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05-23-2016, 11:32 AM
Pucker up, baby! I'm gonna kiss you shoulder to shoulder, ear to hoof. - appearance ref. Has a scar from d'artagnan that is described as "puckered" from shoulder to shoulder
-1 | I really want to give you a +1 for this, but the 'ear to hoof' part has nothing to do with the scar and that's misleading
Oh, don't worry about those chilly aches - its about to get hot in here - bio says that the scar aches when it's chilly
+1 | on profile
You're gonna find religion right here in these arms, honey. - bio says he's very religious
+1 | also on profile and very true
Scream it to the gospel, you gotta shed that virginal veil for the likes of me. - filler
-1 | this is definitely misleading since he's not a virgin at all
Don't worry, doll, I won't bite if you take me down under. - herd ref, DT is south and therefore DOWN UNDA
+1 | definitely got that this was the Throat
I know you're older but I promise I'm mature! - he's just a bit older than her
+1 | age reference
Let's get down to pillow talk; are you into hide and seek? - filler
-1 | also misleading as this makes me think of a character who has magic to hide or something like that
Gonna plunder you like you're a chest of gold. - he is the golden prince!
+1 | LT reference
5 - 3 = 2
2/3 is a fail from me
This was a really, really cool stealth, and I don't want you to be discouraged by this. But the fluff you put in was so specific that it became misleading. We were all looking for a character with hiding magic who was a virgin, as those are very notable things. If you use fluff in the future, make sure it's VERY innocuous. For example:
Scream it to the gospel, you're going to shed that white veil for me (for his white hair or something).
Please let me know if you need any help whatsoever!
-1 | I really want to give you a +1 for this, but the 'ear to hoof' part has nothing to do with the scar and that's misleading
Oh, don't worry about those chilly aches - its about to get hot in here - bio says that the scar aches when it's chilly
+1 | on profile
You're gonna find religion right here in these arms, honey. - bio says he's very religious
+1 | also on profile and very true
Scream it to the gospel, you gotta shed that virginal veil for the likes of me. - filler
-1 | this is definitely misleading since he's not a virgin at all
Don't worry, doll, I won't bite if you take me down under. - herd ref, DT is south and therefore DOWN UNDA
+1 | definitely got that this was the Throat
I know you're older but I promise I'm mature! - he's just a bit older than her
+1 | age reference
Let's get down to pillow talk; are you into hide and seek? - filler
-1 | also misleading as this makes me think of a character who has magic to hide or something like that
Gonna plunder you like you're a chest of gold. - he is the golden prince!
+1 | LT reference
5 - 3 = 2
2/3 is a fail from me
This was a really, really cool stealth, and I don't want you to be discouraged by this. But the fluff you put in was so specific that it became misleading. We were all looking for a character with hiding magic who was a virgin, as those are very notable things. If you use fluff in the future, make sure it's VERY innocuous. For example:
Scream it to the gospel, you're going to shed that white veil for me (for his white hair or something).
Please let me know if you need any help whatsoever!
