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by the lake [SPICE to KNOX]

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#12
Lax and
--Personality: Profile says she is relaxed, first thing
-1 | The definition of lax is: not sufficiently strict, severe, or careful. Nothing on her profile suggests that she is any of these things.

Lanky
--Appearance: Has long legs
+1 | Appearance

Little
--Age: Young, only 2
0 | Almost get a -1 here, because 15hh isn't little. Little and young are not the same, especially without any contextual clues that this was age related.

Lone
--Rank: outcast
+1 | Rank

Lakeside local
--History: Born by a lake
0 | being born by a lake, and living beside a lake, are different.

Lady:
--Gender: Female
+1 | Gender

Alight!
--Species: has wings and can thus "alight" like a bird; this is the first definition of the word when googling it.
+1 | Species. Quite clever!



3/3 is a pass from me.

@Spice to Knox


Messages In This Thread
by the lake [SPICE to KNOX] - by Knox - 06-20-2016, 10:33 PM
RE: by the lake - by Ophelia - 06-20-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: by the lake - by Rexanna - 06-21-2016, 03:47 PM
RE: by the lake - by Knox - 06-21-2016, 03:50 PM
RE: by the lake - by Knox - 06-21-2016, 03:51 PM
RE: by the lake - by Parelia - 06-21-2016, 04:16 PM
RE: by the lake - by Ovidius - 06-21-2016, 07:56 PM
RE: by the lake - by Tembovu - 06-22-2016, 05:54 AM
RE: by the lake - by Knox - 06-22-2016, 12:03 PM
RE: by the lake - by Knox - 06-23-2016, 11:53 AM
RE: by the lake - by Bunnie - 06-23-2016, 12:06 PM
RE: by the lake - by Odd - 06-23-2016, 01:59 PM

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