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05-25-2017, 12:23 AM
Hey there! Welcome to Helovia!
There's just a few things I'd like to address with your application :) First, you've put Daya-Ra as an equine, however we tend to have pretty realistic restrictions when it comes to equine characters. The design would be fine if she were a unicorn, or if you had a large marking pass. However, if you wanted to continue to use the design as an equine, then she'd need to have a white body instead of pink, and no red in her mane or tail, though you could have one small odd colored marking!
Second, the word minimum has reduced recently to 150. Also, the question for "What companion/s can your character bond with?" is asking which of the mythical companions your character can bond with. She would also be able to bond with non species specific companions as well. You can find out which mythical she can bond with in the Guidebook! Third, the way you get stats is a specific location, you must have stats before you can spar, and you can also find the location of where you get your stats in the Guidebook :)
Lastly, you have the right idea for your quiz questions, however the second one still needs revision. Ophelia doesn't know about the death of his daughter, so she wouldn't know exactly what he's sad about.
Go ahead and review all these issues and go ahead and tag me when you've revised it so we can get you going! :) @Daya-Ra
There's just a few things I'd like to address with your application :) First, you've put Daya-Ra as an equine, however we tend to have pretty realistic restrictions when it comes to equine characters. The design would be fine if she were a unicorn, or if you had a large marking pass. However, if you wanted to continue to use the design as an equine, then she'd need to have a white body instead of pink, and no red in her mane or tail, though you could have one small odd colored marking!
Second, the word minimum has reduced recently to 150. Also, the question for "What companion/s can your character bond with?" is asking which of the mythical companions your character can bond with. She would also be able to bond with non species specific companions as well. You can find out which mythical she can bond with in the Guidebook! Third, the way you get stats is a specific location, you must have stats before you can spar, and you can also find the location of where you get your stats in the Guidebook :)
Lastly, you have the right idea for your quiz questions, however the second one still needs revision. Ophelia doesn't know about the death of his daughter, so she wouldn't know exactly what he's sad about.
Go ahead and review all these issues and go ahead and tag me when you've revised it so we can get you going! :) @Daya-Ra
