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Temptress [Destry Armor to Hotaru]

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
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Black satin kisses :: Destry has a black coat and muzzle
+1 - makes sense to me

My birthday gift to you beneath hot summer skies :: Tallsun birthday
+1 - also makes sense, visible information

Daddy's not around to tell you it's wrong :: Father Azzaron died in Helovia, triples as relationship, history, and lineage clue
+1 - dead dad reference works lol

His brave little girl so lonely :: Left her mother, says Aurelia is her only real friend. Gender clue. Personality clue - described as brave.
+1 - gender clue
+1 - personality clue
0 - just because she only has one friend doesnt make her lonely!

I'll kiss your sadness away :: Depressed is in her personality summary
-1 - I'm with Aud, depression isn't sadness

So interchangeable, indecisive, cold to hot, reverse of every idiom :: Interchangeable/indecisive alludes to her being a hybrid. Cold to hot, was born in the Basin but now lives in the Throat. The idiom is 'hot to cold' and the words were added to point to the importance of the fact it was reversed.
0 - indecisive to me, doesn't say "hybrid". Interchangeable makes me think that they switch back and forth, not that she exists as both in tandem
-1 - this was really confusing to me. Since it was all one sentence/phrase, the reverse could have applied to the rest of this too. When I was trying to solve this, this particular piece didn't make sense to me

I'm the embodiment of everything you hesitate to be :: Hotaru is shamelessly bisexual while Destry's profile details her conflict over her sexuality, finding it wrong for a while but eventually accepting it in the future. Thus hesitate instead of a more permanent wording.
0 - nothing about this points to sexuality or even preference

5-2 = 3
3 from me, so PASS


Messages In This Thread
Temptress [Destry Armor to Hotaru] - by Hotaru - 08-27-2014, 04:06 PM
RE: Temptress - by Bellona - 08-27-2014, 11:12 PM
RE: Temptress - by Blu - 08-27-2014, 11:32 PM
RE: Temptress - by Hotaru - 08-27-2014, 11:32 PM
RE: Temptress - by Morir - 08-27-2014, 11:46 PM
RE: Temptress - by Hotaru - 08-27-2014, 11:52 PM
RE: Temptress - by Cirrus - 08-28-2014, 01:48 AM
RE: Temptress - by Hotaru - 08-28-2014, 02:19 AM
RE: Temptress - by Sacre - 08-28-2014, 04:29 PM
RE: Temptress - by Hotaru - 08-28-2014, 05:42 PM
RE: Temptress - by Aurelia - 08-28-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: Temptress - by Cera - 08-28-2014, 10:00 PM
RE: Temptress - by Midas - 08-29-2014, 08:16 AM
RE: Temptress - by Hotaru - 08-29-2014, 01:06 PM
RE: Temptress - by Hotaru - 08-30-2014, 06:13 PM
RE: Temptress - by Odd - 08-31-2014, 11:08 AM
RE: Temptress - by Tamme - 08-31-2014, 08:11 PM

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