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02-07-2015, 11:15 AM
You're such a tiny speck, your existence spits in the eye of true predators. Black panther companion, but since companions are smaller versions of their un-domesticated cousins, he is not a "true" predator-- "He is much smaller than his wild cousins".
-1 | 'You're' here is extremely misleading. The clue references her companion in which case the pronoun is inappropriate.
BUT [I actually don't know if I can do this, and so if one of the admins would like to correct me if not! I'm unclear if I'm allowed to give points for 'what I thought the clue meant', or if it has to be what the stealther intended to the clue to mean.]
+1 | Lots used this as a physical description of their characters when blocking. Given that Kiara IS small (13.2), and given that her companion IS a predator (and thus 'spitting' could be taken as a proximity reference) I would give a point here.
Your hide betrays your name, but there is something in your heart that comes quite close. The name "Kiara" = black, dark. She is red/white. However, she is "depressed" as noted in her personality, and depression is often referred to as a "dark" time/feeling.
+1 | I worried over this one a little. The clue regarding her name is great, but I got iffy on the depression = black = heart thing. As someone who has depression I don't associate it with my heart at all. BUT insofar as heart is the metaphorical link to touchy-feely things, I'm okay with it.
You betrayed yourself once, letting your dedication falter. History reference & Personality Reference: After hearing Sun God and Spark God talk she doubted her loyalty to the Moon Goddess, which betrayed her loyal personality.
+1 | Yep, clearly on her profile.
Such a shame that you don't know the bastard that planted you. Father = unknown.
+1 | Also clearly found on her profile.
IF I'm allowed to do a -1/+1 on clue on, then this is a 3/3 PASS from me.
If not, it's a 2/3 fail.
-1 | 'You're' here is extremely misleading. The clue references her companion in which case the pronoun is inappropriate.
BUT [I actually don't know if I can do this, and so if one of the admins would like to correct me if not! I'm unclear if I'm allowed to give points for 'what I thought the clue meant', or if it has to be what the stealther intended to the clue to mean.]
+1 | Lots used this as a physical description of their characters when blocking. Given that Kiara IS small (13.2), and given that her companion IS a predator (and thus 'spitting' could be taken as a proximity reference) I would give a point here.
Your hide betrays your name, but there is something in your heart that comes quite close. The name "Kiara" = black, dark. She is red/white. However, she is "depressed" as noted in her personality, and depression is often referred to as a "dark" time/feeling.
+1 | I worried over this one a little. The clue regarding her name is great, but I got iffy on the depression = black = heart thing. As someone who has depression I don't associate it with my heart at all. BUT insofar as heart is the metaphorical link to touchy-feely things, I'm okay with it.
You betrayed yourself once, letting your dedication falter. History reference & Personality Reference: After hearing Sun God and Spark God talk she doubted her loyalty to the Moon Goddess, which betrayed her loyal personality.
+1 | Yep, clearly on her profile.
Such a shame that you don't know the bastard that planted you. Father = unknown.
+1 | Also clearly found on her profile.
IF I'm allowed to do a -1/+1 on clue on, then this is a 3/3 PASS from me.
If not, it's a 2/3 fail.
