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i'm sorry

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#18
i came upon a masked fox today
(mask = her dark face, fox = conniving nature)
+1 Apperance | Ehhh this was almost a 0. But she does have a 'mask' so -shrug-

as i walked through nature's renewal, one shard of ice just forming
(born in birdsong, reference to cold nature and birth)
-1 | Misleading. 'Walking through' nature's renewal doesn't make me think of being born in BirdSong. And one shard of ice just forming doesn't make me think of her 'cold nature', since she started off as being nice and kind-hearted. There was also nothing physically cold about her birth.

once so charming, now beholden to none
("Once a kind-natured soul, that has long since been beaten out of her")
+1 | Personality Her profile specifically says that she owes no loyalties, so this was good!

that small vixen with terra her playground
(more foxy references, allusion to her magical abilities)
0 | So I googled for what foxes usually represent. By no means do I think this list is comprehensive, but here's what a cursory search had to say about Foxes: The fox has long been considered as a witty, quick and intelligent. In some European traditional tales, he’s the character who outsmarts humans and other animals alike and gets away even in the trickiest situations.

There's nothing here that makes me think of Colt, who is described as Cruel, arrogant, fearless, abrasive, etc. Foxes are normally quick-witted, cunning, smart, sneaky, etc. Colt isn't specifically described as any of these things on her profile.

Had you said that 'small' was meant to reference her height or 'her' was a gender ref, I would have awarded a point. but 'terra her playground' doesn't make me think of her magic, given that it has a fire component, and that she shoots rock-bullets. A character who could mold the environment would better fit that clue I think.


1/3 is a fail from me.


Messages In This Thread
i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-14-2015, 05:01 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Dröm - 10-14-2015, 07:21 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-14-2015, 08:49 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Erthë - 10-15-2015, 01:14 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Volterra - 10-15-2015, 01:54 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Ophelia - 10-16-2015, 02:58 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Gaucho - 10-16-2015, 03:30 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Thranduil - 10-16-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-16-2015, 05:11 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-16-2015, 05:12 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Time - 10-16-2015, 05:58 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-17-2015, 04:03 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Nymeria - 10-18-2015, 05:29 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Lena - 10-18-2015, 05:35 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Blu - 10-18-2015, 05:38 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-19-2015, 02:12 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Tamme - 10-19-2015, 02:25 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Odd - 10-19-2015, 02:28 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Imonada - 10-19-2015, 02:48 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Odd - 10-19-2015, 02:54 PM
RE: i'm sorry - by Blu - 10-20-2015, 12:22 AM

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