, otherwise, he wasn't sure he'd be able to see his opponent at all.

"C'mon," the brindle spoke up with a wide, conniving grin marring his face, golden eyes shining with malice, "Is that all you've got?"

[WC ;; 635. 3/4 attacks. 1/2 magic/companion uses.]



Freedom from all of the scars and the sins
Lest we drown in the darkness within

Levi Posts: 270
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Stallion :: Pegasus :: 16.1hh :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Ava
#8
Levi

Even though Levi was away for a while, fighting with Crowley had put a flare back into the stallion’s heart. It was like a key to a lock, peanut butter to jelly, or candy to a baby. His muscles felt ache and his bones were battered and bruised. The pure experience alone was heart pumping as the brute dripped with sweat in his blood stained skin.

He was back to his home and he was glad to be. It wasn’t what he was expecting, but he had to expect the unexpected. If he didn’t, he knew pain was going to be a factor and it was. He was surely still injured and obviously it was going to affect him long after the fight, but he was glad because it showed him that the fight was real. The pain would remind him of the invasion, the brindle, and his precious mutt companion.

Levi was surprised by how quickly his attack had gone. The whole fight seemed to be moving in slow motion because of everything that was going on. The buzzing noise of others fighting, his thoughts, and his opponents hot breath as it flew out of his nostrils. The soldier’s airborne hooves suddenly felt contact. Levi's hooves kicked out into Crowley’s topline and then traced to his withers. Quickly his hooves retreated to the ground, meeting the comforting sands. Levi suddenly grunted on impact. Flesh and bone were compacted together as his shoulder met Crowley’s left hip. A shooting pain was still in his wing, and now there was a new one which was added into his shoulder from the impact of the duo’s body collision. Levi only got a couple of canter lengths before he felt another slicing pain on his front left knee. Crowley was successful in slicing the top fresh skin on Levi’s knee cap right off. Levi winced in pain, closing his eyes momentarily to obtain the rip. Once it was over he opened his silver orbs, trying to ignore the pain, when he saw Crowley almost fell. Losing his balance, Levi watched Crowley closely. As Crowley was passing by, the brute felt his teeth grip and take skin off of Crowley’s neck. He saw a bare patch and felt a bit satisfied. It wasn’t the most aggressive thing, but it was something. Better than nothing, right?

A sharp pain then stung his ass. Crowley had ripped a big chunk of skin off of Levi’s rump. Levi let out a grunt in surprise from the un-predictableness of Crowley’s cunning attack. Levi was getting sick of this now though, he needed to end it for good. Levi twisted around, letting the moonlight illuminate his grullo body. Standing strong looking, he breathed heavily eyeing his opponent. The brindle proceeded to trot towards him egging him on with words. Levi let out a malevolent laugh, mocking him in a way. If this horned fool thought that he was going to give up now, he was crazy. Levi always had another plan in the back of his mind.

Staying still, the brute allowed himself to talk once again. “No.” Levi simply said. At that moment, Levi closed his eyes as his clenched his hooves into the desert floor. Vibrations started to send waves into his legs, and then into his body. His orbs shimmered like the stars from the moonlight as he proceeded in on his final plan. A wave was starting to form from the bristling sand. Levi wanted to be creative in the way he ended this. The wave was growing larger as it rose way above Levi’s head almost acting like the rolling sea itself. It grew wider as well reaching a good seven lengths at least. When Levi felt that he had gained enough sand and power, he shot the wave with much of his force towards the trotting Crowley. This wave was probably un-dodge able and at the speed he sent it, Crowley would have to gain a miracle to dodge this monster. Granules of sand formed almost a wake as it traveled towards Crowley breaking the sand and making a path where it went. Levi felt weak now, but continued to push. He would push until he could no longer. He hoped that the wave would go rolling into his opponent. Levi shouted “Good luck getting past this!” before he watched to see what the sand wave would do.

[ PC: 4/4

MC: 2/2

Dingoo this was a great fight! I enjoyed reading your writing and having Levi meet Crowley:) Maybe we could spar again sometime?:P Thanks!

@[Crowley] ]


"Talk talk talk."




Crowley Posts: 166
Outcast atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 12 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Talbot :: Common Hellhound :: Acid & Name? :: Caracal :: None Dingo
#9

We build cathedrals to our pain
Establish monuments to attain


Crowley was sweltering, his barrel heaving from exertion; he couldn't imagine what this invasion upon the Throat might have been like if not for the boundless night, granting the Basin attackers cover from the heat that should have accompanied Birdsong. The question as to why the sun had disappeared completely from the sky was yet to be answered, but for now, the brindle was completely elated with not having to deal with it.

From beneath the moonlight, Crowley could see that the grullo had turned to face him, even laughing at him to surely mock his words before answering with a 'no'. A portentous grin was quick to slide across the Weaver's face, and his barrel rattled in effort to hold back his own laughter. If this Throat stallion thought him to be crazy, then he was right in his accusations.

At the moment that Crowley saw the stallion dig his hooves into the ground, growing rigid, the Weaver was again on the move, transitioning from a trot to a gallop in one fell movement. He knew that magic was still abound throughout the lands of Helovia, even if some weren't fully and properly functioning like this one's apparently was. As he moved, curling to the right with the intent to make a large circle around Levi and hopefully throw his aim off, he could see the grullo forming an impressive wall of sand. Crowley had been witness to many types of magic before, but never anything like this. He knew not what it would do, nor what speed or power it possessed until it was finally launched at him.

At the same time, Talbot had made his final move and pushed himself into a ground-covering run, intending to come up from behind on Levi's left, yellow eyes locked on the grullo's neck. Despite the crunches of sand as he moved, the hound was otherwise silent as he came closer, hoping Levi's focus would aide him in executing a successful attack. When close enough, the hound of hell pushed himself from the desert floor and propelled himself into the air, jaws parting and aiming to wrap around Levi's throat. If his aim was true, he would tighten his jaws as much as he was able and proceed to ring his own body left and right to try and strangle the stallion.

It came at Crowley like a tidal wave, the granules of sand rolling over one another as they barreled towards their target with remarkable speed. A normally witty creature, Crowley found himself without a thing to say this time, nor a way to get himself completely out of the situation. All he could do was prepare to lessen the blow, and so he dug his own hooves into the ground below him to come to a halt. Again, it was difficult to do so very quickly in the unfamiliar terrain, and the wave of sand drew ever closer in those few extra seconds. When stopped, Crowley turned his hindquarters towards the sand and thus, Levi himself, closing his eyes and widening his stance to brace himself.

The wave hit full force, and though the Weaver was somewhat formidable in size, he couldn't completely hold himself up against the power of it. It pushed him, unwillingly sending him forward a few feet until he struggled to stop himself. Stretching his front legs out, he clambered to find purchase on the loose ground and keep himself upright until the brunt of the wave had dissipated. His rear stung, feeling as though a million needles had suddenly pierced his hide. As his hindquarters had taken most of the force of the attack, they were sure to bruise and be sore for days to come. Even with his ears pressed against his neck, some of the sand still managed to get in them, but the worst of it came when the granules flew into his nose and gathered around closed eyelids.

Eventually, the wave was gone, and Crowley was miraculously left standing. Battered, bruised and beaten, but he had not fallen. Opening his eyes, Crowley was met by the waiting particles of sand which more than happily took to obscuring his sight, causing a biting and stinging sensation. With every breath came an unpleasant clot of sand, and though the brindle would very much like to dislodge it all, his focus needed to remain on the fight; Levi could be above him for all he knew. Turning to the right in a semi-circle, he readied himself, but was pleasantly surprised when he saw that Talbot had moved in. Another callous grin spread across the Weaver's face, and he let out a long, haggard breath.

Let this be the end of the fight, as well as Levi's life.

[WC ;; 800. 4/4 attacks. 2/2 magic/companion uses.

You too, Ava! :D I enjoyed it a lot!]



Freedom from all of the scars and the sins
Lest we drown in the darkness within

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Levi

Victory is ours Levi thought to himself. A twisted smile arose from his dark lips as his head almost drooped in exhaustion. Breathing heavily, he allowed the flow of air in and out of his lungs. Moonlit eyes were surprised, but jaded looking. All he really needed to do was just redeem his energy. It took much of his power to create that mound of sand. Not only that, but also to shoot it at Crowley with such intense speed. It may have been a hassle to actually send the wave of glittery grains, but the tidal wave itself was completely successful in hitting the target, Crowley. When the wave hit his opponent, Levi grimaced with delight. He watched as the whirling sands completely hide the foe’s figure, crushing him sawing him with stinging beads. The brindled foe thought that he could beat Levi? Well then, maybe he should think again next time.

The silver brute almost felt relief rush through his weakened muscles. Although he never relaxed completely, he was sure that this was almost over. Every time he sparred the anticipation was still there for hours even after the spar had ended. Pressing his gaze to look for Crowley, something tingled in the back of his spine. A lurid fear suddenly took over the chills abruptly. Levi recognized one figure and one figure only. The brute frowned with displeasure, but also was worried. He was so focused on just attacking Crowley that he had forgotten about his devious assistant. Where was that dumb mutt? Levi thought in a funk. Wonderstruck, the brute flickered his eyes around, straining to see if the figure lurked anywhere around Crowley. Features grew large in bewilderment as the mutt was nowhere to be seen. The hellhound was glowing with rage just moments ago, but he would? Just kidding, Levi had figured out where he was in a matter of seconds later.

A harsh force was propelled onto the stallion’s neck. His body pushed forwards from the impact, with a grunt from the collision. That same piercing feeling of the daggers gripped into his flesh. The aching pain was ten times heavier than it had seemed before. Clumps of acid spewed from Levi’s neck, trailing down the depths of his chest and legs. Levi bellowed a vicious growl in pain, agitated by the mutt. His jaws locked harder and harder like a noose strangling someone to death. Levi’s trachea was starting to close, as was his bone in his neck. Knowing that this could be the end, Levi braced himself. Feeling the pulling and closing sensations of the jaws. Gasping for air now, he was almost trembling with fear. It wasn’t because he was afraid of this mutt, but it was because he did not want to die… not now at least. His vision was starting to blur and he was so numb from all the pain. The pain was so much; he just almost didn’t feel it anymore. Limbs were growing weak, but his determination to keep up was the only thing that was keeping him going. He would have the will to defeat these murders if it was the last thing he did.

[Closing defense]
"Talk talk talk."








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#11

CROWLEY | LEVI
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By my verdict Crowley is the winner.
Crowley receives 1 VP and earns one point for the Basin Invaders.


LEVI -- post 1 (attack only)

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: Making sand armor. This is an improper use of Levi's magic. He can only make: one horse-sized shape that is not dense, or three small animal sized shapes that are more dense. I would consider a full suit of armor fairly dense - but he also needs to be concentrating on the form the whole time, or it falls a part.
+ 1| Attack: Right hind leg, kicking at the back of Crowley's skull/neck area.
- 1| Borderline Powerplay: Now he was facing towards the stallion’s rear and ready to fight on the ground - you cannot dictate where your opponent is. Crowley could have done any number of things in the time that it took Levi to turn around and land.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
- 1| Easy Read: Slow down and re-read your posts! There were lots of grammatical and spelling errors, and you even switched tenses in the middle of sentences.
- 1| Flow: This post was confusing to read. First Levi dives toward's Crowley's left side - then he flies close to the ground - then he makes armor - then he charges (? in the air?) - then he kicks out. It was only in your summary that you said he was trying to fly head on. Also, Levi is a big boy - to say that he turned in the air 'quickly' isn't realistic - he would have to glide in an arch, or drop a shoulder/wing to come around. But there's no mention of that - keep in mind how big a creature like this really is, and how much slower his turning speed would be in the air!

CROWLEY -- post 1

[Realism]
0| Injury: Levi's kick to his dock-area. No mention of pain.
+ 1| Attack: Bucking upwards after Levi's kick.
- 2| Powerplay: Imposing an attack your opponent did not give: Levi only attacked once in this post - He flew towards Crowley's left side, lowered down to make his armor, then flew up for his attack.
+ 1| Attack: Crowley's horn attack to the left side of Levi's face/neck.
- 1| Attack: Buck - no mention of direction or target
+ 1| Attack: Crowley's left shoulder into Levi's left
+ 1| Attack: Talbot attack to Levi's left wing.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Easy Read.
+ 1| Flow.

LEVI -- post 2

[Realism]
+ 1| Injury: Crowley's buck to his stomach.
+ 1| Defense: Moving to the right to avoid Crowley's horn - taking the attack on his ribcage
+ 1| Defense: Moving farther to the right to avoid the buck
- 1| Dropped attack: No mention of Crowley's shoulder attack.
+ 1| Attack: Flapping his wing at Crowley's face
+ 1| Counter-attack: Trying to kick Talbot off of his wing
+ 1| Attack: Biting at Talbot.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Easy Read.
+ 1| Flow.

CROWLEY -- post 2

[Realism]
- 1| Dropped attack: No mention of Levi's wing trying to hit Crowley
- 1| Dropped attack: No mention of Levi's kick towards Talbot
+ 1| Injury: Levi's bite to Talbot
+ 1| Attack: Horn attack to the lower part of Levi's right side.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Easy Read.
+ 1| Flow.

LEVI -- post 3

[Realism]
- 1| Counter-Attack: Levi quickly twisted his butt so that he was facing Crowley, rearing backwards flailing his front hooves hoping to knock Crowley wherever he could. . I don't understand this at all - Levi was already running straight at Crowley, what do you mean he twisted? There is also no mention of slowing down, so that he had time to rear - all of a sudden he's running towards Crowley, and then rearing. It also isn't realistic for a horse to rear, if their opponent has a horn. Exposing his unprotected stomach (and organs) to an opponent with two horns charging at you, doesn't make sense.
+ 1| Injury: Crowley's horn to Levi's stomach.
0| Attack: Body slamming Crowley's right side - which side are you attacking with? If Levi was rearing and Crowley running past him after the horn attack, Levi would need to spin around to pursue him, but there's no mention of this. And if he is running after him, going the same direction (as I believe he would be, since you say that Levi "raced towards" Crowley - and if not, it would be PP to say that Crowley had turned around, when he hasn't yet), wouldn't Levi be using his nearly broken left wing? Wouldn't that hurt?
- 1| Borderline Powerplay: If he missed, then he quickly opened his mouth, the grasp whatever he could, hoping to injure Crowley. - I'm assuming you meant to grasp whatever he could - which to me reads very declarative.
+ 1| Attack: Bite at Crowley

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
- 1| Easy Read: Re-read your posts! A blood curling scream, pushed itself out of Talbot’s Pegasi thirsty mouth. - This doesn't make sense, and it's your opening line! There were also a number of spelling mistakes in this post.
+ 1| Flow.

CROWLEY -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Injury: Levi's hooves to the top of his neck/withers
+ 1| Attack: Kicking out towards the right, at Levi.
+ 1| Injury: Levi's shoulder-attack to his right hip - I liked the visual of Crowley stumbling on the sands :P
+ 1| Injury: Levi's bite
- 2| Powerplay: bite out of Levi's rump as he passed by - Ava did not write Levi as having run by Crowley. Yes, you have Crowley stop, but maybe Levi is able to stop just as quickly, and doesn't go past.
+ 1| Attack: Bite towards Levi's rump

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion. he never found himself building stamina as much as a soldier might.
+ 1| Easy Read.
+ 1| Flow.

LEVI -- post 4

[Realism]
0| Injury: I assume the damage done to Levi's knee was from Crowley's kick? But you don't mention it. Crowley's kick was meant to come before Levi's shoulder attack, if this is the attack you're referring to, you write it as coming after.
+ 1| Injury: Crowley's bite.
- 1| Attack: Levi's magic is not capable of making something this large - he can only make one structure that is horse sized - 7 inches wide and taller than Levi, is larger than horse-size.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Flow:
- 1| Easy Read: Lots of typo's made this awkward and difficult to read, such as: At that moment, Levi closed his eyes as his clenched his hooves into the desert floor. or Flesh and bone were compacted together as his shoulder met Crowley’s left hip - because you aimed for Crowleys right hip, and that's where Dingo took the damage.

CROWLEY -- post 4

[Realism]
+ 1| Attack: Talbot running to Levi's left side, to attack his neck.
+ 1| Defense: Turning his hind-end into the wall of sand.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion.
+ 1| Easy Read.
+ 1| Flow.

LEVI -- post 5 (defense only)

[Realism]
- 2| Powerplay: Inflicting an attack your opponent did not give: Talbot did not employ acid in this attack.


CROWLEY

[Bonus]
+ 2| Breed Comparison.
+ 2| Surroundings: I like how both Crowley and Talbot were aware of the sands - Crowley finding purchase hard at times, and Talbot being able to move with less sound.

[Injuries]
+ 1| Least Injured.

[Creativity]
Nothing of note.

Comments: Great fight! Just be careful that you are responding to all of your opponent's attacks.

LEVI

[Bonus]
+ 1| Breed Comparison.
+ 1| Surroundings.

[Injuries]
- 2| Broken Bone: Survival of broken bones are slim, so it's best to be avoided. Broken bones also hinder many options when fighting, heavily reducing chances to win. Fractures or even bruised bones are better choices. Avoid broken legs, ribs or joints. The hip and shoulder are very strong, and should really never be broken.
Injured Organ (Tracheae): No organ is an ideal choice to wound, especially as an injured organ only causes a downward spiral of bad things to happen. Death is likely eventual.

I applaud you for taking damage to Levi, but at times I think you went too far. In this fight, you sustained a potentially broken left wing, a slice from Levi's chest to stomach, and a possibly crushed trachea. All of those things would leave Levi hard pressed to attack, and yet he's running around and attacking just the same.

[Creativity]
Nothing of note.

Comments: Re-read your posts! Through out there were a number of spelling and grammar mistakes which made your posts difficult to read, and difficult for your opponent to reply to. You also did not post a word count either.

TOTAL
Crowley- 73
Levi- 53

image credit to Paulo Brandão


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