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12-28-2015, 06:19 PM
FAIL
Speed and warmth becomes you. Breed reference: Thoroughbred x Warmblood
0| [Breed ref] far too vague to nail down a specific breed much less point to breed at all.
Look in the mirror – we are the same. Appearance reference: "Look" to refer to eyes, "we are the same" - Grim and Iona both have green eyes.
0| [Appearance ref] Just having same colored eyes isn't the same as saying 'we are the same' I would have looked for larger similarities like species, gender, rank, body color, etc. over eyes. If this had some way clued into to seek out eyes, then it would have worked, but it was too vague for that.
Such bravery impassions your heart. Personality reference: Straight from her profile: Iona is brave and passionate.
+1| [Personality ref] yup
Though there is nothing else special about you. Magic reference: "Special" to refer to magic, Iona has no personal magic or abilities.
0| [Asset ref] HMMMM I thought about this clue's reveal for a while. In the end I feel like 'special' is too broad a term to specify magic/assets. Because asset wise she has two items which is 'special', but she has no magic or companion - but I also look at special and I see that she's a pegasus not an equine, that she's a paint and has scars, not a solid color etc. Those things to me make her special. Again if this clue had somehow pointed to direct people to look at magic, or lack thereof, it could have worked.
1/3 necessary to pass
Speed and warmth becomes you. Breed reference: Thoroughbred x Warmblood
0| [Breed ref] far too vague to nail down a specific breed much less point to breed at all.
Look in the mirror – we are the same. Appearance reference: "Look" to refer to eyes, "we are the same" - Grim and Iona both have green eyes.
0| [Appearance ref] Just having same colored eyes isn't the same as saying 'we are the same' I would have looked for larger similarities like species, gender, rank, body color, etc. over eyes. If this had some way clued into to seek out eyes, then it would have worked, but it was too vague for that.
Such bravery impassions your heart. Personality reference: Straight from her profile: Iona is brave and passionate.
+1| [Personality ref] yup
Though there is nothing else special about you. Magic reference: "Special" to refer to magic, Iona has no personal magic or abilities.
0| [Asset ref] HMMMM I thought about this clue's reveal for a while. In the end I feel like 'special' is too broad a term to specify magic/assets. Because asset wise she has two items which is 'special', but she has no magic or companion - but I also look at special and I see that she's a pegasus not an equine, that she's a paint and has scars, not a solid color etc. Those things to me make her special. Again if this clue had somehow pointed to direct people to look at magic, or lack thereof, it could have worked.
1/3 necessary to pass
HP: 1100Helovia Hard Mode
