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11-09-2012, 10:26 AM
MIRAGE was sought. However, I'm stopping this early because I only just realized she's really busy, although I'm not sure if that counts as Absent Abyss. So, if anyone could give me feedback still, that's appreciated :) Although Mirage wouldn't have to come even if I had waited the full 48 hours.
EXPLAINATION
Is it real, it is it not?
NAME reference. Mirage is another word for an illusion, which is fake and can be difficult to decipher from reality.
Casuistry, chicanery, it is my silly paradise
Fluff.
Is it abstemious or corpulent, no, it is an average dream in my wonderland,
Abstemious means to not eat, so as to be skinny. Corpulent to eat a lot, so fat. In her profile description, Mirage says her parents were an Arabian and draft, so skinny and fat could roughly sum it up. Average dream in my wonderland is because Mirage is of average build.
Trees rustle green, the leaves may turn yellow,
Fluff.
Shadows bleed red, all wrapped in black
APPEARANCE reference. Mirage is black, and when she bleeds, her blood is red, haha, like any other horse.
Oh how beastly puzzling this dream is,
PERSONALITY reference. She's cryptic and always going back and forth.
Is it real, is it not?
First line.
Bamboozling, befuddling, astonishingly baffling,
Another PERSONALITY reference.
My dream makes me golden-eyed, in love of the sun, although I like the moon's love as well.
APPEARANCE and PERSONALITY. Mirage has golden eyes. And her most important goddess is the moon goddess.
Pink, blue, fluttering wings in the sky, horns on heads, pink, blue
Fluttering wings could refer to her dragon or dragon ability, although that's a lot to draw out of two words :| horns on heads was to make it appear as ifwe're Tor is looking for a unicorn.
It's my paradise.
Fluff.
EXPLAINATION
Is it real, it is it not?
NAME reference. Mirage is another word for an illusion, which is fake and can be difficult to decipher from reality.
Casuistry, chicanery, it is my silly paradise
Fluff.
Is it abstemious or corpulent, no, it is an average dream in my wonderland,
Abstemious means to not eat, so as to be skinny. Corpulent to eat a lot, so fat. In her profile description, Mirage says her parents were an Arabian and draft, so skinny and fat could roughly sum it up. Average dream in my wonderland is because Mirage is of average build.
Trees rustle green, the leaves may turn yellow,
Fluff.
Shadows bleed red, all wrapped in black
APPEARANCE reference. Mirage is black, and when she bleeds, her blood is red, haha, like any other horse.
Oh how beastly puzzling this dream is,
PERSONALITY reference. She's cryptic and always going back and forth.
Is it real, is it not?
First line.
Bamboozling, befuddling, astonishingly baffling,
Another PERSONALITY reference.
My dream makes me golden-eyed, in love of the sun, although I like the moon's love as well.
APPEARANCE and PERSONALITY. Mirage has golden eyes. And her most important goddess is the moon goddess.
Pink, blue, fluttering wings in the sky, horns on heads, pink, blue
Fluttering wings could refer to her dragon or dragon ability, although that's a lot to draw out of two words :| horns on heads was to make it appear as if
It's my paradise.
Fluff.
