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Ulrik the Engineer Posts: 235
Deceased atk: 5.5 | def: 9.0 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.1 hh :: 11 HP: 69.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kirchoff :: Common Hellhound :: Superspeed Tamme
#14
Aren’t you sick of the ancient ways?
Personality Ref:: Primitive

0 | This was a point of contention, but if you go to thesaurus.com (which is the standard, English resource, ancient and primitive are not listed as synonyms. Ancient implies old or historically old. For example, the ancient romans were not primitive at all - they had water ways, plumbing, concrete, etc.

It is a shame your blood is mixed
Species Ref:: Hybrid

+1 | yup!

Come out of hiding little one, Rejection is the least of your worries
History Ref:: His mom Kept him in hiding for months “… afraid her herd would reject the colt.”

+1 | very good

Well you are not so little any more
Appearance Ref:: 17HH

+1 | Also very good!

Does your face seem extra sensitive, or is it just me?
Appearance :: “Has white feline-like whiskers sticking from his muzzle.”
Hmm Oh well…
::Fluff ::

-1 | This was really, really iffy for me. Ultimately it's a -1 instead of a 0 (0 for second appearance reference) because sensitive face reminds me alot of sensitive skin or skin issues. If you had put something like "heightened senses" or "better sense of width" (since cats use them to determine width) then it would just be a 0.


2/3 is a fail from me

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Messages In This Thread
Different - by Raeden - 07-24-2016, 12:19 AM
RE: Different - by Ovidius - 07-24-2016, 01:09 AM
RE: Different - by Raeden - 07-24-2016, 10:10 AM
RE: Different - by Ashamin - 07-25-2016, 10:17 AM
RE: Different - by Raeden - 07-25-2016, 10:23 AM
RE: Different - by Rikyn - 07-25-2016, 10:45 AM
RE: Different - by Själ - 07-25-2016, 10:48 AM
RE: Different - by Gaucho - 07-25-2016, 01:08 PM
RE: Different - by Raeden - 07-25-2016, 10:19 PM
RE: Different - by Darwin - 07-25-2016, 11:29 PM
RE: Different - by Raeden - 07-26-2016, 12:35 AM
RE: Different - by Bunnie - 07-27-2016, 11:30 AM
RE: Different - by Odd - 07-27-2016, 11:36 AM
RE: Different - by Ulrik - 07-27-2016, 12:08 PM

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