+0| Googled Edmund, didn't see protector listed anywhere on the first page and this isn't something I consider common knowledge.
You seem quite the type to fawn over darkness. - Since returning to Helovia, Tingal has embraced his 'darker side', and 'lives in darkness' according to his Profile.
+1| Personality ref, good
Ah! Is it All Hallow's Eve already? - Appearance Reference - Tingal is orange and black.
+1| Appearance ref, good
Did you decide on which costume you want to wear? Why not wear both? - Breed reference - Is a Hybrid.
+1| Hybrid reference, good
Come, now; no need to be so nasty. Perhaps you should act your age. - Personality Reference - Is described as 'beastly', 'vicious' and 'primitive'.
+1| Personality ref is good, but I ho-hummed a little about this. Not sure what being nasty has to do with acting his age.
Maybe then you'd actually get a lady. - History Reference; Had a falling out with Hotaru.
-1| To me, this implies somebody who never had a lady to begin with.
3/3- pass