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Opportunity makes a thief

Snow Posts: 7
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Snow
#10
There goes Mr. Roy G. Biv,
-Appearance clue: ROY G BIV are colors of rainbow spectrum and Misael has "colorful multi-hued coat."
+1 Yep! The first thing I did upon reading the stealth was google Mr Roy G Biv, so I was expecting a colourful character

flying his flag!
-Gender clue
+1 Yep!

Are you patriotic? …I don’t think you really care.
-Personality clue: from profile “doesn’t give a damn about you."
0 Too vague for me, and the 'patriotic' line threw me off from the rest of the clue

Would you even defend Old Glory? Or let her be lost with everything else?
-History clue: from profile “memory loss of his entire childhood”
-1 Too misleading, capitalising Old Glory made me google it and it was completely unrelated. I can see where you were going with the second part but 'let her be lost' made me think he'd lost a female mate/daughter etc in the past

My money’s on the latter...but at least you've still got your shadow, right?
Companion clue: Melantisic lion companion
+1 Yeah this made sense

Anyway, enjoy the lonely life ex-pat; I’ll stick with my country.
Rank clue: Outcast (recently from DT)
-1 I was in two minds with this one, but the thing that pushed it to a minus was the mention of 'I'll stick with my country', which made me think it was specifically someone outcast from Kianzo's herd, the Edge. Also, if you google ex-pat, it says 'an expatriate (often shortened to expat) is a person temporarily or permanently residing in a country other than that of the person's upbringing'. That means a character who is leaving their birth herd, which Misael didn't.

1/3 is a FAIL from me


Messages In This Thread
Opportunity makes a thief - by Kianzo - 03-21-2017, 11:30 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Brendan - 03-22-2017, 02:35 AM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Rikyn - 03-22-2017, 05:39 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Kianzo - 03-22-2017, 05:43 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Ampere - 03-22-2017, 10:28 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Rikyn - 03-23-2017, 12:19 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Kianzo - 03-24-2017, 05:30 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Blu - 03-24-2017, 11:16 PM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Charks - 03-25-2017, 09:26 AM
RE: Opportunity makes a thief - by Snow - 03-25-2017, 11:37 AM

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