the Rift


Do you know what it means to bleed?

Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.3hh :: 10 Buff: NUMB
Boom Boom!
#1
Do you know
What it means
To bleed?

Are you so insensitive
That you've forgotten
The first rule?

Ridding yourself
Of the responsibility
You cling to distant islands.

Two serpents twisting wildly
Nothing to come out of it
But a dark, lonely madness.

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
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Mare :: Other :: 2 :: 2 HP: 9001 | Buff: Admin
Tamme
#2
Paladin protects himself.

Do you know - What it means - To bleed?
Reference to Paladin's red fringed mane and tail

Ridding yourself - Of the responsibility
Held elections in the foothills and gave up leadership

You cling to distant islands.
Misses the Tides like crazy

The rest is clever, but not entirely sure how it could relate to Pally.

Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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Boom Boom!
#3
Paladin is not sought.

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#4
First rule of fight club is...

That's what it made me think of xD
 HP: 45.5

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
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Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#5
Likely a stretch, but Deimos protects himself.


Are you so insensitive - He is, unfortunately.

Ridding yourself
Of the responsibility
You cling to distant islands. - He is detached, doesn't care about others, and tends to be reclusive, distancing himself from many.

Two serpents twisting wildly
Nothing to come out of it
But a dark, lonely madness. - His isolation is a dark, lonely place.

Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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Boom Boom!
#6
Deimos is of no interest to me.

d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
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Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#7
I'm not convinced but d'Artagnan is safe.

Do you know
What it means
To bleed? - Colour reference maybe?

Are you so insensitive - Personality, because he's not exactly the most charming xD

But a dark, lonely madness. d'Art can be prone to mad out bursts

my heart’s an endless winter
              filled with rage

Use force at your own peril ;) please tag me!

Osiris Posts: 88
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Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#8
Drats! d'Artagnan was sought.

Do you know
What it means
To bleed?
Color reference - blood red.

Are you so insensitive - His personality is distant and often uncaring.
That you've forgotten
The first rule?
The first rule of medicine is "Do No Harm", but he has knowledge of poison.

Ridding yourself
Of the responsibility (of caring)
You cling to distant islands.
His best friend is Mauja, who is an island unto himself.

Two serpents twisting wildly
Medical crest has two serpents twisted around it, hint toward him being a doctor.
Nothing to come out of it
But a dark, lonely madness.
Often referred to as the mad doctor.


The first letter of the first line of each stanza spells DART.


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