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05-06-2016, 10:26 PM
Beowulf was sought
The feline says: "A Mari Usque Ad Mare"
--Companion: "A Mari Usque Ad Mare" is the motto of Canada (easily found by googling,) and Beowulf has a Canadian Lynx (type of feline) companion.
+1 | companion - good!
The past says: "Medical Innovative Products to Prevent Atrophy"
--History: "Medical Innovative Products to Prevent Atrophy" is the slogan for a medical company called Niveus (easily found by googling,) and Niveus is the name of Beowulf's homeland.
0 | this was too far removed for me. If when you searched "medical innovative..." the word "Beowulf" came up, that would be one thing. But this is Niveus and THEN you have to also connect Beowulf to that.
The face says: "SPQR"
--Appearance: "SPQR" is an acronym for the motto of the roman republic (easily found by googling,) and Beowulf has a roman nose.
+1 | this is really clever! I liked this
But you, stronger than I,
--Fight Status: Beowulf's strength stat is higher than Knox's.
+1 | Yup!
You hold your tongue most times.
--Personality: Personality says he is quiet a lot.
+1 | also yep! on profile
Were you silent when you met your first queen of the sky?
--History: Elsa (Both World's Edge Queen and Disney Queen) was the first pegasus Beowulf ever met.
0 | If this had some other indicator, it would be a good clue. However as it is, was he silent? Did he talk? What does this have to do with the character? To me, this isn't a clue but fluff because it doesn't tell me anything about Beowulf.
4/3 pass :D
The feline says: "A Mari Usque Ad Mare"
--Companion: "A Mari Usque Ad Mare" is the motto of Canada (easily found by googling,) and Beowulf has a Canadian Lynx (type of feline) companion.
+1 | companion - good!
The past says: "Medical Innovative Products to Prevent Atrophy"
--History: "Medical Innovative Products to Prevent Atrophy" is the slogan for a medical company called Niveus (easily found by googling,) and Niveus is the name of Beowulf's homeland.
0 | this was too far removed for me. If when you searched "medical innovative..." the word "Beowulf" came up, that would be one thing. But this is Niveus and THEN you have to also connect Beowulf to that.
The face says: "SPQR"
--Appearance: "SPQR" is an acronym for the motto of the roman republic (easily found by googling,) and Beowulf has a roman nose.
+1 | this is really clever! I liked this
But you, stronger than I,
--Fight Status: Beowulf's strength stat is higher than Knox's.
+1 | Yup!
You hold your tongue most times.
--Personality: Personality says he is quiet a lot.
+1 | also yep! on profile
Were you silent when you met your first queen of the sky?
--History: Elsa (Both World's Edge Queen and Disney Queen) was the first pegasus Beowulf ever met.
0 | If this had some other indicator, it would be a good clue. However as it is, was he silent? Did he talk? What does this have to do with the character? To me, this isn't a clue but fluff because it doesn't tell me anything about Beowulf.
4/3 pass :D
