the Rift


Hmmm.

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
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I want to look inside, but it's a little cloudy. I am sure there is something in there moving! Appearance reference: Frosted glass appearance + beating heart

+1 | Appearance

You're much the opposite of me, so dainty in mind and spirit. Personality reference: gentle, shy, etc.

+1 | Personality

You're almost like that Jesus guy, I think. He had wounds from his past, too. Appearance/History? Reference: The cracks shown on her body now are representative of the wounds she sustained as a normal horse

-1 | 'Jesus' was the most misleading part. Because when you think of Jesus' wounds, you think of the crucifixion, and I guess I don't see those as being in his 'past' as he 'died' almost immediately after. But yes, looking for a religious theme, magical powers, etc.  

His blood did not betray him, though, only his friends. I guess that separates y'all. Relationship reference: it was her daughter that betrayed and murdered her

0 | Eh, murder isn't always betrayal. And your daughter isn't always your friend.


Maybe you could have been helped if selfish revenge didn't come first. History reference: Died while her herd was attacking her daughter
-1 | How did selfish revenge come first? She didn't try to seek revenge - her daughter murdered her, then her daughter was attacked by the herd (who couldn't save Aylet anyways), the Gods 'healed' her, and then Aylet went to see her daughter, who just ran away. So I don't see how she is revengeful in anyway.





0/3 is a fail from me


Messages In This Thread
Hmmm. - by Abraham - 10-10-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Erthë - 10-10-2015, 11:33 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Abraham - 10-11-2015, 09:07 AM
RE: Hmmm. - by Ophelia - 10-12-2015, 01:10 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Thranduil - 10-12-2015, 01:14 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Megaera - 10-12-2015, 01:25 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Abraham - 10-12-2015, 02:28 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Rexanna - 10-14-2015, 05:28 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Random Event - 10-14-2015, 07:44 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Abraham - 10-14-2015, 08:59 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Blu - 10-14-2015, 09:21 PM
RE: Hmmm. - by Odd - 10-14-2015, 10:36 PM

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