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Wrong Address [ARTORIAS armor to KNOX] - Knox - 09-28-2015
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done. And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
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DT: 4
AB: 3
WE:2
RE: Wrong Address - Volterra - 09-29-2015
Volterra protects himself.
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself - Is an Outcast
check out the scene and see new sights I never could before - Has participated in all SWP discovery threads
all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows! - Empty inside = reference to dark personality, shadows = black fur, cobwebs = white forelegs
felt like four hours - Born on the 4th of January
RE: Wrong Address - Abraham - 09-29-2015
Abraham protects himself and his charms.
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, (Is an outcast) check out the scene and see new sights I never could before (Current thread in the Blood Falls), take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done. And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked! (Reference to his father, a long-time Helovian and leader)
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes (Has murdered on site) of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
RE: Wrong Address - Lace - 09-29-2015
Lace is vigilant
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
-metal colored with dark points and cobweb marking
-outcast
-used to have a tense relation with the Basin, 'blocked by electrical work'
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done. And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
-used to be a leader with a title but it was a long time ago now
-has been on site for almost 4 years
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
RE: Wrong Address - Dvorak - 09-29-2015
Dvorak blocks himself
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before,
---> Born in the Rift
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line,
---> Came through in a huge thread
more than just a little cracked!
---> Has white passive magic that runs over his body
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
---> Has no family here
RE: Wrong Address - Knox - 09-29-2015
Four little sailor boys
lost at sea
useless cries flung at the waves:
don't take me!
Four little sailor boys,
four fast fools.
Little throats all growing hoarse,
cries turned into mewls.
First cried the killers and
then cried the old ones,
each with pleading cases but
the sea wanted none!
RE: Wrong Address - Najya - 09-29-2015
Najya protects herself and her posessions.
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, (Is presently an outcast) check out the scene and see new sights I never could before (could never explore in old herd due to role as queen consort), take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy (Gold markings, headpiece) P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside (few connections in helovia) 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, (light/dark color reference)who knows!
So I went, what a mob, (chased from old home by invading mob) took forever to get through that line, felt like four(left four loved ones behind) hours before it was all said and done. And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate wrapped (wears headpiece made of gold plates) up in cloth and commemorating times of old (self described storyteller), and more than just a little cracked!
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write (family presumed dead) to!
RE: Wrong Address - Gaucho - 09-29-2015
Gaucho watches over his flock, specifically Morrigan
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box - metal DT key and silver spider crown (alloy)
I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows! - morrigan has dark coloring (shadows) and the spiderweb marking on her back (cobwebs)
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done. And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked! - cracked plate could reference her broken heart, which is listed in her profile
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to! - has no family on site
RE: Wrong Address - Knox - 09-30-2015
Gold upon her face
and fear struck in her eyes
asks me if I'd want her,
can't see a reason why!
Gaucho's guess receives only a distant and unimpressed snort. Morrigan is safe.
RE: Wrong Address - Knox - 09-30-2015
by myself
---No herd, & came out of the Rift alone/knowing nobody there
take the route once blocked by electrical work
---Blood Falls was unavailable before Time God "fixed it"
to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
---Artorias is part metal/has metal items (specifically steel, which is an alloy) and shadows come from inside him
---Clunky is a reference both to his larger size and his build as a result from being fused with metal.
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done.
---The first SWP fight had a lot of people and there were four threads to it.
And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate, wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
---From appearance: "A grand figure of steel and cloth, mail and plate. "
---Commemorating times of old is meant to be in homage to all his Knightly stuff
---The plate is "more than just a little cracked" because Artorias himself is described as broken in personality.
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
---No lineage
RE: Wrong Address - Odd - 10-01-2015
PASS
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself,
+1 | Yep - Rank ref.
check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work
-1 | It wasn't blocked by the God of the Spark - if anything, it was the 'electrical work' which unblocked it. And like mentioned in your last stealth, mentioning electricity like this seems to suggest something about the character. Since he has no spark magic, this was misleading for me.
to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years,
+1| Okay as an appearance ref.
you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
0 | Black mist isn't the same as a shadow or a cobweb.
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done.
+1| Yep!
And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
0 Good as an appearance ref again, but you can only get points for one type of clue.
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
+1| Yep!
3/3 for me.
RE: Wrong Address - Blu - 10-01-2015
PASS
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
---No herd, & came out of the Rift alone/knowing nobody there
+1| [Rank ref] solid
---Blood Falls was unavailable before Time God "fixed it"
0| [History ref] too vauge
---Artorias is part metal/has metal items (specifically steel, which is an alloy) and shadows come from inside him
0| [Asset ref] hmm, I just really struggled with this, because cobwebs felt like a reference and shadows isn't the same as mist or fog. Also the alloy metal reference was super short compared to the mention of mail and 'haven't checked in years all empty inside' it just doesn't feel focused enough for me to say yes.
---Clunky is a reference both to his larger size and his build as a result from being fused with metal.
0| [Build ref] because his profile doesn't really describe him as clunky I don't feel this can apply. Who knows he could be a ballerina.
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done.
---The first SWP fight had a lot of people and there were four threads to it.
0| [Thread ref] doesn't apply to the character
And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate, wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
---From appearance: "A grand figure of steel and cloth, mail and plate. "
+1| [Appearance ref] Niiice
---Commemorating times of old is meant to be in homage to all his Knightly stuff
0| [Personality ref] too vague
---The plate is "more than just a little cracked" because Artorias himself is described as broken in personality.
+1| [Personality ref] was a bit ont he fence with this one, but I think in the end it's clear enough.
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
---No lineage
+1| [Lineage ref] yup
4/3 necessary to pass
RE: Wrong Address - Blu - 10-01-2015
@Artorias ' armor to Knox.