QIAN Vs EDGE INVASION :: QIAN Rubrics

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10-05-2012, 01:35 PM

T o r a s i n

TORASIN -- Round 2

[Realism]
- 1| Typically it is unwise to have your character fall over during battle, and I don't feel it was really necessary in his case.
+ 1| DEFENSE: using Torasin's magic to heal it after being cut.
+ 1| DEFENSE: sidestepping to avoid Alan's ram/horn slash.
+ 1| ATTACK: Kiba claws at Alan's back
0| ATTACK: Kicking at Alan. I don't think this is feasible due to time constraints, but I do enjoy your bit about his legs getting shock.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 2| Emotion
+ 1| Flow

TORASIN -- Round 3

[Realism]
+ 1| DEFENSE: Rearing to avoid the jab to the chest, albeit goaded by Kiba.
+ 1| ATTACK: Blocking Alan's escape route by throwing his body toward her.
- 1| DEFENSE: Allowing a knee to be fractured is a serious injury that would likely cripple Torasin, not just make it difficult to walk.
+ 1| Trying to get Aurelius to turn back toward Torasin

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Flow

TORASIN -- Round 4

KNOCKED OUT

TORASIN -- Round 5 (defense only)

KNOCKED OUT

TORASIN

[Bonus]
+ 1| Using healing magic on himself.
+ 1| Kiba as a distraction/intimidation tactic.

[Injuries]
- 1| Fractured knee.

[Creativity]
+ 1| I love that Torasin is rather out of sorts since he is a healer in the middle of the battle.

Comments: I really enjoyed reading Torasin's posts, but for future reference, it is probably best not to break bones. Especially for wild horses, it is extremely hard to recover from leg injuries. Ultimately, aim for a bruised bone or a sprain next time.

TOTAL
Torasin - 13