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12-31-2014, 12:28 AM
By my verdict: GAUCHO is the winner!
ROSKULD
Realism [+3.5]
Critical hits are literally the most damage you could possibly take! I appreciated what you wrote, particularly the realism, but I feel such an important rolled deemed a slightly more permanent wound. However, I thought you did an excellent job with the series of very dramatic rolls! A critical hit and a critical miss were big deals and you handled them well.
Emotion [+2]
Roskuld is always so full of anger and rage, but I appreciated the fact that she was able to take an honest look at herself and let her emotions control her anyway.
Prose [+4.5]
Can you imagine if wars were actually started with this? "I dunno, man."
Wonderful<3
Readability [+2]
Very easily readable
Finally tally: 11.5 + (12*2) = 46.5 HP
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GAUCHO
Realism [+3.5]
With the first post, you rolled a 5, which is the second highest level of damage you can take. However, I felt that it was not the intensity or length of damage that it should have been. Still, I think you managed to make up for it very well in your continuing posts!
Emotion [+2]
I loved the very deep arguments going on with himself about Roskuld's gender. It was very humorous and great to read.
Prose [+4]
You had very good prose and great readability through out this battle with almost no grammatical errors that I could find. The area that I would work on improving would just be flow. While everything was very easy to read, you could improve with some transitions.
Readability [+2]
Very easily readable.
Finally tally: 58 + (11.5 * 2) = 81 HP
