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[DROP] Last breath of a survivor

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Yuri

when you and I were forever wild.



The deep darkness saddened the mare, letting her small Arabian head hang low, her long ebony mane reached down, touching the awaiting forest floor. It dragged along the layer of pine needles, dusting the hard packed, root ridden forest floor. Her snow dipped legs, and stomach stood out against the endless night, the bolt of white streaking down the little mare's elegant dished face, before tinting a pink at her muzzle.

My bouncy, yet conserved trot carried its lithe body, through the wood. A faint crescendo of a deep, commotion perked my tiny ears. It caused me to raise my little head, and open my warm, amber eyes to the sound, batting my long eyelashes. Long hair caressed birdlike bones, gently swept in the light breeze.

The blur of horses in a crowd came into my view, as she approached the group. My dainty hooves pattered on the ground, she started to listen to the clearing voices. Someone was hurt. she peered through the mess of others, making her way, slowly to the front of the crowd. In the middle lay the creature, her body thin, and elegant, as my own. Her small rack of horns was decorated with a lessening number of burning prongs. the left the smallest, and most resplendent light. She looked limp, and as if she was dying, something I could easily figure out if I had not tuned out the noise. my eyes started to water at the sight. The helpless deer, laying in a mess of pine needles, and dirt. a creature of this beauty, and magnificence should be treated as a goddess, and not dying, and laying in the dirt. My tears started to fall, streaming gently from my ambry eyes.

I did not know any possible thing to say. I had no knowledge of healing, all I could do was comfort the doe. I walked up to the electric soul. The sight was truly saddening, It seemed as if few knew what to do. Neither did I, for that matter, so I kept my mouth shut.

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Messages In This Thread
Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 08-31-2013, 10:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 08-31-2013, 11:22 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sohalia - 08-31-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 08-31-2013, 11:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-01-2013, 12:45 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Myrddin - 09-01-2013, 10:17 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-01-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-12-2013, 08:09 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-16-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-24-2013, 06:27 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-29-2013, 07:08 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Raeden - 09-01-2013, 08:51 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-02-2013, 12:04 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-04-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-04-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-04-2013, 07:00 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-04-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-10-2013, 11:25 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-18-2013, 01:38 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-20-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-21-2013, 04:36 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-26-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Adalaide - 09-04-2013, 03:30 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Apache Renoen - 09-06-2013, 10:33 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-09-2013, 09:54 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-09-2013, 10:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-09-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-10-2013, 01:20 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-10-2013, 06:43 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-10-2013, 12:28 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Myrddin - 09-10-2013, 02:12 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-10-2013, 05:32 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Apache Renoen - 09-10-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Apache Renoen - 09-19-2013, 11:43 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Yuri - 09-10-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 09-11-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Raeden - 09-11-2013, 06:56 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-15-2013, 11:07 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-15-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-16-2013, 05:15 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Raeden - 09-16-2013, 08:02 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-16-2013, 10:10 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-16-2013, 10:25 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Yuri - 09-17-2013, 11:02 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-19-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-19-2013, 06:40 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 09-21-2013, 12:39 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-21-2013, 01:19 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-21-2013, 02:20 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-21-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-21-2013, 07:40 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 09-21-2013, 09:26 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-22-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-22-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-23-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-25-2013, 09:09 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-26-2013, 07:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-27-2013, 11:03 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-29-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-29-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 10-03-2013, 06:19 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 10-04-2013, 06:41 AM

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