AELIN IS NOT SOUGHT
DT; 2/4
AB; 2/3
WE; 1/4
HF; 0/4
I'll be coming with my guns up,
Shooting at the moon to bring the sun up.
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05-20-2016, 03:54 PM
woops sorry! Their names are so similar and I glanced and thought it was OVIS account! Would a staffy delete my ori post? Sorry again!
AELIN IS NOT SOUGHT DT; 2/4 AB; 2/3 WE; 1/4 HF; 0/4 Just to prove I'm not a runner,
I'll be coming with my guns up, Shooting at the moon to bring the sun up.
05-23-2016, 11:02 AM
Time is up, friends!
Cera's Sun Charm was sought. Pucker up, baby! I'm gonna kiss you shoulder to shoulder, ear to hoof. - appearance ref. Has a scar from d'artagnan that is described as "puckered" from shoulder to shoulder Oh, don't worry about those chilly aches - its about to get hot in here - bio says that the scar aches when it's chilly You're gonna find religion right here in these arms, honey. - bio says he's very religious Scream it to the gospel, you gotta shed that virginal veil for the likes of me. - filler Don't worry, doll, I won't bite if you take me down under. - herd ref, DT is south and therefore DOWN UNDA I know you're older but I promise I'm mature! - he's just a bit older than her Let's get down to pillow talk; are you into hide and seek? - filler Gonna plunder you like you're a chest of gold. - he is the golden prince! :: [ Item: Sun Charm | Small charm in the shape of the sun which glows. ] Just to prove I'm not a runner,
I'll be coming with my guns up, Shooting at the moon to bring the sun up.
05-23-2016, 11:32 AM
Pucker up, baby! I'm gonna kiss you shoulder to shoulder, ear to hoof. - appearance ref. Has a scar from d'artagnan that is described as "puckered" from shoulder to shoulder
-1 | I really want to give you a +1 for this, but the 'ear to hoof' part has nothing to do with the scar and that's misleading Oh, don't worry about those chilly aches - its about to get hot in here - bio says that the scar aches when it's chilly +1 | on profile You're gonna find religion right here in these arms, honey. - bio says he's very religious +1 | also on profile and very true Scream it to the gospel, you gotta shed that virginal veil for the likes of me. - filler -1 | this is definitely misleading since he's not a virgin at all Don't worry, doll, I won't bite if you take me down under. - herd ref, DT is south and therefore DOWN UNDA +1 | definitely got that this was the Throat I know you're older but I promise I'm mature! - he's just a bit older than her +1 | age reference Let's get down to pillow talk; are you into hide and seek? - filler -1 | also misleading as this makes me think of a character who has magic to hide or something like that Gonna plunder you like you're a chest of gold. - he is the golden prince! +1 | LT reference 5 - 3 = 2 2/3 is a fail from me This was a really, really cool stealth, and I don't want you to be discouraged by this. But the fluff you put in was so specific that it became misleading. We were all looking for a character with hiding magic who was a virgin, as those are very notable things. If you use fluff in the future, make sure it's VERY innocuous. For example: Scream it to the gospel, you're going to shed that white veil for me (for his white hair or something). Please let me know if you need any help whatsoever!
Pretty sure Brit was on absent during this period, making this stealth void.
Her absent thread: http://helovia.net/showthread.php?tid=23872, indicating she would be away from the 11-20th. EDIT. Her thread was deleted, but the other admins will be able to see it/the timestamps.
05-23-2016, 11:57 AM
Confirming that this is void as Brit was absent on the 16th when this stealth was made!
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