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05-29-2016, 05:41 PM
Every rose has its thorns. You'd know.
- Horn is described as "decorated with razor sharp rose thorns"
+1 | Appearance. Great clue.
You've wandered. Is it true not all who wander are lost? Or are you truly lost?
- Outcast
0 | Rank. This was far too vague to me to clue into an outcast, I was instead looking for someone whose history had something to do with wandering or travelling far or someone who was in fact lost, but it isn't too misleading so you didn't lose out.
Whatever. It's not a complete disaster.
- Name reference to the Chernobyl Disaster. (first hit on google)
0 | Name. Not sure what I'd have to search for to get chernobyl, but searching disaster or even complete disaster doesn't yield this.
You seem pretty cautious, mysterious even...
- Personality ref: profile describes her as distant, quiet, secretly romantic and history is incomplete.
0 | Personality. Cautious is different from all of those things, and history being incomplete would be more of an OOC/history clue.
Is you past as dark as you are?
- Color reference: Chernobyl is black with dark eyes.
0 | Appearance. Good clue but you already have one of this type, so 0 points.
Did you do something to earn that crown?
- Species reference: Unicorn.
+1 | Species. Careful, the language of earning and crown had me looking more for royalty/higher ranked characters, but ultimately I could see it so you got it.
I'm afraid to ask. I don't like being ordered around.
- Personality ref: profile describes her as bossy.
+1 | Personality. Clear enough.
You pace and pace. Relax, will you? I'm getting a headache.
- Breed reference: standardbreds are pacers.
0 | Breed. Eh, iffy because she's a "standardbred type" so not necessarily that specific breed. Also the rest of this line threw me off, I was looking for someone with head type magic or who was listed as being tense on their profile.
3/3 total is a pass from me.
- Horn is described as "decorated with razor sharp rose thorns"
+1 | Appearance. Great clue.
You've wandered. Is it true not all who wander are lost? Or are you truly lost?
- Outcast
0 | Rank. This was far too vague to me to clue into an outcast, I was instead looking for someone whose history had something to do with wandering or travelling far or someone who was in fact lost, but it isn't too misleading so you didn't lose out.
Whatever. It's not a complete disaster.
- Name reference to the Chernobyl Disaster. (first hit on google)
0 | Name. Not sure what I'd have to search for to get chernobyl, but searching disaster or even complete disaster doesn't yield this.
You seem pretty cautious, mysterious even...
- Personality ref: profile describes her as distant, quiet, secretly romantic and history is incomplete.
0 | Personality. Cautious is different from all of those things, and history being incomplete would be more of an OOC/history clue.
Is you past as dark as you are?
- Color reference: Chernobyl is black with dark eyes.
0 | Appearance. Good clue but you already have one of this type, so 0 points.
Did you do something to earn that crown?
- Species reference: Unicorn.
+1 | Species. Careful, the language of earning and crown had me looking more for royalty/higher ranked characters, but ultimately I could see it so you got it.
I'm afraid to ask. I don't like being ordered around.
- Personality ref: profile describes her as bossy.
+1 | Personality. Clear enough.
You pace and pace. Relax, will you? I'm getting a headache.
- Breed reference: standardbreds are pacers.
0 | Breed. Eh, iffy because she's a "standardbred type" so not necessarily that specific breed. Also the rest of this line threw me off, I was looking for someone with head type magic or who was listed as being tense on their profile.
3/3 total is a pass from me.
