Appearance Ref :: one eye is Blue one is light brown
0 - Desert being capitalized borders on this clue being misleading, but I can see appearance clues here as well. Be careful what you capitalize.
Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world.
Appearance Ref:: Red Roan
+1 - I like it.
The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes,
Personality Ref:: Says he is “Wild” in his profile
+1 - Yep!
Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought
Personality Ref::"Calm- He is very laid back and lets most things just roll off of his back"
+1 - Yep!
The landscape is bare,
Species Ref:: Equine
+1 - Indeed.
Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves
Rank Ref: Outcast
+1 - Yep!