Better call the doctor; When do you see the doctor? When you're sick. Tio's eyes are described as, sickeningly vibrant acid green.
-- I think this is a brilliant clue, now that you've explained it.
Things are getting awkward.; History reference between he and Phae, where he awkwardly freaked out when he saw the Heart for the first time.
-- Great ref.
So muddy in your cage,; Colour reference: Brindle'd sooty dun. 'muddy + cage' gives you the brindling (cage = lines, muddy = colour)
-- I love how creative this color ref is <3
In the medieval age. : The medieval era was full of sexism. Tio is described as extremely sexist, believing in gender roles, etc.
-- Great.
Title L & P.C: L is the 12th letter of the alphabet (age), and P.C = 16.3, his height.
-- Brilliant.
I basically don't see anything wrong with this stealth. xD
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