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Ancient Child [Voided]

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Cormac sought to steal TIAMAT
Ancient child don't be weary
The time for beating yourself against the ground is through
-Reference to her youth and her coat color. She is a blue dun like the ocean which is ancient and beats against the shore

Perhaps a lion, but always a lamb
-Ref to her lions tail and sweet personality
If you're not careful
Your frail bird's bone will snap
-Ref to her horn which is hollow like a bird's bone

Met by kindness and a caring soul
Your heart will not thaw if you stay where you are
-Tiamat was welcomed to Helovia by Lena who is very kind and decides to join Aurora Basin which is a land of ice and snow, therefore no melting.

Come with me and join the crew
'Cause here, you'll find family too
-Ref to how she thinks the ocean and sky are her parents, both of which can be found in the Endless Blue

Every day I shall await breathless
For your arrival
Come to me by day
You need not hide anything from me
-Color ref: she has markings that look like water streaks that can only be seen in the light or by day.

Although you keep them close to heart, they have already been forgotten
-Ref to her parents and how she doesn't remember her real mother and father, but keeps her imagined parents close to her heart.

[If anyone has any suggestions on how to make my steals better let me know as this is my first try. :)]


Messages In This Thread
Ancient Child [Voided] - by Cormac - 04-13-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Ancient Child - by Osiris - 04-13-2013, 12:22 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Cormac - 04-13-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Prometheus - 04-13-2013, 04:02 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Cormac - 04-13-2013, 05:25 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Kri - 04-14-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: Ancient Child - by Mauja - 04-14-2013, 10:57 AM
RE: Ancient Child - by Cormac - 04-14-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: Ancient Child - by Ophelia - 04-14-2013, 02:12 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Cormac - 04-14-2013, 04:42 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Paladin - 04-15-2013, 12:11 AM
RE: Ancient Child - by Mauja - 04-15-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: Ancient Child - by Sielu - 04-15-2013, 07:41 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Cormac - 04-15-2013, 07:42 PM
RE: Ancient Child - by Cormac - 04-15-2013, 07:50 PM
RE: Ancient Child [Judge Please! :)] - by Tamme - 04-15-2013, 08:13 PM
RE: Ancient Child [Judge Please! :)] - by Mauja - 04-16-2013, 04:24 AM
RE: Ancient Child [Judge Please! :)] - by Tamme - 04-17-2013, 11:22 AM

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