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Writing Style Critique

d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
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In terms of commas, just reading your post out loud might help? Then you might be able to tell when you need a pause for breath and when you don't. Plus checking a thesaurus is always good for word repetition! I'd say a lot of the time your writing can generally be improved by rereading or rereading out loud so you can actually hear what you've written.

I have this which is on tumblr (oh life) and its just a massive reference list specifically for writing, so have a scroll through and see if anything might help! :D http://www.bakura.co.uk/post/57446133866...g-resource

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Messages In This Thread
Writing Style Critique - by Arya - 12-19-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: Writing Style Critique - by d'Artagnan - 12-19-2014, 07:33 PM
RE: Writing Style Critique - by Sikeax - 12-19-2014, 08:04 PM
RE: Writing Style Critique - by Maitimo - 12-19-2014, 11:19 PM

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