let's give this a whirl [SEREN's armor to ZENOBIA]

let's give this a whirl [SEREN's armor to ZENOBIA]

Blu the Bootyful Posts: 443

Administrator atk: 99 | def: 99 | dam: 99

Mare :: Other :: 5'7" :: 25 HP: 99999 | Buff: TWERK

Blu

#10

10-15-2015, 09:38 PM

PASS

Woman
Gender Reference
+1| [Gender ref] yup

Of the stars
Magic Reference: her passive magic causes her "coat to shine like nebula".
+1| [Magic ref] yeppers

You are not who you say you are.
History Reference: Seren was not born "Seren", rather she was born with the name Remi and had a different appearance.
+1| [History ref] sure thing

Even your voice is not your own.
Voice Reference? sounds like Amber Marshall, thus her voice isn't "her own"/unique.
0| [Voice ref] eeeeeeh I don't know about this one, lots of people use other people's voices as a way to recognize the character's tone, this wouldn't be something I would account to the character with the way it's worded.

Your arrogance caused your downfall;
History/Personality Reference: in the past "Remi" was very arrogant and trespassed on a demon's land to prove her bravery, thinking they could not harm her. this ultimately lead to her identity being stolen.
+1| [Personality ref] very good

Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Helovia Reference: arrived via the Rift ("The very air cracked and fell apart around..")
+1| [Rank ref] yes

Now you're lost and without a home,
Outcast Reference
0| [Rank ref] already scored above, but would be doable - however her official rank is still Riftian, not Outcast, to be semantical.

I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Relationship/History Reference: family believes her to be dead therefore her "light", aka life/soul, has been put out/ceases to exist.
0| [History ref] Because this is about Seren's history versus a clue to her actual family I counted it as History which has already been scored above.

Where's your delicate grace now?
Appearance Reference: stated to have "delicate grace that is unnatural to her form."
+1| [Appearance ref] mmhmm

Fear lashes out
Personality Reference: "...she would lash out when she thought she was being threatened but only from her fear."
0| [Personality ref] already scored Personality

And eyesight burns.
Appearance Reference? was burned by the blood of the bear god which caused her to lose vision in her left eye.
0| [Personality ref] already scored Appearance

So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Personality Reference: her kindness is said to be hidden behind a wall of fear, sadness, and terror (which is not an exactly stable and secure mindset).
0| [Personality ref] already scored Personality

Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters.
Species Reference: swords = horns. plural used because Seren has two horns.
+1| [Species ref] easy peasy

Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
Breed Reference: pureblood Arabian heritage
0| [Breed ref] in what way does she need to recover it?

I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
Fluff
0| [no ref] fluff

7/3 necessary to pass