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RE: Socks - Ricochet - 12-11-2013 Onni is safe. RE: Socks - Midas - 12-12-2013 Midas defends Africa You there! I demand my money back. Instead of what I ordered, I was delivered a pair of woolen socks- I can't wear these! They're much too warm for summer. Plus, they don't match; one is, how horrific, tattooed while the other is... I don't care how expensive or exotic a brand they are, I just want my good old sport socks! She has two white feet, she lives in dragons throat, she has been disfigured and carries one wing. RE: Socks - Ricochet - 12-12-2013 Africa is safe. RE: Socks - Ricochet - 12-12-2013 Israfel was wanted! You there! I demand my money back. Instead of what I ordered, I was delivered a pair of woolen socks- I can't wear these! They're much too warm for summer. Plus, they don't match; one is, how horrific, tattooed while the other is... I don't care how expensive or exotic a brand they are, I just want my good old sport socks! demand my money back- at Isra's birth wanted to kill her. Not really a clue though, as it's very vague. instead of what I ordered- never would have expected smoke to give both to mutant. again not much of a clue. they don't match- is a tribaid, this clue was meant to allude to being wrong or freakish in some way main clues: much too warm for summer - Isra is hotheaded and also the daughter of sun god, and also has fire magic tattooed- tribal markings on wings expensive or exotic a brand- demigod, obviously very exotic :B other not-so-clues: woollen socks- generally very warm socks (see much too warm for summer clue) RE: Socks - Rayo - 12-12-2013 0 | "demand my money back" - as you said, very vague and not really a clue. I never would have gotten "wanted to kill her" from "demand my money back." This really suggests an exchange of some sort. 0 | "instead of what I ordered" - as you said, very vague and not really a clue. This doesn't allude to a "mutant" in any way. It just makes me think of someone unwanted. -1 | "they don't match" - though I feel that this is a step in the right direction, ultimately I don't feel that it worked for a color clue, or for a hint towards something "wrong or freakish." +1 | "much too warm for summer" - acceptable fire hint. +1 | "tattooed" - good appearance hint. +1 | "expensive or exotic a brand" - demigods would indeed be exotic. Also, expensive in that light could mean valuable, as demigods arguably are. 2/3 - Fail. Ultimately I feel that there was a lot of fluff and not very many actual clues. A lot of times when trying to hide clues, people tend to go wayyy overboard. You had some good things in here - the tattoo clue was your best, for sure, and the expensive/exotic brand had promise if put into the right context, but there was just too much for me. RE: Socks - Tamme - 12-17-2013 You there! I demand my money back. Instead of what I ordered, I was delivered a pair of woolen socks- I can't wear these! They're much too warm for summer. Plus, they don't match; one is, how horrific, tattooed while the other is... I don't care how expensive or exotic a brand they are, I just want my good old sport socks! demand my money back- at Isra's birth wanted to kill her. Not really a clue though, as it's very vague. instead of what I ordered- never would have expected smoke to give both to mutant. again not much of a clue. they don't match- is a tribaid, this clue was meant to allude to being wrong or freakish in some way main clues: much too warm for summer - Isra is hotheaded and also the daughter of sun god, and also has fire magic +1, I got it okay. tattooed- tribal markings on wings 0, this made sense to me, but her markings are not tribal. To me, it's very clearly henna with an Indian feature. expensive or exotic a brand- demigod, obviously very exotic :B +1, definitely exotic, she is one of a kind! other not-so-clues: woollen socks- generally very warm socks (see much too warm for summer clue) The other ones you said yourself were not so clues, and I really didn't understand how they related anyway. 2/3 good ones for me, but not enough to pass. Fail. |