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10-08-2014, 10:23 PM
FAIL
Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
//Appearance ref:: he is colored very similarly to Parelia, his mother
//Gender ref
+1| [Appearance ref] pretty straight forward
+1| [Gender ref] also easy to decipher
You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
//Breed/species ref:: can either refer to hybrid nature, or his many breeds of lineage
+1| [Breed ref] another straightforward one
Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
//Name ref:: Ilios is another name for Troy, of ancient mythology, written about by Homer. The sacking of Troy, Homer's Illiad...
-1| [Name ref] nothing about this points me to his name, and 'tragic demise' suggests he has died, or at least perhaps fallen from great graces/rank, which isn't the case, and what is overall made it a bit misleading. The only buzz word i really got from this was "the ancients" which revealed nothing to me about Ilios when I googled it, so on its own just suggests ancestors or possibly Helovia's gods which are sometimes referred to as Helvoia's ancients.
2/3 necessary to pass
You had some great, clear clues this time, it was just that last one was suddenly very vague and nonsensical. I definitely feel like you're improving though :)
Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
//Appearance ref:: he is colored very similarly to Parelia, his mother
//Gender ref
+1| [Appearance ref] pretty straight forward
+1| [Gender ref] also easy to decipher
You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
//Breed/species ref:: can either refer to hybrid nature, or his many breeds of lineage
+1| [Breed ref] another straightforward one
Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
//Name ref:: Ilios is another name for Troy, of ancient mythology, written about by Homer. The sacking of Troy, Homer's Illiad...
-1| [Name ref] nothing about this points me to his name, and 'tragic demise' suggests he has died, or at least perhaps fallen from great graces/rank, which isn't the case, and what is overall made it a bit misleading. The only buzz word i really got from this was "the ancients" which revealed nothing to me about Ilios when I googled it, so on its own just suggests ancestors or possibly Helovia's gods which are sometimes referred to as Helvoia's ancients.
2/3 necessary to pass
You had some great, clear clues this time, it was just that last one was suddenly very vague and nonsensical. I definitely feel like you're improving though :)
HP: 1100Helovia Hard Mode
