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QIAN Vs EDGE INVASION :: EDGE Rubrics

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ARABELLA - KNOCKED OUT

CHALLENGER -- Round 2

[Realism]
0| Not clear how Arabella was trying to distract Mirage from Korra
+ 1| ATTACK: Horn aimed at Lace

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion - very good emotion! I really got the feel of Arabella here
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 3

[Realism]
+ 1| DEFENSE: Very realistic response to be barreled over by a shire! This was refreshing!
+ 1| ATTACK: Slashing at Archibald angrily. I loved this.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 2| Emotion - her emotion is clear and so awesome!
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 5
Knocked out


CHALLENGER

[Bonus]
+ 1| Mentioning two different body type sizes between her and Archibald

[Creativity]
+ 1| Emotion was so good!

Comments: I wish I could have read more. You are a very balanced fighter.

TOTAL
Challenger - 12





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RE: QIAN Vs EDGE INVASION :: EDGE Rubrics - by Official - 10-05-2012, 01:47 PM

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