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You've got one phone call. [Gaucho Moon Amulet to Sheba]

Rayo the Reindeer Posts: 18
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Thief! Thief! You've been caught redhanded!
marking ref: Gaucho has a red handprint tribal marking
+1 | Excellent marking reference.
-1 | I'm so on the fence about the, "Thief! Thief!" portion of this line. I can see how it goes with the line, but ultimately it was extremely misleading to me. I was looking for sneak-ranked characters.

What will the world say when they see their golden boy behind these heavy bars?
gender ref: the "boy" in "golden boy"; color ref: the "golden" and "heavy bars" hint at Gaucho's color (according to his profile, dun with "heavy barring")
+1 | Gender reference.
0 | Golden - Gaucho is not golden, but to me, misunderstanding this clue didn't detract from the stealth or mislead.
+1 | Marking reference.

Will your family be disappointed? Or will they leave you to rot here, just as you left them?
history ref: Gaucho left Helovia for a time after the darkness, leaving his mate and daughter behind
+1 | History reference.

+4/-1 = 3/3 | PASS.


Messages In This Thread
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Paladin - 08-28-2014, 03:59 PM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Sheba - 08-28-2014, 04:11 PM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Midas - 08-29-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Illynx - 08-29-2014, 08:56 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Sacre - 08-29-2014, 09:19 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Sheba - 08-29-2014, 10:38 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Illynx - 08-29-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Sheba - 08-29-2014, 12:09 PM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Midas - 08-31-2014, 11:45 PM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Sheba - 09-01-2014, 12:47 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Sevin - 09-01-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Tamme - 09-01-2014, 11:00 AM
RE: You've got one phone call. - by Rayo - 09-01-2014, 11:58 AM

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