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Stealth II [Tor to World's Edge]

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#9
03-06-2013, 10:20 AM
I would pass this stealth (Please keep in mind that my vote does not count as the 'admin' vote.)

Shedding your downy feather; Really interesting clue, but I would fail this aspect for two reasons: If instead of 'bird' you said 'dove', Tor's becoming more white would be relevant, but as birds can be any colour, this didn't resonate with me. As for her shedding her coat - fabulous clue, except Tor didn't shed her feathers, so ultimately, I don't believe this clue applied in the way you intended.

So warm and sweet; Excellent reference to both apperaence and personality. Great double clue.

Lost; Great reference to the Grey/the Edge.

Why do you weep Excellent.
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Stealth II [Tor to World's Edge] - by Hellena - 03-04-2013, 04:51 AM
RE: Stealth II - by Phaedra - 03-04-2013, 10:52 AM
RE: Stealth II - by Hellena - 03-04-2013, 03:44 PM
RE: Stealth II - by Ophelia - 03-04-2013, 07:19 PM
RE: Stealth II - by Hellena - 03-04-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Stealth II - by Midas - 03-05-2013, 10:54 AM
RE: Stealth II - by Hellena - 03-05-2013, 04:10 PM
RE: Stealth II - by Hellena - 03-06-2013, 05:49 AM
RE: Stealth II - by Odd - 03-06-2013, 10:20 AM
RE: Stealth II - by Boom Boom - 03-06-2013, 06:22 PM
RE: Stealth II - by Angora - 03-06-2013, 08:11 PM

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