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[JUDGED] Wan island sun [open]

Elsa the Icebound Posts: 644
World's Edge Protector atk: 6 | def: 10.5 | dam: 6
Mare :: Pegasus :: 16.2 Hands :: Six (Frostfall) HP: 73 | Buff: BULK
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Her eyes traced over the mysterious woman repeatedly. Upon the first once-over, she couldn’t help but feel inferior. This woman, more like goddess was much more gifted in the way of vanity. She was as pure as the snow itself, but held the beautifying marks of the rising dawn among her hair. A long, white spiral protruded from her head. It was a scene that Elsa had only been able to imagine in her head as a child. Growing up around few unicorns, she relied heavily on her parent’s descriptions of the magnificent creatures that lived across the seas from their homeland. Upon the second once over, she noticed the woman's pure physique. She looked like she could put up a fight.

Now, however, was not the time to dole out compliments. The Ice Queens words were simple and contrite, getting right to the point. Elsa did feel a little ashamed that the queen felt the need to hide her name. Was she wanted? Would Elsa have recognized her name if Ophelia had spoken it? Such questions would remain unanswered as Ophelia waited patiently for her in the sand.

Elsa stepped into the pit, not relishing the feeling. Her mind suddenly flipped back to the dark cave hidden away in the Heart. That place held too many painful, and unforgettably wonderful memories. The way these grains rubbed against her feet were a bittersweet reminder of the past. She could not live there, for now was the present. Living in the past would only cause more damage than harm.

Ophelia wasted no time in her thoughts, as she quickly began to close the distance. That is when Elsa noticed a large, scaly dragon pop off her back in a swoop. Her eyes widened, how had she not noticed such a large creature? Its pallid scales matched the purity of its bonded, in both grace and beauty. The distraction came at a cost. Elsa noticed from the corner of her right, as Ophelia closed the distance much quicker than she had anticipated. Pearly white teeth shined in the dawning light before snapping down upon the hair on her left side.

The hair had been lying close to her neck, sticking there from the sweat of her daily training. Although the training had been helpful in training her to turn to her blind side, it proved to be detrimental at the moment. Ophelia’s teeth clenched upon a slight bit of skin, when aiming for the hair. It pinched the skin that was about halfway between the crest, and the bottom of her neck. Elsa yelped, and pushed off with her strong hindquarters to pull away from Ophelia, hopefully moving down the Ice Queens right side.

Unbeknownst to Elsa, by doing this she had avoided taking a unicorn horn to the side. That for sure would’ve left some stories to be told. They would probably go along the lines of ’I used to be a fighter like you once, until I took a unicorn horn to the belly’, that would be such a stupid way to be incapacitated.

However stories were for the future, and for now, she needed to be in the present. Being in the present seemed to be something Elsa lacked. So getting back in the game, she quickly came up with her next plan.

Ophelia, if she hadn’t moved by this point, would be on her left side. This was a very bad position. Elsa could not see Icy, and this was dangerous territory. As she moved forward a few more steps, she reached out her teeth and hoped to clamp down upon the flank of Ophelia’s right side. Although Elsa did not like having a butt in her face, it was very useful. Quickly maneuvering, Elsa went into a buck, attempting to pivot upon her front legs to hit Icy’s front right shoulder. If Elsa could take out the joints, this would be a very simple battle. However, fights were rarely that easy.

[664 words ;; 1/3 ;; training spar]
[Thanks for the comments, they were helpful in this so I hope I fixed/improved on some of the points! Also I know you wanted this done quickly, so let me know if this post came too slow/fast/or as you expected.]
[Summary :: Elsa attempted to bite Ophelia's flank and kick at her shoulder.]
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Messages In This Thread
Wan island sun [open] - by Ophelia - 10-01-2014, 12:05 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Elsa - 10-03-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Ophelia - 10-04-2014, 11:24 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Elsa - 10-09-2014, 04:32 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Ophelia - 10-11-2014, 05:18 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Elsa - 10-21-2014, 01:43 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Ophelia - 10-30-2014, 10:59 AM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Official - 11-23-2014, 04:30 PM
RE: Wan island sun [open] - by Official - 12-02-2014, 10:19 AM

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