the Rift


Round 2

Knox Posts: 262
Outcast atk: 4 | def: 7.5 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 17hh :: 7 Years [Tallsun] HP: 67.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Jen
#6
Adrixaura will remain at Knox's side.

Just another's all you need
She's already been stolen once, doesn't need another captor. Also foal ref.

You're arriving and coming to which time has been divided
She arrives in the foothills to Knox, who is 'divided' into his ancestors from different times

Your flying has been stripped of you, unfortunately
Prisoner, her bird companion died

Tell me, was it sad? Or did you even care?
Personality Ref

Acceptance never hurt anyone
Her reluctance to accept Knox's offer

I wouldn't prefer to call you a stranger

What a shame of how you match so perfectly
Similar personality traits

A rare sight but could we be allies?
The sound pattern is clear and passes through without much thought

There's only one place I know can hide that coat
Trapped in the foothills, where she can easily be hidden in trees and shadows etc.

The stained and depthless apperception is not healthy
Reference to Knox as her captor: his blinding magic, murderer=blood"stained", ancestral minds magic as his mental perception, and could be called unhealthy

But who am I to talk?

Tell me, is you're father still around?
Or did you leave that curiosity behind?
Strong History ref

It's impossible to drop the ink on that hueless paper any longer
Strong appearance ref- white with black spotting that looks like ink drops

It's time to come where I personally think you belong
Going back to the assassins


Messages In This Thread
Round 2 - by Chemical - 05-18-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: Round 2 - by Prometheus - 05-19-2013, 05:43 AM
RE: Round 2 - by Chemical - 05-19-2013, 09:07 AM
RE: Round 2 - by Ophelia - 05-19-2013, 06:39 PM
RE: Round 2 - by Chemical - 05-19-2013, 07:24 PM
RE: Round 2 - by Knox - 05-19-2013, 07:47 PM
RE: Round 2 - by Chemical - 05-19-2013, 08:26 PM

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