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09-27-2016, 03:51 PM
You remind me of the mountain peaks (physical appearance: creamy white coat colour, white hair, grey on muzzle and hooves)
0 - this is unfortunately a zero from me! I think of grey, not white, when I hear mountain peaks., especially without a winter reference to hint at snow.
Though you are anything but cold (personality reference: sociable, kindhearted, joyous, exciteable)
+1 - yep!
Your scent is of the earth, the sky forbidden from your kind (species reference: equine)
+1 - yep!
But I imagine you dream aloud despite your limitations (magic reference: can create aural and visual illusions in another’s mind by singing about what she wants them to see and hear)
0 - there is too much in this line, and it overwhelms amd cheapens the efficacy of your clue!
In contempt for your warm façade, you hide your true intentions
-1 - I agree that this feels misleading.
I should guard my heart, lest you take it in the night (rank reference – thief)
+1 - yep!
2/3 is a fail from me
0 - this is unfortunately a zero from me! I think of grey, not white, when I hear mountain peaks., especially without a winter reference to hint at snow.
Though you are anything but cold (personality reference: sociable, kindhearted, joyous, exciteable)
+1 - yep!
Your scent is of the earth, the sky forbidden from your kind (species reference: equine)
+1 - yep!
But I imagine you dream aloud despite your limitations (magic reference: can create aural and visual illusions in another’s mind by singing about what she wants them to see and hear)
0 - there is too much in this line, and it overwhelms amd cheapens the efficacy of your clue!
In contempt for your warm façade, you hide your true intentions
-1 - I agree that this feels misleading.
I should guard my heart, lest you take it in the night (rank reference – thief)
+1 - yep!
2/3 is a fail from me
Any violence/magic is allowed to be used upon Dragomir at anytime, permitting it doesn't kill or seriously maim him without my permission <3
