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Wanted [Kri to Basin]

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Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#16
A desperate companion willing to do anything to
help smoke jumpers reach safety.

Smoke Jumpers use parchutes, and count highly on the wind to land safely near forest fires.
Kri was desperate enough to kill her own child for her wind magic.
Kri's wind magic would be very useful to help them to safety.


Fail; Based on the clue itself, and not your description, this seems misleading. Two words to describe Kri are certainly not desperate and/or with a companion. If there were an actual reference to wind, I might have passed it, but it's simply too vague to be passable for reference to her magic.


Must be immune to ash and dust, and able
to put
out flames. No matter the time.
Killed the Phoenix of Time -ash/flames/time.

Would prefer an extensive background in fire fighting. It is not really necessary, as we offer on the job training.
Has fought her whole life, and always seems to be doing teaching spars.

Pass - I really struggled with this one. Immunity to ash and dust doesn't serve as a colour reference, she hasn't fought specifically fire creatures, she isn't immune to ash and dust. BUT. She was able to put out the flames (of the phoenix), and this is stated on her profile. However, I'd be really carefully about trying to combine too many clues into one. There is nothing in this that would refer to her doing teaching spars.

You should not be afraid of wildlife. Grizzly Bears and Grey Wolves largely inhabit the state of Montana.

Kri is so tough I don't think there is any "wildlife" that would phase her. She's been in plenty of fights with the wolves on the site too. She went head to head with Adalwulf which means noble wolf in German.

Montana is known as Big Sky Country. Suppose to be pegasus reference..

Fail: I found no reason to associate this clue to Kri. A better clue would have been to specific creatures that she fought (even the crab things, on the beach right now). And as Tamme mentioned, the bears and wolves are misleading due to capitalization as well as being a part of Montana, and not the clue, as I read it.

Pay will depend on willingness to work.
Kri has attempted to work with the Basin, but when believing Athena was stolen, and thought her trespassing herd members were treated horribly she challenged Psyche. With the Qian and Throat recently trying to steal the Basin's babies. This is "pay" back.

Fail - There is nothing on her profile about this, for starters. Secondly, this seemed like a blatent reference to the Gray/an actual contract, rather than merely 'attempting to work with'

There is exactly 8 sentences for Kri's age.
Pass

Only 2 for me, therefore I would fail this overall.


Messages In This Thread
Wanted [Kri to Basin] - by Faelene - 07-30-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: Wanted - by Mirage - 07-30-2013, 07:18 PM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 07-30-2013, 08:56 PM
RE: Wanted - by Mirage - 07-30-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 07-30-2013, 09:29 PM
RE: Wanted - by Eris_ - 07-31-2013, 04:10 PM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 07-31-2013, 09:32 PM
RE: Wanted - by Destrier - 07-31-2013, 09:53 PM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 08-01-2013, 02:01 PM
RE: Wanted - by Mirage - 08-02-2013, 03:40 AM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 08-02-2013, 08:26 AM
RE: Wanted - by Phaedra - 08-02-2013, 08:57 AM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 08-02-2013, 09:04 AM
RE: Wanted - by Faelene - 08-04-2013, 07:53 PM
RE: Wanted - by Tamme - 08-04-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: Wanted - by Odd - 08-05-2013, 07:59 PM
RE: Wanted - by Dingo - 08-06-2013, 09:53 PM

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