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Writing Style Critique

Arya Posts: 50
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I feel as if my writing style has become static and it's not improving. I'll be taking creative writing next quarter at college so hopefully I can grow a bit from that, but, I feel as though my roleplay writing style has different struggles than my fiction style.

Here are some issues I am aware of:
- Verb tense. It's really, really bad man. Luckily my English 101 helped me realize just how bad this is.
- Over all punctuation. Commas are my weakness.
- Word repetition.
- Cliche metaphors

So I'd love it if anyone could take some time out of their day and provide some general tips on how they feel I could improve. I am alright with somewhat harsh critique I just ask that you don't be absolutely ruthless.

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Messages In This Thread
Writing Style Critique - by Arya - 12-19-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: Writing Style Critique - by d'Artagnan - 12-19-2014, 07:33 PM
RE: Writing Style Critique - by Sikeax - 12-19-2014, 08:04 PM
RE: Writing Style Critique - by Maitimo - 12-19-2014, 11:19 PM

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