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Prickly [Azucar to Edge]

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Filly :: Other :: 5'5 :: 23 HP: 10 | Buff: flail
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Prickly, a thistle
Prickly - both a reference to how she has a horn and the fact that her personality is anything but sweet (profile)

+ 1 Great species ref!
+ 1 Good Personality Clue
a thistle - she has lavender and purple colorations, like a thistle
+ 1 Clear Appearance Clue


With no roots
No roots - The was born in a land that has no name (forgotten form profile), and she has no family in Helovia. Her sister's location is unknown

+ 1 Solid history reference that makes sense upon reveal.

Lost in your own land
She's a little nutty in the head (psychopath). She can see the dead, and a few specific personalities talk to her. Your own "land" is her own head. Lost meaning that she struggles with recognizing reality.

+ 1 This clue actually works for me, how can someone be lost in their own land unless they're mad, the play on words is clever but not overly complicated. So, I pass this.

A solid, lattice stem
If you look up "solid lattice" in google it comes up with the word "crystal" in the title of most entries, so this does not require any specific scientific knowledge. However, just to inform, a lattice structure is when atoms arrange in a tightly packed lattice system that forms what we call a "crystalline structure". She has a horn made of crystal.

-1 So I was sat on the fence for a while on this, but for me the mention of Crystal only came up once in the google search and I wouldn't immediately pick up on that or think to. I'm also an absolute scientific drop out and I would think fence when I saw lattice xD So, yeh, personally I wouldn't have picked up on that.


Blend
An effort to try and blend into her own mind that she sees the dead, and she also is a psychopath trying to blend into her own environment.

-1 I have to agree with Boom and Dingo, I can't point this out on her profile and I honestly thought this was an appearance reference or a magic reference when reading it.

3 points overall I pass this stealth.

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Messages In This Thread
Prickly [Azucar to Edge] - by Paladin - 08-04-2013, 09:08 PM
RE: Prickly - by Deimos - 08-05-2013, 09:32 AM
RE: Prickly - by Paladin - 08-05-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: Prickly - by Deimos - 08-06-2013, 01:44 PM
RE: Prickly - by Paladin - 08-06-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Prickly - by Deimos - 08-07-2013, 08:27 AM
RE: Prickly - by Paladin - 08-07-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: Prickly - by Deimos - 08-09-2013, 09:45 AM
RE: Prickly - by Paladin - 08-09-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: Prickly - by Mauja - 08-09-2013, 01:01 PM
RE: Prickly - by Boom Boom - 08-09-2013, 10:21 PM
RE: Prickly - by Dingo - 08-09-2013, 10:49 PM
RE: Prickly - by imi - 08-12-2013, 05:46 PM

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